"WHITE HOUSE" Deep Poem About Blackkman's Struggle
 

I get so fuckkin frustrated wid this society sometimes... This is how I feel ya'll... Plz drop feedbackk...

Oh yeah, this aint a racist poem. I aint racist. Don't take it as dat.

"White House"

i see you my nigga
i see your hurt your pain
your curse your rage
i see in you what you see in me
i see a society filled with rats and snakes
and i aint talkin’ ‘bout animals
i’m talkin’ ‘bout folks that don’t come ‘round these ways
mr president
mr president
help me get this felony off of my record
help me feed my children
help me become a new person
let me be me
how are we supposed to learn from our mistakes
if you don’t give us the chance to change?
you aint nuthin’ but a pussy ass racist ass punk ass bitch
stay your ass in that white house
that white man’s house
that
make more fight
between the people we don’t like
house
that
aint no martin luther
malik shabazz or jesse jacksons
stepping foot in this house
house
yeah i can see my niggaz
i can see my niggaz hating themselves
hating each other
hating one another
hating their fathers
their mothers
our sisters
our brothers
then you wonder why i need
a little puff on some weed
to stop myself
from letting that bomb go off in that white man’s house
you wonder why id rather die
than forfeit my mind
to your devious lies
how come i have to suffer
because of your mistakes?
i’ve got enough mistakes of my own
that your still making me face
to this day
i would never shake the president’s hand
i learned from the indians
not to fall for that one
hey come here buddy!
let me shake your hand!
shake your land
shake you up outta this place
today
put you in a concentration camp
like them niggaz
that was in that concentration camp
called the south
for three hundred some odd years
working hard for that white man
so he can stay in that white man’s house
and run his white ass mouth
down in that white ass south
well now you’ve got our backs against the wall
we can sell drugs but we can’t go to college
we can get drafted to your army when it calls
but we can’t live our lives from our own knowledge
knowledge is the key to success
well where’s my key?
the only key i ever got
is the one that your gonna throw away
after putting me in a cage
like some wild beast
then you tell me
that i’ve got the problem
i’m the fuck up
i’m a threat to society
NO
you are the threat to society
my society
i have to live on these streets
i have to lie on job applications
about being convicted for some shit
that i was forced to do
because of YOUR society
my society was fine
until you came along
and fucked up MY society
you’re a muthafuckin’ joke
i hope you burn
i hope you choke on hell smoke
i hope that white house burns down
with that white man in it
no i hope your whole society burns down
i hope you know
that the only reason that i’m so angry
is because you won’t let me grow

Damn ya'll... Stop Sleepin! lOl

That Was very deep...I Liek It When You Do Shit Like Thiz Tay...LoL...Uppin

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yo i like it and i kno u not racist but i jus always wanted to kno why blacks blame white people all the time wen my family wasnt here till 1910 and were worse off then they ever were for 30 years. im italian but every black person i kno jus thinks of me as white i jus wana kno why they dont recognize italians as different wen they recognize mexicans dominicans and indians

ehh... Any poetry with swearing is not poetry... And i don't like your approach to it.. Your structure was nasty looking. It was deep, but it was expressed wrong. You had a lot of anger, maybe too much... but thats just my opinion. And though you say we are racist you are just as racist... Obviously... And you cant say you arent racist... because look at that.. LOL... shaky drop...

well i understand where your coming from and i know your not racist...im black to...and so i felt it on a different level na mean thought your structure for this poem was a little off i know where you was coming from and going with it work on your structure and maybe controlling your words a lil lol

Ok... Try this on for size... My wife is White, and my daughter is half... How can I be racist?... Also, da thang I been taught by all my literature teachers is dat there is one rule when it comes to poetry and dat is dat "There are no rules". U can structure and say w/e you want in w/e way you want. Jus so ya know, this poem is written in blues form... Ya know, da same way some of Langston Hughes, Nikki Giovanni, and da majority of Def Poets write in at times. U mean to tell me Def Poets don't never have no profanity in they poems? I learnt this structure in an African American Literature course dat I took a while backk, so I think it's pretty legit.

Basically, there are prolly reasons why some of ya'll won't relate. 1, you prolly aint blackk... 2, you prolly live in da suburbs... 3, u never been in trouble wid da law... 4, u may not understand or have seen da position dat da US society has us in (those dat are trapped in da ghetto)...

Thanx for da feedbackk doe... All opinions are appreciated...

PIC OF ME AND MY DAUGHTER, JUS TO PROVE MY POINT, AND TO SHOW HER OFF, COZ SHE IS SSSSOOOOOOO CUTE! JUS LIKE HER DADDY! LOL

yo this was a good piece....not bat imager and it had good emotion keep it up man

can you peep the 5 pieces i have in here.....thanks

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beautiful tay..tell the critic to sukk a dic

^^Ketch 22 says ya'll critics can Suckk a Dickk... And Tay agrees... U cockksuckkin homos... lOl... Uppin

Hmmm wasnt fellin it much very short and Fell off quite alot.Not very Organized.

4.342/10

That was fucking heavy shit mate, I was feeling that shit coz Tony Blair is
the fucking same, And it's not a dig at white people its a dig at the govement
for letting it's people live their lives not knowing what the fuck is going to happen
next.

I have been writing poem's for ages and I was always told that anything goes
it's how the writer wants you to interpret it, not how the reader think's it
should be written...

See my shit rewind haven't had any feedback on that shit..