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.flows...vs...Mc Murder
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no feedin no bitin no crew no hatin you spit first good luck |
my lyricz devine elevatin thru time in a rhyme
yet i see ya standin still cant find a good line u hesistatin kneez shakin ma rappinz a crime coz i'd hit ya wida verse n leave ya insatutionalised i bit ya wida curse worse than death-dis be revelutionalised my word be forever vitalised as i break ur back an leave ya paralised only despised coz i hurt ya,now u fallen an weak kicked all dirt on ya-now u crawlin back to speak insert my diss within ya da poison will rip ya apart hear my hissin gramma ur choice to be killed 4om the start shocked by the toxicity of ma wordz?hold ur head but tragically u discover ma lyrics left ya braindead.......... flowz now ure spittin with pros so stop actin like a punk ass hoe |
aight check it....
Dang nigga Ill give ya your props you came weak...Geez! Everyone look hes so wack he said Quote:
Nigga you know ya prewritted so go ahead take a peak.... B.c ya studderin b/c ya cant find ya raps nigga this aint hide n go seek... Nigga ya spit so dry they dryer then paper plates.... Bitch ya probably 3 years old...Studyin computers and probably the son of bill gates Ya cant battle...And im not a hoe,ya cant even reply to ya loans.... B.c when he shit on his self he reflect more than microphones.... I might KO you I might just win ..everyone take a bid... But Ya just got murked like ya partner Tupac did..... |
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uppin again for the damn 6 time or something like that
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yo this was a decent battle and heres the break down
mc murder nice flow and a couple good punchs best line-coz i'd hit ya wida verse n leave ya insatutionalised i bit ya wida curse worse than death-dis be revelutionalised my word be forever vitalised as i break ur back an leave ya paralised worst line-flowz now ure spittin with pros so stop actin like a punk ass hoe flows nice flow, punchs and structure best line-Nigga ya spit so dry they dryer then paper plates.... Bitch ya probably 3 years old...Studyin computers and probably the son of bill gates worst line-Ya cant battle...And im not a hoe,ya cant even reply to ya loans.... B.c when he shit on his self he reflect more than microphones.... both need to elevate but my vote goes to flows. |
weak battle...mc murder you got some good vocab and a lil bit of wordplay but nothing too hott u didnt have hardly any punches or personals structure was good flow was OK
.flows. u had a ok opener with a good personal a couple good punches but every rhyme you spit u talk about how the person is prolly 3 years old its played out allready come more orijinal vote: .flows. overall he had a better verse than MC did but ok verses from both ~!1!~ |
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my lyricz devine elevatin thru time in a rhyme
yet i see ya standin still cant find a good line u hesistatin kneez shakin ma rappinz a crime Weak opener coz i'd hit ya wida verse n leave ya insatutionalised i bit ya wida curse worse than death-dis be revelutionalised my word be forever vitalised as i break ur back an leave ya paralised almost a punch only despised coz i hurt ya,now u fallen an weak kicked all dirt on ya-now u crawlin back to speak Not a punch insert my diss within ya da poison will rip ya apart hear my hissin gramma ur choice to be killed 4om the start wwwwwwwwweak shocked by the toxicity of ma wordz?hold ur head but tragically u discover ma lyrics left ya braindead.......... aiight punch flowz now ure spittin with pros so stop actin like a punk ass hoe WEAK CLOSER Get some personals playa aight check it.... Dang nigga Ill give ya your props you came weak...Geez! Everyone look hes so wack he said Quote: he will murder all MC's... Nigga you know ya prewritted so go ahead take a peak.... B.c ya studderin b/c ya cant find ya raps nigga this aint hide n go seek... Good opener and personnal Nigga ya spit so dry they dryer then paper plates.... Bitch ya probably 3 years old...Studyin computers and probably the son of bill gates Good went into weak Ya cant battle...And im not a hoe,ya cant even reply to ya loans.... B.c when he shit on his self he reflect more than microphones.... this is aiight I might KO you I might just win ..everyone take a bid... But Ya just got murked like ya partner Tupac did..... mediocre closer Aiight da lowdown MC MURDER-6/10 .flows.-8/10 Return da Favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124097 |
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flows got this. i think mc muder's verse was one of the worst ive read on this site. both of u keep elevating tho, and add some fuckin punches for fucks sake.
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