First Time Ever, tell me what you thought
 

this is my first time on this site:

to you im a lyrical physician
putting in all the good lyrics you're missin
with those types of lines who do you think that ur dissin
you think you talking to a crowd but no bodys listenin
for shootin you down i should get a reward
since i just caught the phsyco from the psychiatric ward
you have to be crazy to think your rhymes will work
listenin to you rap is the same as watching gay people flirt
it's hard to battle with everyones success
before i didn't care and now i care less

tell me what you thought.

it was alright, up ya game though

thanks

not bad bro