popa doc vs jpoll
 

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alright...let's do it...i'll check in tomorrow...it's 3in the morning here...

jpoll thinks he's the best, I underestemate you because your rapping is wackness/
take this shit inside you, my words are like pride, they breath down living makeing you die/
preasure amounts of blood boils that are roasting you away like in an oven as tin foil/
i'll gut you with the razor blade I just shaved my balls with lol/
can't take the heat neither the beat, it'll sweep you off your feet dealing with the faker/
this guy's a make up lover, wears red lip stick who's into glossary, trying to look like J.lo/
Plus your face looks like a fugus not the mushroom kind but the rotton kind/
You can never catch up to my league, it'll put you down and make you smoke weed/
after all jpoll an't on a role, stole his spot light, fighting him off da mic/
remember me im dynamite don't want me to light the flame and watch the spark blow up watching you blow to fragments/
your in the trunk of my car with five padlocks secureing the trunk jammin it/
hear you strugglein, leave you wid some classical music to listen, when dropping you into the bottom of the sea sinking/

alright I can tell your a newb...you need a lesson about structure...and punches...and vocab...and well...battling...

anyways here it is...your verse is the longest 5 bars i've ever seen...anyway...

yo yo yo
check this shit...

fuck he's just a rook...cherry's still intact...
needs rappin 101, the book...or come to me i teach infact...
you lack precise punches...personals...flow...and even rhymes...
battling's unknown to you like the aliens in 'signs'...
stretch lines so long i thought you wrote a novel...
i'm patton the general...and your of course that german rommel...
i kill your platoon and chase you through greece...
your flow won't be released...cause it's obviously already deceased...
i came weak...but it's straight up keystyle...this is true...
i still KO'd your shit...hit the vote dial ...not ur threw....

alright...pm..me back for advice on your verse...

RETURN THE FAVOUR OR I'LL NEVER VOTE ON ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR BATTLES!!! LOL!!! KID'N http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...874#post1279874

Papa doc, this wasn't your best drop normally you come harder but your punches this round were really conecting plus your flow was a bit off
Flow: 6/10
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 6/10
Metas: 5/10
Multies: 5/10
Wordplay: 5/10
Overall: 32/60

JPoll, nice flow nice punches, you used nice creativity and it shows.

Flow: 7/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 7/10
Metas: 7/10
Multies: 6/10
Wordplay: 6/10
Overall: 38/60
Vote:

aiight im a set this one out like da vinci did

Papa Doc:
Flow: 4/10
Punches: 5/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 5/10
Multies: 5/10
Wordplay: 4/10
Overall: 28/60

so u can see i thought u ddnt come that good..u need some uppin dawg. i cud tell u woz a noob.

Jpoll:
Flow: 7/10
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 6/10
Metas: 7/10
Multies: 7/10
Wordplay: 6/10
Overall: 39/60
jpoll cud have came stronger, i kno coz of his other battle but he did enough to beat popa doc.

vote = jpoll

vote on this sucka.................................

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

ok
 

ill break it down................

Papa Doc:
Flow: 4/10-woz all ova
Punches: 5/10-they were there but weak
Personals: 4/10-think 1 woz attempted
structure: 5/10-basic-hard to follow
Multies: 5/10-need more complexity
Wordplay: 6/10-not bad but not complex enough
Overall: 29/60

need 2 elevate...tell u woz a noob....up it kid.

Jpoll:
Flow: 7/10-easy to follow...above average
Punches: 7/10-ok cud b harder
Personals: 6/10-think u had 1-n it woz gud...more needed
structure: 7/10-again nice n easy to follow-effective
Multies: 7/10-sum nice rhymes-cud b more complex
Wordplay: 7/10-pretty much same as multies
Overall: 41/60
he cud cum harder but he knew what he had 2 do to win and he did...with ease on his part

vote = jpoll

uppin for votes. j poll didn't have creativity or better multies, i think I just took dis.

uppin for votes. j poll didn't have creativity or better multies, i had da better verse.