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The Godfather 05-12-04 11:50 AM

Graphex Vs. The Godfather (plz Vote)
 
no crew votes
no dickridin votes
no bitin

14 linez min.
18 max

u spit first

Graphex 05-12-04 12:30 PM

lma kill you with a sicker spit than a chick that has a deseased dick in her clit/
the godfather, who's he?i get better rounds comming from floozies for a toonie/
this is my mafia im hauntin ya with a poppin tongue/
talkin puns that make you flee quiker than droppin runs/(diarhea)
im shiftin bones and rippin clothes when im spittin flows/
makin you hit the road like squashed in pavement/
im rearragin ur face with arragments of phrases/
ill blaze it with the next set i'll infect/
leave you wrecked without a head on your neck/
and for the rest of your body parts/
their scattered in parking lots/
im gonna ride through like a typhoon/
and the next time you wake up theres gonna be a horse head beside you/(the movie)
of coarse im comin full force like a transport behind you/
so as i step up you better step down before my letters pronounced leavin you dead in the ground/

The Godfather 05-12-04 02:27 PM



Yo, I Play You Around All Day Like If You Waz A Toy
Call Me MC Hammer Cauze You Can't Touch This If I Were A 7 Year Old Boy
You A Pussy Da Way I Got You Scared Inside
Fuck Canadiens, One Day They'll Be A Holocaust Of Your Kind
Nobody In That Country Knows How To Spit
Xcept Saliva And When They Suck Dicks
Da Only Graphic You Do Is In Paper
And I Wryte On You With These Rhymes So Much They'll Call Me A Raper
Slice Ya Head Off Like If You Waz An Iraqi Prizoner
Hold Up, Did You Noticed Every Line Here Is Like A Fuckin Finsher?
Anywayz, My Blows Leave You Swelled Up Like Rocky
I Thought This Website Waz For Serious Battlers, Guess You Got Tired Playin Hockey
I Be As Ill As Nas In This Shit So Stay Back
And We Be Usin Ya Flag Here In Green To Represent Our City Parks, Haha Fag
Now You Know I'm A Guy You Woudn't Walk A Path To Twice
You Be Squeakin Away Like A Dirty House Mice
The Godfather, If You Were To Pick Then This Movie'll Be Da One You Choose
I'm Like Vito Corleone Cauze I'll Be Givin You An Offer You Can't Refuse


VOTERZ HOLLA BACK

Graphex 05-13-04 12:34 PM

sooooo ne one wanna vote on this one too lol maybe .....

sHiFtY fInGeRs 05-13-04 01:20 PM

ill vote on this when i get my posts up guys......

sHiFtY fInGeRs 05-13-04 01:35 PM

ok the way i see this battle ok is i think graphex took this one just by a bit and ill tell yah why
flow- the godfathers flow was good but their were a few parts that was inconsistent, uhm graphex flowed a bit better
structure-graphex structure was really good, and the godfathers was good too, but i like how graphex did his better
multi's- now not too many multi's used in this one but when their was i noticed that they were in graphex's flows i like how most of his rhyme, rhymed lol instead of just the end words, just a bit of advice to godfather hit with some more multi's they are a huge help and show more skill in youre flows
punches-when it came to punches the godfather came harder then graphex did what i liked most about godfathers hits were they were consistent i like how he hit the fact he was canadian (even tho im canadian), uhm graphex youre hits were their but they werent as strong as his, i like how you flipped his name on him more then once and kept it interesting , but for punches godfather took it but this is a perfect example of the fact that not only punch lines will win you the battle, godfather took the punches but lost the other three parts of the battle so im giving this match to graphex good job both of you....
victory graphex

{D.N.A.} 05-13-04 01:50 PM

Your flow wuz good so wuz the opener, and all the way through you stayed consistent. good puches grafix.

Godfather you need to work on your multiez and mettaz your verse should become a lot better.

vote graphicz

Sonek 05-14-04 01:44 AM

hey ill vote on this when my posts are high enough ok

Vote disqualified for Cheating.

Sonek 05-14-04 01:57 AM

ill agree with the others graphex took this battle guys hit harder in all ways i thought

LyricalMethod 05-14-04 08:18 AM

graphex your verse was lame man. i've seen better. your punches didn't hit hard enough. step up. godfather your verse was aight but not great. u had nice punches and mu;ltiples, you really attacked his hometown. i liked that, you were very personal. nice flow kid.return the fava: lyricalmethod vs. taken over.

vote=T.G.F.

sHiFtY fInGeRs 05-15-04 09:52 PM

ok hey whats up just dropping in seeing how this went but noones been voting ...........

emcee Reaper 05-16-04 10:03 AM

ok here we go both had tight structure and flo and both had crazy hits with good multis which makes this one real tought to judge but if i had to vote which i do am am going to i woud say graphex just because i think he hit a bit harder with the punches, just a bit tho not much to explain tho for this battle nice job guys keep it up

emcee Reaper 05-16-04 10:04 AM

i really liked how you flipped the name more then once too

R.A.M 05-16-04 10:20 AM

Both yall spits was aight. I was feelin one more than the other tho.
Godfather:
Like I said your spit was coll but tha ryhme scheme was basic throughout most of da verse. You had some nice punches in there along wit some wut tha fucks.
Best line:
"My blows leave you swelled up like Rocky,
I thought this sight was for real battlers you must of got tired playin hockey"
Worst line:
"Yo I play you around all day like if you was a toy,
Call me MC hammer cuz you can't touch this even if I was a 7 year old boy"

Graphex:
I liked your verse. You came wit it wit nice punches and wordplay.
Best line:
"This is my mafia i'm hauntin ya wit poppin tongues,
Talkin puns that make you flee quicker than droppin runs"
Worst line:
"The godfather who's he? I get better rounds comin from floozies for a toonie"
(I just didn't understand that line)
Fair to say graphex had the better verse

vote+graphex
swing thru here and peep this yall
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sHiFtY fInGeRs 05-16-04 10:34 AM

....................well this is turning out to be a blow out


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