Jay_Dogg vs T-Storm
 

aiight

10 - 20 lines
usual House rules
you spit first after check in man

this is ma check in

chk in
 

aiight chkin in................................................ ........................................

aiight man lets see what ya got ill spit straight after you man lets go dawg!

spittin
 

this guy repin tha black knights..../
those clowns battle like dykes...they pillow-fight/
this guy from scotland...north of tha border/
his accent sounds like he`s got a speech disorder/
ima spit raw to fuck up ya whole clan/
this guy cudnt battle if he bit tha wu-tang/
my lyrical disease has one mission...to kill ya nervous system/
to deprive u of words...they call it malnutrition/
ma lyrics so quick outta ma head...cuming at u like a cypher/
bitch read carefully...theres sum big words u cant decypher/
im tha devil in this hell...n for you this is ya torture/
im a sadist mothafucka...so bite ma linez...i`ll torch-ya/(hell flames)
ima spit 16 linez of pure dope on this bitch/
so fuck it..go ahead n feed..coz i got u be-witched/
if i woz u, i wudnt waste yer best shit in this battle...u got notin to gain/
bitch... i`ll have u gone in 60 seconnds...jus like "memphis reigns"/


aight get 2 spitin.............. :laugh2:

fuck man i started to spit and ma comp crashed man give me 20mins to re type it

ok
 

haha chokin???????????????????????????????????????????? ? :evilgrin:

why do da english think they grate/
its the country we all love to hate/
hers a long word for ya antidissastablishmantarinism/ (longest wrd in da dictionary)
say that with a mouth full of jism/
we all know what the english like it/
all of them so full of shit/
bet you chock when you get the mic/
just like in basketball ill hit ya with the sike/
this is your 3rd n final strike/
this mother fucker thinks hes bringin a storm/
but he aint even close to warm/
so now that the storm is over and done/
and just like william wallace ill make all ya all run/
only difference is im packin a gun/


aiight lets get votin

this was a pretty weak battle i spose cause there wasnt many elements usesd in this battle

t-storm: u where first and u came aiight but pretty weak in my behalf i thought u could have came harder since u where first
yah wordplay and no mutlis ur punches was decent but also weak yah p[ersonals where abit harder then yah punches but still really weak

7.5/10 ur score....

Jae-Dog: u where very weak i thought u had the upper hand and time to take this battle but u wasted lines on a weak battle i thought u should have uses harde personals and punches

wordplay was ok p[unches weak personals weak no multis and u shoudl came heaps harder

6/10 ur score

VOTE- T-torm

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this guy repin tha black knights..../
those clowns battle like dykes...they pillow-fight/
Its an ok punch
this guy from scotland...north of tha border/
his accent sounds like he`s got a speech disorder/
HA HA good punch
ima spit raw to fuck up ya whole clan/
this guy cudnt battle if he bit tha wu-tang/
weak, very weak
my lyrical disease has one mission...to kill ya nervous system/
to deprive u of words...they call it malnutrition/
Aiight Aiight I'm feelin this
ma lyrics so quick outta ma head...cuming at u like a cypher/
bitch read carefully...theres sum big words u cant decypher/
This line was mediocre
im tha devil in this hell...n for you this is ya torture/
im a sadist mothafucka...so bite ma linez...i`ll torch-ya/(hell flames)
The devil thing is fuckin played
ima spit 16 linez of pure dope on this bitch/
so fuck it..go ahead n feed..coz i got u be-witched/
yead its aiight
if i woz u, i wudnt waste yer best shit in this battle...u got notin to gain/
bitch... i`ll have u gone in 60 seconnds...jus like "memphis reigns"/
Nice closing



why do da english think they grate/
its the country we all love to hate/
Eck, horrible opening
hers a long word for ya antidissastablishmantarinism/ (longest wrd in da dictionary)
say that with a mouth full of jism/
NO flow
we all know what the english like it/
all of them so full of shit/
Is this even considered a punch?
bet you chock when you get the mic/
just like in basketball ill hit ya with the sike/
this is your 3rd n final strike/
Eh this was pretty weak...
this mother fucker thinks hes bringin a storm/
but he aint even close to warm/
eh riiight
so now that the storm is over and done/
and just like william wallace ill make all ya all run/
only difference is im packin a gun/
Pretty good closer

aiight this is the point spread-
T-storm-7/10
Jay Dogg-4/10

Jay I've heard better stuff from you.

yeah man i know this is one of ma worst verses i was in a hurry n had 3 battles to spit in ayt the same time but fuck it man its all good lets get more votes

this guy repin tha black knights..../
those clowns battle like dykes...they pillow-fight/

^^ interestin imagery there...coo
this guy from scotland...north of tha border/
his accent sounds like he`s got a speech disorder/

^^ blah

im tha devil in this hell...n for you this is ya torture/
im a sadist mothafucka...so bite ma linez...i`ll torch-ya/(hell flames)


^^ uy were setting this up well but it feel short of it's intended target

why do da english think they grate/
its the country we all love to hate/
hers a long word for ya antidissastablishmantarinism/ (longest wrd in da dictionary)

^^^ too simple and not feeling it..the long word bit was interesting...but otherwise, useless

^^ accidentally hit send...lol

not done

and just like william wallace ill make all ya all run/
only difference is im packin a gun/

^^ too simple


vote: Tstorm..more complexity


thought, neither of you had any real stand-out lines

lets all elevate

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First off T-storm was off the chain and i'll explain later

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