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??ANY QUESTIONS?? (feeed baccck please)

Step into my saftey deposit cuz I'm postive that life is a negative image/
The remrents of *HATE* got me prepared mentally like a post season *scrimmage*//1
*IM NOT THE BEST ONE OF MY KIND?* then revoke my mind and prove me wrong/
YOU PROLONG your opinion *but still haven't called me out~or wrote a hate song*//2
It's obvious~*IM HOLDING UR ATTENTION LIKE A HOSTAGE*~BLACK and spreading blood with pleasure like *BONDAGE*~*OH U TRYING TO CATCH MY TALENT *UR FEET PICKING UP MILEAGE*~MY RHYMES MAKE CLAY AIKEN *STEP OUT OF THE CLOSET*//3 (YOU CAN"T STOP IT)
IM ya LOLI POP chick *freezing~ya~crystals*/
Federal COP type shit *greasing~da~Pistals*//4
PAINT THE PICTURE OF THE PERSONA OF A FEMALE RIDDLA/
GOT THE TALENT TO MAKE U SHIVER~AND UR ARM HAIRS QUIVER//5
Got the voice to make water ripple~got the face to put a stand to ya man's pickle/
VERY INFLUENTIAL make da pad tickle da pencil~got you youngin's FRUSTRATED and poppin ya Pimples/6

SALUTATIONS~BE PREPARED CUZ BLUNTLY IS RAISING THE BAR FOR *ELEVATION*/
STARTING MY OWN REVELATIONS~PASSING ALL EXSPECTATIONS/
GOT A FLOW THAT'S IN HEAVY ROTATION AND VERY BLAITANT/
EVEN AS U READ IM DOWN IN MY BASEMENT~WRITTING NEW CREATIONS~YOUR TITLES ARE NOT SET IN CONCRETE *I AM UR REPLACEMENT*//7 :nono:

GET AT ME!! SPOKENBLUNTLY (KISS DA SKY)

lol some of this i thought was directed at a certain person or group of people lol....this is the best thing ive seen from a female on this site so you definetly holding it down spoken do your thing....ma i liked the vocab flow...it was real na mean stay up 1

lol ayo ma u know i stay wit subliminals in my rhymes...they'll figure it out...Yo thanks for da ups...STILLUPPIN *tootles*

SBizlle

lady lyrical only has 17 post so of course she hasnt seen any femcees better than u, spokenbluntly stay up home girl

thanks for da props breezy it's appreciated...*UPPIN*

SB

Yo, no lie, dat was nice. Keep doin ya thang gurl.

thanks for da props...tay (by the way u gots a creative lil name there..im feeling it) UPPIN*

SBIZZLE

what's up (ma), u know what im gonna say...lol, the shit was tight...stay up!!!!!!

yo thas hot right there best line (ya feet pickin up mileage) nice punchline do u

yoo lol u a bulli!!! taken it back to middle school lol yo thanks for da props pa *UPPIN*

SB

beezy i have 17 posts but i be lookin through this site all the time just havent posted much on the part also that i have no tyme lately to be up here all the tyme but this by far has been the best ive seen so thank you very much and 1

lol getting these girls ATTENTION (as usual though lol) AYO IM UPPIN THIS *ONE*

sb

It's obvious~*IM HOLDING UR ATTENTION LIKE A HOSTAGE*~BLACK and spreading blood with pleasure like *BONDAGE*~*OH U TRYING TO CATCH MY TALENT *UR FEET PICKING UP MILEAGE*~MY RHYMES MAKE CLAY AIKEN *STEP OUT OF THE CLOSET*//3 (YOU CAN"T STOP IT)

^^^ dat was a nice run...sick

i liked this piece...flow worked, even with long-ish lines

rhyming was coo...more internal would help

slick wordplay

this was a good drop

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