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Bone Anthem!*!
check it, i spit and fire in a hurst, I lyrically shoot as i burst, catching da only bitch i hit first, 4real i jump off drugs as i take da pill, feling ill while catching money in da air still, and i fink am goin crazy, seeing butterflies eating daisys, am just lazy, so i cant bust a move feeling da heat, i cant look homes, and i cant speak, tomorow a time where i gotta be dissin, hittin homies out class in my mc written, lyrics while taking a pill, and still shooting my piss on da toilet but am missin, laterz :D |
i wud love feedback :)
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no one?
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It shows potential but I think you just need to keep writing right now--- it all comes with time.
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