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*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-13-04 09:12 AM

*Tay.G*SinCity* vs Insane16
 
10-15 lines
no dr hate or crew
plz xplain votes
1st to 5
u get 20 minutes to spit after check in


Consider this my checkk in. I will drop within 20 mins of your checkk in. G'luckk

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-13-04 10:50 AM

Uppin... Where you at man...................???????????????

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-13-04 02:38 PM

Aiight, we gon' do it like this here...

You too Slow To ‘Bestow-Bombs’, I’m a henchman wid textin, Envoked wid Braun, You get ‘Rode-On’//
You below my Plateau, so I ‘Throw-Rockks’ ‘til you LOSE ya SENSE OF DIRECTION like BLIND PEOPLE WID ‘NO-DOGS’!//

My Glockks POP niggaz TOPS like ‘CONVERTABLES’, couldn’t CATCH MA FLOW if this bitch was a ‘URINAL’!!//
I’m ‘Turnin’-Fools’, ‘Servin-Duels’, & call me HITLER coz I’m TORCHING STARS like ‘BURNIN’-JEWS’!!//

You couldn’t DROP GRIMMY wid ‘BARS-IN-BOWELS’, you gettin’ TKO’d, Someone toss this ‘Mark-A-Towel’!//
I’m Devout to Hockk wid ‘Sharpened-Round’s, & you gettin’ KNOCKKED OUT DA BOX like a fuckkin’ ‘CHARGIN’-FOUL’!!// KO

‘Squash-It-Pal’ Ya ‘Not-A-HOUND’, I’ll GROOM this POODLE wid ‘Shots-&-Rounds’ to stop ya ‘BARKS~&~GROWLS’//
I COLLAPSE ECONOMIES like da ‘STOCKK-IS-DOWN’, & My basis for beatin you is DAILY, we’ll jus call you ‘CARSON~NOW’!!//

You ‘Drilled-Wid-Villianous-Scripts’, Ya not a Raver? I’ll still but da ‘STEEL-IN-YA-LIPS’//
‘Instillin-Ya-Skill-In-A-Fit’, I’ll “Bury You In Ma Wall” so you can say you ‘STILL~IN~DA~BRICKKS’!!//

Dat should do it....

G'luckk homie...

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-14-04 05:28 AM

my bad... typo
 
You ‘Drilled-Wid-Villianous-Scripts’, Ya not a Raver? I’ll still but da ‘STEEL-IN-YA-LIPS’//


dat "but" is supposed to be "PUT" in dat line.... Jus in case you couldn't tell. lOl

anonymouz 05-14-04 07:36 AM

niggah better battle me when thiz iz ova, ya herr....lmao (4 real tho)

Soul Sickness 05-17-04 02:03 PM

this kids shyt dont rhyme and is out dated/
i could go to a kkk meeting and still not get hated/
ur shyt fuked up cuz ya mom and dad is related/
so i guess thats y tayg is a fukin rookie/
wanna beat me? ha u still a newb-ie/
this kid prolly thinks he hott/
yet im everything he not/
insane true thug thats y im takin the top spot/
ill come to "sincity" and kill u/
cuz my hollows r the only things that fill dudes/

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-17-04 03:45 PM

Gotdamn man, it's about time! lOl... Uppin this shit...

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-18-04 08:03 AM

Up... C'mon ya'll vote on this shit, it's been up for like a week already.

Action 05-18-04 11:38 AM

That Shit Wasn't Even Close...

I’m Devout to Hockk wid ‘Sharpened-Round’s, & you gettin’ KNOCKKED OUT DA BOX like a fuckkin’ ‘CHARGIN’-FOUL’!!//

^^Hot As Fuck Right There. Tay G Took Every Category...

VOTE = Tay G

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kEtCh~22 05-18-04 11:55 AM

thie was a complete massacre in my opinion..i would go thru n comment on lines but i don't think its necessary really...

vote: Tay

boaty 05-18-04 12:06 PM

Dam, this shit wasnt even fair. Tay man, you just straight murdered this fool in pretty much all aspects of the battle, especially in your punches. One for Tay

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Strategies 05-18-04 12:10 PM

Now this is what you call a merking.

'Instillin-ya-Skill-in-a-fit', I'll "Bury You In Ma Wall" so you can say you
'STILL~IN~DA~BRICKKS'!!//

Dawg that last line killed it. Insane you did'nt even try dude. The only thing about your verse was that it was easy to read and the strucure was tite. Other than that
nothing stands out.

Vote- Sin city

Soul Sickness 05-18-04 12:13 PM

iight this was a shyty battle on my part but props to tay that was a hott spit mayb i can get a remach sometime later on but for now lets end dis iight uppin....................

Know-Gimix 05-18-04 12:24 PM

Like most everyone else already said this battle wasn't really fair.... TayG had his punches flowin like they were goin out of style, his wordplay was far superior- he had a much more involved vocab and rhyme scheme while basic isn't even the word for insane- This was an easy vote... TayG just try and work on your structure a little bit- it looks pretty good now but I think you could get it better. Vote - TayG.... Please return the favor guys...... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124891

or http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124935

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-18-04 03:36 PM

Thanx for all da votes ya'll........ Uppin this shit again........


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