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shadow 05-12-04 09:53 PM

discharge vrs mixxed mc 24
 
no crew
no d/r
no hate votes
blind spit spit 30 minutes after
check in or ur automatically dqued

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-12-04 10:02 PM

hold on dont check in yet i gotta go get my food srry b

shadow 05-12-04 10:04 PM

ok well im checkin in now but u have to spit by 11 oclock
sorry i gotta end that win streak.....

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-12-04 10:24 PM

sure ya mayb will ya mayb wont thats da question

shadow 05-12-04 10:36 PM

your sig says untouchable, your conceited, your 4-0,but you wil be defeated//
you wil be lyrically "mistreated",u cant win pulla "no-show" and remain seated//
mixxed mc, i give you credit u stepped up but, man keep your self in check...//
with all respect,u tried to battle me and after 3 lines your "lyrically-wrecked...//
your the wackest mcee on rapbattles, and mixxed mc u kno that shyts true..//
ive lyrically murdered you,your fucking wack,just like ur lyrical-legends crew//
your not a legend...........and definitly you........ shouldnt be your crew leader//
see im a fucking natural-born champion, and your just a bottom feeder.....//
u cant beat a pro, your fucking terrible and my verse was perfection......//
stick to ur real proffession, and thats sucking dick ur number1 obsession//
^^^^ hold that no feeeding verse due by 11oclock

shadow 05-12-04 10:46 PM

yea well u didnt chekc in yet and u got 15 minutes good luck but get it done by 11 or i win

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-12-04 10:51 PM

Yo check it


Yo discharge dont get madd cuz i gotta nice STREAK//
Cause 1nce i Key da VERSE down u kno ya Lyricaly BEAT//

Yo dogg im sick fo shure this gon be a very close one//
But fa real afta ma sick spit votes u gonna have none//

Yo really why discharge challange me afta imma rip this Kat//
Freestylein aint ya shit stick to AIM yahoo and CHAT//

Man this dogg a dumb bitch for battlein me//
Nigga couldint beat me if i was a white belt n u black in TI-CHI//

Yo man atleast imma get off dis hot line//
You suck drop dimes. n as i spot hot RHYMES//
u'll think when i beat u it was a CHRYME//
cause imma murder u like u had a sWITCh n i had a GLOCK 9// (( SWITCH BLADE))

imma drop my shit n i spit sick im who u cant fuck wIT//
Nigga fuck NAS ill have u QUICK TO BACK DOWN BITCH//

Yo nigga this is poker so u betta have played the RITE CARD'S//
Nigga when i spit ill have this bitch Lyricaly DISCHARGED//

Yo im da sickist nigga around in RAP BATTLES//
ill leave ya strolin away inna boat lost wit no PAddles//

Juss like this battle nigga i ripped ya whole Body//
Fat lazy bitch i concider u A mini IRV GOTTI//

Fuck u nigga u kno im betta than you//
Yo to tell u nigga u juss got ripped by a mc thats NEW//

finish da nigga off cause he got nuttin against me//
u should get a trophy for the whackist MC//
Now when i say ur ripped Beleave dat DEFINETLY//
cuz my verse will cause u To discharge n BLEED//

Yo im numba 1 atleast thats what i SEAK//
Cause man i like my oppentes like da others BEAT

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-12-04 10:54 PM

NEver Said how many lines u kno dat

shadow 05-12-04 10:57 PM

yea but i did say no feeding off my verse and u did feed of my verse

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-12-04 10:57 PM

UPPINnnnnn for votes come on niggaz.....................

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-12-04 11:14 PM

where did he feed off ur verse?......Ma vote goes 2 Mixxed mc

mixxed Mc:
flow:8
Structure:9
punches:7

overall: 24

Discharge:
Flow:8
Structure:9
punches:5

overall:22

Yo discharge u came weak on da punches in dat battle i kno u can have bettah punches den dat iight yo holla back 1

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DFrost 05-12-04 11:43 PM

check it
 
discharge- structure was nice, aight opener aight closer, some solid punches, flowed nice, personals were good

mixxed- gotta watch out for selfglorification and filler cause you had a lot of it, even in your opener. bars were stretched bad structure and punches were overall weak. generic weak verse

vote goes to discharge

2Face 05-13-04 12:10 AM

well what can i say
discharge tons of shit
no type of structure and multis at all man 3/10
u had alittle good flow and yo shit rhymed alittle 7/10
practice more man
but i cant really talk i keep practice to
but any overall i give u a 4

Mixxed well u had a pretty good rhyme that had good
flows and structure man u did good 9/10
okay u didnt have any multis man but u did good aight 1/10
overall is 8/10

my Vote MIXXED

FLooZe 05-13-04 12:19 AM

ok breakdown.....

DISCHARGE: damn nigga you a real hot battler.i can see why you merked toxic a couple times.now you had real hot wordplay,flow,structure.........everything!
bestline:all of it
worstline:none
work on:nothing
overall:9/10.dont worry people im not a dickrider.ive voted against him before

MIXXDE MC: you obviously werent at the same level as discharge,but im going to give you credit for your flow,structure,some ok wordplay,and um thats it.
best line:Man this dogg a dumb bitch for battlein me//
Nigga couldint beat me if i was a white belt n u black in TI-CHI//
not the best,but reasonable flow,good diss(kinda humourous) and um wordplay is good.
worst line:Yo dogg im sick fo shure this gon be a very close one//
But fa real afta ma sick spit votes u gonna have none//
barely rhymes
work on:wordplay,structure.
overall:7/10.good

FINAL VOTE: DISCHARGE.
dont hater vote against me Mixxed.

Diagnose 05-13-04 12:43 AM

aight..i ain't gonna vote in this cuz there's no crew votes so i'll just pick who i think won!!!!
Quote:
Originally Posted by spiky2k8
well what can i say
discharge tons of shit
no type of structure and multis at all man 3/10
u had alittle good flow and yo shit rhymed alittle 7/10
practice more man
but i cant really talk i keep practice to
but any overall i give u a 4

^^^^????WTF???This guys is so fuckin wrong?????
First of all!!!!His rhymes didn't rhyme alittle, his rhymes rhymed alot...lmao??This nigga right here is actin like he hella good when really he too can't rap for shyt???Yea....Discharge did do better dawg...ur just another dick rider!!!

Quote:
Originally Posted by spiky2k8
Mixxed well u had a pretty good rhyme that had good
flows and structure man u did good 9/10
my Vote MIXXED

^^^^^WTF?????I could bet my life on it that this nigga had bad structure, a sucky flow, and his rhymes were all elementary...lmao^^^This nigga is a 100% Dick rider...
Quote:
Originally Posted by spiky2k8
okay u didnt have any multis man but u did good aight 1/10
overall is 8/10

^^^LMAO.....8/10????I'm sayin 3/10....it would be a 2 but it's jst that his shyt only made a lil sense.....
Quote:
Originally Posted by NoLost4Rhymes aka SixFifty
Spiky2k8????You suck dawg...don't be dick ridin..i could get ur ass banned for this shyt...but I won't do it...shyt...If you want ta mess wit my fam like that makin stupid ass shyt and fuckin votin for mix cuz he a friend...shyt...then lets battle dawg....I'll show this nigga up...he'll just add another win to my record...LMAO!!!!hahaha


^^^All True


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