Mad Dog Vs T-storm
 

Aight check it
15-20 lines
No d/r h8 unexplained votes or crew votes
Me 1st
Honest votes only (If u got beef then Blacklist them coz i want it fair)
I'll spit when u check in...

not a chk in
 

this aint a chk in.....u sed weve got till 2moz noon....that still stand????????????

That still stands i forgot to put that in soz

aight
 

ok...chck in...................spit wen ur ready....

Ha ha who da fucks dis man t-storm??? he dissed the DK Knights?!? Wot the fuck man ima let him feel this check and drop...

(Verse)
...Lyrical style 1st class like a drug and ima pump mega slugs into this fake thug/
Who thinks he can come into the RB club and diss the Dk Knight Thugs/
Are u on a death wish coz if u are then i can carry it out on command...Like a Genie/
Coz im thinkin u aint feelin us or me...here's my glock HA and rest for eternity/
And this aint self gloryfied...these are truthful words/
Quit while ur ahead T coz u know gettin beaten like a bitch hurts/
And whats wit the name t-storm???...u think u wild or sumthin/
Our country (England) hardly gets hardcore storms...actually im wonderin/
Does the T stand for tiny, tryin or trippin?/
Coz u gettin tiny fo tryin...and my PIMP hand make sure u gonn be slippin/
Cover yoself up in quarentee...coz yo wack rap disease is a worry fo me/
Tiny storm is jus a lil rain shower...he'll pass over in 8 lines u'll see/:laugh:
Im the biggest disaster that u'll probably ever see word is bond/
Oh except when u walked in on yo bitch and her ex Raymond/
Coz the truth is...EVERYBODY LOVES RAYMOND and yo bitch is willin 2 prove it/
But dont worry u wont be a virgin forever...1 day she'll give up the clit/
But ur gay...so u wont...ur gynophobic/ (gynophobic = fear of women real word)
I'd take u to a strip club...but u'd prolly run from it/
Pack yo bags and fly away the next day/
Collect call Raymond and tell him to flee the same way/ (Secret lovers)

Aight thats me done waitin on u...

Keystyled to Kanye West (Work it out beat so read it fast thats y lines are long)

dude that suxed wot did any of ya spit have to do wit t-storm??? t-storm u should be able to merk him now

ok
 

they call u mad dog..n ur crew they call dark knights/
i call u sad dog.. n ur crew do shit but bite/
fukin wit me...set u all on fire...im crazy-psycho-manic/
ur crew alarm bell ringin...t cumin up swingin...cause u all to panic/
ur shits so weak..u been in for colonic irrogation?/
dnt try to understand...u wudnt know the meaning of personification/
bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/
bitch u claim ur serious...i think your all delerious/
ma styles complex,convex n concave...ur styles straight played/
you rap like u ashmatic...my style pumps like im pneumatic/
you must b sufferin from amnesia?...coz i tie u up in mastic(tape)
u need to grow a brain...ur styles fucked n lame/
ma gran cud do beta...n ur shit cud do wit her zimma-frame/
so fuck u...first i merked jay-dogg...n now ima merk you/
whos next in line...i take out ya whole bitch-ass crew.

C'Mon people vote dammit uppin# 1

(Round of applause) I can't believe I'm doing this, but this battle was quite alright!!

"Are u on a death wish coz if u are then i can carry it out on command...Like a Genie/
Coz im thinkin u aint feelin us or me...here's my glock HA and rest for eternity/" - wasn't sure I was gonna like this line, but in the end I did - finished it well.

"And this aint self gloryfied...these are truthful words/
Quit while ur ahead T coz u know gettin beaten like a bitch hurts/" - this is just a good line

"And whats wit the name t-storm???...u think u wild or sumthin/
Our country (England) hardly gets hardcore storms...actually im wonderin/
Does the T stand for tiny, tryin or trippin?/
Coz u gettin tiny fo tryin...and my PIMP hand make sure u gonn be slippin" - all good solid rhyming, good continuity, I like it.
Shoot, I even thought the 'Everybody Loves Raymond' references were funny!!!

T-Storm
"ur shits so weak..u been in for colonic irrogation?/
dnt try to understand...u wudnt know the meaning of personification/
bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/" - liked this, man. Good put-downs & wordplay
"u need to grow a brain...ur styles fucked n lame/
ma gran cud do beta...n ur shit cud do wit her zimma-frame/
so fuck u...first i merked jay-dogg...n now ima merk you/
whos next in line...i take out ya whole bitch-ass crew." - A good finish, no doubt.

there were other good lines in there too, like the convex, concave/str8 played line.

However, only 1 person can get the vote, so mine goes to..
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Mad Dog! (Dang! Either Mad Dog has spat a good verse, or I'm drinking whiskey on an empty stomach again.... ain't no whiskey bottle around here, so it musta beena good rhyme! Props when and where they're due.)

One

... but apparently certain cats don't want my vote.... that's cool & the gang, chalé.... I thought you might have let that stuff go, but clearly not!

it's on you, bruv

votes plz!
 

upin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
drop a vote n drop ur links.....wll return favour asap

i gotta go wiv t-storm basically i just liked his flow beta, punches from both y'all were pretty weak but both still elevatin, t-storm took it wiv beta personals n much beta flow, mad ain't nobody wanna be listenin to a kanye beat n readin stretched lines, change ya structure dawg...pz

v/t-storm

return fava on dis battle...honest vote plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123463

Uppin# 3..........................................

Ima go for T on this one. He had da better flow and punches. Good job to MAd Dog doe.

VOTE=T-STORM

Can ya'll return da favor and vote on my battle plz? Thanx... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124000