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you tink ur a fuckin lyrical genius//
Ive seen da fuckin size of ya penis//
It aint much biggr dan a penut//
ur standin all tall//
Thinkin ur da bomb// u wana go bk to ya gay lover Tom....Or was dat Phill// ur lucky u dont need to waste ur money on da day afta pill//They always sed Jack n Jill When up da hill/For u its fuckin went up ya boys batty crease//
u shud be tied up on a leash// dey isnt no time for peace// Your 22yrs old and fancyin ur 5 yr old neice// sheeeesh// Your rhymes make no sense// Dey dont mean jack//hense wat u try n get through// Ur gettin suycked off by dat tellytubby hoover...noo noo// oooo I broke my shoe shoe// mommy mummy I need tha loo// ur actin like ur 2//Start growin up and b a man// No one will eva take u now biatch// u wana wish and wonder wid everytink u have// maybe a buckeed tooth lad// but u aint precious no more// Go down were u belong...yea on the floor........


lol, I want feedbk plz but dat is actually da worst eva thread ive made...well im only a gal!! hehe
Holla bk ;)

lol, its shit...n yo all no it :(, but feedbk plz..peace out ;)

well um work on ur structure a bit..and i lost ur flow mid way through..you had no multie's...come harder ya know..lol u talked about a lot of dick sucking..put more substance into it cha know..but it was nice for a first drop yo keep elevating *one*

SpokenBluntly

p.s. (and don't ever say ur "only a girl"...girls can rip shit to ma..keep ya head up)!

thnx for da advise..bare it inmind..safe

yo dat aint bad girl u aint jus a grl u a kl grl hu can drop big bombs n elavate dnt put ur self down like u do round ur mates

Um.....were you talkin bout my Penis, cus I dont think, you've seen it, or you would of asked to clean it....The structure of ya rhyme wasnt that good, work on that and maybe you'll have sumthin...

Dont diss me again...lol
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hehe ;)

needs a lil more work but u r def gettin better since the last couple posts keep elevatin iight.................

these are well oldlol, I dno y dey bk in lol