Scarface87 VS. Miss Fiya Gurl
 

this the battle challenja, u spit first
due no lata than 3:00 this aftanoon central time
no d/r
no c/v
max lines: 14

got structure?
 

aight this fa the record...
my silencers carry ya voice, desert eagles target - u - on the menu
but nigga ya got no choice, its set in ya like some fuckin’ mildew

then it explode, kamikaze separatin’ your frontal from your back
ya organs erode, ya fam stunned watchin’ like a terrorist attacked

gave him time fa breath, close ya Mouth-wash and use Scope
too shallow for my depth,(lol) I hold up “bars” he drops the soap

blood drips from ya crown, use your spit with surrenda flag to mop it
this queen hold ya down, he look up to me like Lord of Rings do Hobbits

this ya formal invite, I bring ya ass mo’ SCARs, you FACE your ill- fate
8-7 dynamites ignite, breakthrough WINDOWS programmed like BILL GATES

nigga tryna blaze, drop ya shit! I swallow and spit it betta than Minotaur
passin’ out grades, give ya A(ss) new meaning fa group-study seminars

you full of ciphers, I throw curves straight and leave ya ass bombarded
hold shit like diapers, he punches his own chest like he fuckin’ retarded

Lol... lol... Fuckin' Cut... :shocked:

this shit is open fa votes drop ya feedback with it...

I Put Less Blows To Da Flow When I Battle A Female
^^^Maybe you should have came harder on her/lol

I'm Scarface, So Say Hello To My Lil' Friend Then Flee
And You A Bita, Cauze That Girl From "Making Da Band" Is What You're Pretendin To Be
^^^didnt understand that second line

Missfiyagurl killed it all the way through.
this ya formal invite, I bring ya ass mo’ SCARs, you FACE your ill- fate
8-7 dynamites ignite, breakthrough WINDOWS programmed like BILL GATES
^^^Nice multiez and metta 8.89969858/10

vote Missfiyagurl

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123611

^^^could you peep diz

These were all nice, I'm impressed, this was definately a One sided Battle,
Scareface- From the name to the verse you dropped was lame...not too original, ya lines was hella long... you got served...

Vote= MissFiya

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aight i think scarface just got fucked up. i guess he underestemated his oposition due to gender. big mistake dawg.

scarface: So What Made You Rap In This, Missy Ellliott?
I'ma Beat You So Quick It's Like Me Cummin In Ya Tits

that line was wack dawg.. pretty shitty. you got yo ass handed to you.

missfiya nice job.

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thanx fa tha votes... i apreciate the explanations...
still upppin' fa votes...

Ima break it down a little diff. First of all, ya'lls shit was tight. I would love to see a rematch...make it happen tonite :)

Both of ya'll brought that ill shit. I was feelin' both of ya'lls shit all the way through. I marked both of you as even, hell, I had to make copies of yall shit and mark it wit a red pen to see who dropped the illest shit. Who said girls can't spit?

shit, Miss Flya you dropped some really hot shit. You came complex and put thought into your shit...really...i was feelin' ev'ry line. you had good structure and easy flow. You combo-ed on Scar with punches endlessly. I was like damn, when she gonna stop. By the way I'm not lickin' yo clit cause I want to hit...just givin' credits where credits due!! Your best verse to me (and this was hard to choose) - "this ya formal invite, I bring ya ass mo’ SCARs, you FACE your ill- fate
8-7 dynamites ignite, breakthrough WINDOWS programmed like BILL GATES" Your closer was nice too.

Mr. Scarface:
...lyrically, I thought you could do better. I think you took it easy on Miss Flya cause she was a girl. Haven't you ever balled with a chik, took it easy, and she beat your azz (well, maybe that's just me) hahahah. But, you had flow kid, and I was feelin' your shit too. You had me chucklin' on the female punches you threw, but that was about it. Most of your battle was swingin' uppercuts. You can hit or miss with those, and you missed more than hit. Don't get me wrong, you dropped some nice shit too. I liked your line "I'm Goin Below Da Max Linez Cauze I Know You Had Enough
Cauze I'm Like A Cop Da Way Ya Whole Style Just Been Cuffed" that shit was original. You fought well, bruh, but she had too many mixed combos for you. Next time, don't hold her hand when you battle, shit, knee her azz in the chest!! My 2 cents...ONE

