fatk4p vs. lucky7
 

u spit first...
no crew or hate votes
10 lines

homie you called me out you should be the one that spits first.

but whatever i aint trippin you start typin and imma start typin.

okay..

look...

ayo i 'split brains' when i 'spit flames'/
catch me on rapbattles.com, rippin 'kids game' with 'nick names'/

but not yours, i know you aint get that from your parents/
that shit is careless, if i was reppin fatk4p i'de be embarresed/

dont 'act brave', i 'smack gays', right in they 'fat face'/
you can't win this, it's like your an asthmatic runnin a 'track race'/

i'll have you lost for breath/
leave you feelin empty, like when Jordan took the 23 off his chest/

these last two get crucial, you better go grab a bible/
cuz i'll get Jin to battle you in Japanese then rip you with the subtitles/ (Jin from BET)

take sum time to write ur rymes and ill battle u later//
2 hours past and it sounds like u stole from a 3rd grader//
ur too lucky for battle but this time its expired//
u steal ur rymes from old guys whos already retired//
u might stand out to others but to me ur just a loser//
all ur time is spent with your right hand and ur computer//
lucky u aint a gangsta whos never been sober//
u probly rose to shame doin drivebys with a super soaker//
lost all your money when you betted on ur rymes//
now you got debts pilen up straight to your thighs//

Imma Vote fo Lucky7 it was jus plain hotta den da otha niggaz i dont even wanna explain da vote...2 me dat was automatic Lucky7 u got ma vote

thanks for the vote man. we need some more votes please.

1-0 me.

fat nice verse son. you had nice punches, multiples and personals. but lucky had a more stretched out verse which made it easy 4 him to get his point across. lucky you had better punches ans rhyme scheme.fat im sorry you had nice punches but it was not enough.return the fava

vote=lucky

imma go the other way and vote for fat. I thought it had more of a flow even though lucky had more of a punch. Yall both should refine your shit but still a good battle

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lucky 7 won this because he had better structure, punches and just better verse overall. I thought the other verse didn't flow very well nad have nasy punchlines for murd to be offended or evem take you serious. Murd oe dis quite easerly with his rymes n punches. No hard feelings

lucky got lucky on this. nah joking fatk4p um it was okay but was weak and the shit didn't hit. lucky had nice flow and nice technic. but both need to keep upgrading. it all good though

i gota vote lucky cause u jus came harder wit tha punches yo can u ppl please help me out on this battle and vote

my vote-lucky
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124727
vote on this please