Nameless Free!!
 

just to start, I fill in the part/
fill your face wit lead, and stop your heart/
come play wit me, but just play nice/
dont fuck around, or become a Human Sacrifice/
my game is shameless, dont push me/
your name is faceless, you a pussy/
you aint Unique like me, so just lay down/
you like freaks??, dont fuckin play, clown/
my free is finee, so now Im done/
this was D, sorrYY, no explantion!

u need to up ur vocab a bit..BUT the flow was nice nice...it went well short bars all the way through so the structure was good too *uno*

SB

thnx Yo, and I will up the Vocab, just tryin to learn words to flow wit them good

good job brotha! yeah, it had good flow, shouldve added a little on tha end. but up your vocab and u be rollin homie! =)