JPoll vs. T.Wonder....
 

okay the rules...
t.wonder goes first...spits within 30 mins...
the me after...
house rules
8 lines
no hate
no crew
no dr

you don't need to drop in 30 min...because i might need to go out

yo man u 'sposed to spit 1st if u make a call-out
let me know if u have a problem wit that and ill go 1st

you go 1st...that was in the callout..i don't have time right now...fine how about a blind spit...

get ya dictionary, and look up what creativity means
usually i put dudes in the dirt, but is cold in calgary so ill lay u in the snow like nativity scenes
rap'n aint like play'n a game so go back to get'n nice in Vice
ya sleepovers at never lad isthe only time u git nice with "mic's" device
u niggas'll get lit like a fireball on joints
ifya first name was "Bic" u couldnt ball-on-point
now imma flip it to the meta-physical lyrical, cause i aint hear'n weak niggas, but fuck i dont wanna so please dont speak nigga
My spiritual formula is a chemical that burs thru my teeth, imma sow jpoll in the ground and watch him grow cuz likegrim im ready to reap weak niggas

c'mon nigga u said u wz gon drop by tonight man
2 days and still wait'n

Ha ha ha bad battle man props to both...vote goes to JPoll coz damn the guy came back real hard the Patrick Swaze line had me rollin over. Decent structure both of you's J had better punches and personals but both did a good verse keep it up.

V/JPoll

yo im a vote jpoll. he ripped t wonder. jpoll came wid stronger punches and his verse woz on a totally differnet level. like jpoll sed some of twonders lines were weak. he had personals but i think u cud have used them better.
vote = jpoll

ok
 

ok j-poll won this
t.wonder woz bout what ud expect from a noob...it wasnt bad jus basic
weak punches n no personals

j-poll
his shit woz witty n funny made me laugh
cnt really see anytin wrong..gud wordplay n punches
flow n structure woz there

maybe cum wit iller punches n personals-u know harder

but woz v.nice


vote jpoll

T.Wonder you had some aiight punchs but they was weak.
JPol came harder and riipped you up.
The symphony line was whack tho.
Layout-
T. Wonder-6/10
JPoll-8/10

Vote-JPoll

Peace and Props

sorry man i have to agree with the rest j-poll all over this on with his personal hits...alot of times they can make the diff structure and flows were their , and multi's were used to an extent but could have been used more over all

j-pol gets the vote

hey guys return the fav vote on shifty-vs-pimp rawb on the front lines please and thnxs

uuppin uuupppin uppin uppin for votes...uppin...........

T. Wonder - iight spit man, your punches were kinda whack but your flow was iight.

Best Line - u niggas'll get lit like a fireball on joints
ifya first name was "Bic" u couldnt ball-on-point

Worst Line - now imma flip it to the meta-physical lyrical, cause i aint hear'n weak niggas, but fuck i dont wanna so please dont speak nigga

JPoll - Hot shit man, some of the best I seen from ya.. awesome flow and your punches were hott.

Best Line - 'Unworthy' can be replaced by this Kanye impersanator...
'Gunit 101' got more skills then you...and he rhymes about the terminator...
Ur verse equals pathetic...needs lot's of changing...a second glancing...
Shit Son...Patrick Swayze came harder then yo shit...in Dirty Dancing...
THIS BITCH...
Always suckin his Thumb...like Fred from "Da Band"...
Make more money of your shit by running a lemonade stand...
Tellin me to be creative?...while you bit your 'mic' and 'bic' bars...
you couldn't match my accopella...if you had cymphony and 10 guitars...

Worst Line - I'm straight rugged...while you the definition of trash deals...
From NC?...well i bet it feels like u got tar on ya face not just ur heels... (everything was hott but this line, and this one wasnt even that bad.. was just your worst)

OVERALL - One sided battle.. with the vote goin to JPoll.. hot battle there bud.. your flow was hot and your punches were hitten hard.. way to hold it down for Canada.. yeye' .. lol, T man.. stay wit newbs.. you need to work on your flow.. and your punches were hot that good at all.

VOTE - JPoll

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123755