vote: Miss Flya

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this lines right here baically won miss the battle

then it explode, kamikaze separatin’ your frontal from your back
ya organs erode, ya fam stunned watchin’ like a terrorist attacked

gave him time fa breath, close ya Mouth-wash and use Scope
too shallow for my depth,(lol) I hold up “bars” he drops the soap

blood drips from ya crown, use your spit with surrenda flag to mop it
this queen hold ya down, he look up to me like Lord of Rings do Hobbits

this ya formal invite, I bring ya ass mo’ SCARs, you FACE your ill- fate
8-7 dynamites ignite, breakthrough WINDOWS programmed like BILL GATES


her flow,stucture,punches were all better she came with just a much harder rap the other dude was ok but he just needs to eleavate some before he goes against someone with that much talent
vote=missy

plz drop an honest vote in my battle below thx!

breakdown:


scarface87:

A Girl?, She Don't Even Think That Battlin Is Serious
I'm Here With Someone That Every Half An Hour Be Havin Her Period
^^good opener hard punch 7/10
So What Made You Rap In This, Missy Ellliott?
I'ma Beat You So Quick It's Like Me Cummin In Ya Tits
^^does not rhyme 2/10
I'm Here Dissin You When I Should've Been Datin You
Now My Linez Got You Sliced Up Like What A Wu-Tang Member'll Do
^^good punch decent flow 5/10
I Put Less Blows To Da Flow When I Battle A Female
Cauze We Be Beauty And Da Beast And I Know They Don't Like To Break A Nail
^^bad 2nd line and stretched 4/10
I'm Scarface, So Say Hello To My Lil' Friend Then Flee
And You A Bita, Cauze That Girl From "Making Da Band" Is What You're Pretendin To Be
^^1st line ok 2nd line stretched 3/10
I'm Goin Below Da Max Linez Cauze I Know You Had Enough
Cauze I'm Like A Cop Da Way Ya Whole Style Just Been Cuffed
^^good meta and punch 6/10
A Girl To Beat Me Gotta Be A Classik Joke
So Run On To Ya Borfriend, I'm Now A Person In Ya List That You Gotta Provoke.
^^another stretched line bad finisher 3/10

overall: 34/70

missfiyagurl:

my silencers carry ya voice, desert eagles target - u - on the menu
but nigga ya got no choice, its set in ya like some fuckin’ mildew
^^good opener decent punch 6/10
then it explode, kamikaze separatin’ your frontal from your back
ya organs erode, ya fam stunned watchin’ like a terrorist attacked
^^hott loving the structure 8/10
gave him time fa breath, close ya Mouth-wash and use Scope
too shallow for my depth,(lol) I hold up “bars” he drops the soap
^^best bar in battle 10/10
blood drips from ya crown, use your spit with surrenda flag to mop it
this queen hold ya down, he look up to me like Lord of Rings do Hobbits
^^good punch not too hott 5/10
this ya formal invite, I bring ya ass mo’ SCARs, you FACE your ill- fate
8-7 dynamites ignite, breakthrough WINDOWS programmed like BILL GATES
^^hott ass personal gurl got skill 8/10
nigga tryna blaze, drop ya shit! I swallow and spit it betta than Minotaur
passin’ out grades, give ya A(ss) new meaning fa group-study seminars
^^lol another hott punch 7/10
you full of ciphers, I throw curves straight and leave ya ass bombarded
hold shit like diapers, he punches his own chest like he fuckin’ retarded
^^lmao @ punches his own chest 8/10

overall: 52/70

vote: missfiyagurl.........hott verse from her...scarface u still need to elevate work on structure and more personals and punches


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^^Couldn't Agree More...

VOTE: MISSFIYAGURL

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man misfiya girl gets my vote heres da breakdown
Flow:Fiya
Structure: scarface
Punches: fiya
rhymes Fiya

Vote goes 2 fiya yo scarface ur flow was pretty tight KIND OF but u need 2 elevate u brought a soft verse u saw how fiya came harder u need 2 learn off of her shes sick lolz ~1~