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GKillaz05 05-11-04 09:54 PM

CueBall -VS- GKillaz05 *VOTE*
 
RULES
U spit 1st (ur call out)
Check in
10-15 Linez
No hate/crew/DR

Good Luck

CueBall 05-11-04 09:56 PM

checked in

CueBall 05-11-04 10:09 PM

G....you got 23 wins?,when does talent Begin?
Cus every Time I see you, I see my timbs...
Callin urself g-killa?please dont make me emphasize...
Your claimin harcore..thugman..wit your internet ties,
He's like Tupac, 2 times circumsized..minus the lines.
Shit....take away 2 inches, n this killa's a Dime.....
Thats right Im white, U don't see me quote'n like a fan
Readin magazine's...an watchin Em wit Lotion in my hand
Just face it...G, it's what you are...continue spectating
an quit the dic'tasting...just to upp your rapperz rating
You and your crew, define what you are...Mispelled Mayhem
And don't deny it...If Em was single, u'd all try n date'em

GKillaz05 05-11-04 10:14 PM

checkin in..

GKillaz05 05-11-04 10:34 PM

EVERYONE ITS K-O TIME!!

COME ON!!!

My Punches are like a silent pp7 hits hard wit no noise...
Battlin this fack MC named CB cuz he loves the Cute Boys...
Playin wit your sex toys man CueBalls just a flamIn-fag...
I got CueBall turned into a bitch he is blaming-his-rag...
Got his gay porno mag and he is ready for some action...
Say We Love Em but his ass on 8mile is your distraction...
My rymes leve him tearful and my flow leaves him fearful...
Told him I would write his next verse now he is cheerful...
He gave the white towel a throw, he is callin this battle quits...
I dont need to flow....
I'll knock you out wit my lyrical hits...
Back to normal flow so my verse can burry CueBall alive...
Soon to be 0-5.. This Rap Battle site your never gun survive...

Iight man, lets get some votes goin!

eric89 05-11-04 10:37 PM

lol good catch g killas

GKillaz05 05-11-04 10:38 PM

you gun vote eric...?.. you should.. just take a few mins to hit it up.. same wit everyone else

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-12-04 12:16 AM

MA vote is Gkillaz cause he had a bettah flow and made mo sence....


Gkillaz:
Flow:8
Structure:7
Punches:6

Overall:21

CueBall:
Flow:6
Structure:7
Punches:6

Overall: 19

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

GKillaz05 05-12-04 08:42 AM

LMAO make sure everyone explains there votes.. cuz Cue is a bitch.. and will DQ all my votes..so make sure there explained.. thx. and UPPIN

.::N-Sight::. 05-12-04 10:42 AM

G....you got 23 wins?,when does talent Begin?
Cus every Time I see you, I see my timbs...

^^^ aiight opener...

Callin urself g-killa?please dont make me emphasize...
Your claimin harcore..thugman..wit your internet ties,
He's like Tupac, 2 times circumsized..minus the lines.

^^^^not sure about the circumsized part...lol...huh?

You and your crew, define what you are...Mispelled Mayhem
And don't deny it...If Em was single, u'd all try n date'em
^^ kinda wack ish



My Punches are like a silent pp7 hits hard wit no noise...
Battlin this fack MC named CB cuz he loves the Cute Boys...

^^ funny opener

I'll knock you out wit my lyrical hits...
Back to normal flow so my verse can burry CueBall alive...
Soon to be 0-5.. This Rap Battle site your never gun survive...

^^ decent close

Vote: G5...verse made more sense to me

The Jett 05-12-04 12:22 PM

G....you got 23 wins?,when does talent Begin?
Cus every Time I see you, I see my timbs...
Nice opener.....OK personal....great metiphore
Callin urself g-killa?please dont make me emphasize...
Your claimin harcore..thugman..wit your internet ties,
Good personal.....good vocab
He's like Tupac, 2 times circumsized..minus the lines.
Shit....take away 2 inches, n this killa's a Dime.....
Funny ass punch, hard punch....funny metiphore
Thats right Im white, U don't see me quote'n like a fan
Readin magazine's...an watchin Em wit Lotion in my hand
Great Personal....Funny metiphore
Just face it...G, it's what you are...continue spectating
an quit the dic'tasting...just to upp your rapperz rating
Ok punch...decent personal...
You and your crew, define what you are...Mispelled Mayhem
And don't deny it...If Em was single, u'd all try n date'em
Funny personal.....good diss....lil off on flo...

Overall....a pretty solid verse....shit flowed nice untill the last line..Mayhem..n ...Date'em...no...lol...
Punches and personals were there....
The metiphores were right on key....nice drop...

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My Punches are like a silent pp7 hits hard wit no noise...
Battlin this fack MC named CB cuz he loves the Cute Boys...
Ok metiphore....His name's not CB....personal?
Playin wit your sex toys man CueBalls just a flamIn-fag...
I got CueBall turned into a bitch he is blaming-his-rag...
Sex punch...played....Rag punch....played
Got his gay porno mag and he is ready for some action...
Say We Love Em but his ass on 8mile is your distraction...
gay porno punch...played.....second line looks liek a feed
My rymes leve him tearful and my flow leaves him fearful...
Told him I would write his next verse now he is cheerful...
weak multi's.....vocab was kinda soft here
He gave the white towel a throw, he is callin this battle quits...
I dont need to flow....
I'll knock you out wit my lyrical hits...
Lyrical hits.......no
Back to normal flow so my verse can burry CueBall alive...
Soon to be 0-5.. This Rap Battle site your never gun survive...
u have to survive a battle site? bad closer

Overall....I thought this was incredibly weak....especially from a so-called vet....What was this?....seriously....once u break it down, You really didnt have any hard hittin punches at all, and your structure kept shifting and screwin up your flo....

I dunno these days.......

Vote- CueBall
Hit up my battle wit Lyrical MC in Elevated wit an honest vote, thanks

GKillaz05 05-12-04 01:06 PM

what a have vote... lol, whatever man.. keep the votes comin'

Ares 05-12-04 01:23 PM

The breakdown:
Cue-Ball:

G....you got 23 wins?,when does talent Begin?
Cus every Time I see you, I see my timbs...
ok opener
Callin urself g-killa?please dont make me emphasize...
Your claimin harcore..thugman..wit your internet ties,
not bad punch
He's like Tupac, 2 times circumsized..minus the lines.
Shit....take away 2 inches, n this killa's a Dime.....
ok
Thats right Im white, U don't see me quote'n like a fan
Readin magazine's...an watchin Em wit Lotion in my hand
This would be a great punch if GKillas was on 2pacs dick or something but I'm just not seeing that... maybe I'm missing something
Just face it...G, it's what you are...continue spectating
an quit the dic'tasting...just to upp your rapperz rating
sort of filler but still a nice punch
You and your crew, define what you are...Mispelled Mayhem
And don't deny it...If Em was single, u'd all try n date'em
so-so closer.

GKillaz:
My Punches are like a silent pp7 hits hard wit no noise...
Battlin this fack MC named CB cuz he loves the Cute Boys...
This is played because everyone and their mom says thier rhymes of bullets or their mind is thier nine or whatever... and you were doing the acroynm thing inthe last battle I read with you
Playin wit your sex toys man CueBalls just a flamIn-fag...
I got CueBall turned into a bitch he is blaming-his-rag...
not too bad
Got his gay porno mag and he is ready for some action...
Say We Love Em but his ass on 8mile is your distraction...
Good punch, fliped the em thing in one line
My rymes leve him tearful and my flow leaves him fearful...
Told him I would write his next verse now he is cheerful...
not feeling it
He gave the white towel a throw, he is callin this battle quits...
I dont need to flow....
I'll knock you out wit my lyrical hits...
I like. Original
Back to normal flow so my verse can burry CueBall alive...
Soon to be 0-5.. This Rap Battle site your never gun survive...
weak closer

Close battle but I've gotta give this one to Casual. He was a little more original and had some better punches.... I've seen better from GKillaz.


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123621

Ares 05-12-04 01:24 PM

I don't know why I called him Casual above... i think I just read a verse from someone named that. Anyway, I meant to say that the vote is for Cue Ball.

CueBall 05-12-04 04:45 PM

Uppin....

Got his gay porno mag and he is ready for some action...
Say We Love Em but his ass on 8mile is your distraction...
Good punch, fliped the em thing in one line

notice.....flipped also means fed....


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