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Choppa--city Vs DeLeon
alright these are your rules
15linez no d/r votez no feeding no bitching drop 30min after check alright just check in.... |
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Checkin........................
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Imma gonna fuck you up in this battle.......Glad you didnt play hooky// But I cant knock ya.......Cuz even the horniest man wouldnt "Hit This Pussy"// Forgot to mention......this flow will make ya Scream and Shout// My flow is "HOTT"...but my heatz just "Ventin Out"// nigga you aint a warrior.....more like a boy scout// Ya on the road to victory...... but your rhymes took a differnt route// Im questioning my cmprehension....of your rhyme invention// Choppa so weak.....he got jumped at a Pokemon Convention// your shits "mixed".....Mines Purebreed// A "pussy"........cuz thats the only way he's known for "buryin heads"// its alright if you scared....of my "Cut Throat Threats"// cause you aintin gettin signed.....Like "Hobbo's Checks"// Imma put your balls to tha "Net".....Like a "Bad Tennis Player"// havin ya layin on tha floor......gaspin for Air// Ya "Flow" is "Movin"........but your rhymes are going "No Where"// |
alright just waitin on you dogg...you got like 15 mins
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u suck at texting-yo lyrics is dead it was weak and sent to lethal injection...
neva be hard enuff 2 get a arrection-LD on his sigs stands 4 lyrically dislexed... he can send his lyrics 2 charity it still want be charished.... when he type his computer freeze cuz even dell get embarrassed.... choke him online have his lyrics sealed-he tryed out 4 14 crews and neva got a deal... battling 10 newbies 1 u got killed-i give yo cpu a virus and u still wont be lyrically ill.... he throwin weak lame punches not connecting-like he was mike tyson....... he juss a open mic gettin corrected-he only clap thunder mine is lightning..... de leon easy 2 defeat-bragg about dat u da worste nigga on Rb.... cuz yo lyrics is faker than dat white boy on scary movie 3....... u can light a match 2 a rail road yo track still wont be hott....... u fake in lyrcial destruktion killa bwoy shouldve amde u mascot..... rapbattle battle of shame-blow yo lyrics up juss liek yo sigs retain..... punches got a history of missin-juss like he misspelled his username.... ****<< was better than yo whole verse delon loss column changed.. |
hey they were both hot spits....but i cant vote
if i could choppa would be my vote but it was close nice spit guys |
ok hey this is how i see it goin down
uhm flows-both flows were good but i think leon's were better more consistent, uhm for structure both were noticble but again i think this goes to leon, for punches both punches were their uhm leons stood out to me more a good line was the nigga you aint a warrior.....more like a boy scout// Ya on the road to victory...... but your rhymes took a differnt route// and for choppa rapbattle battle of shame-blow yo lyrics up juss liek yo sigs retain..... punches got a history of missin-juss like he misspelled his username like i said both punches were their ...and both used multi's but not to the extent they could have been used overall leon close battle tho guys keep it up ...and if yah get a chance vote on all shifty fingers in the front line thnxs guys |
uppin for some votes.......
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their i finally got 40 posts so i can vote hey guys if yah dont mind vote on shifty vs pimp rawb thnxs guys
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choppa-hot stuff.....Nice with the structure....and came desent
with the flows....I liked it....Balanced was stabled as possible... DOnt really know about the personals....Multies was good aight.....Nice stuff.....8/10 Deleon-Hot stuff also......The structure was nice work on multies a lil more....also the flows..was off by a slight....was feelin a alot though....Balance was ok but you did good aight.....7/10 |
I DONT EVEN THINK THERE IS ANY NEED TO BREAK THIS DOWN BECUASE CHOPPA KILLED!!!! but here it goes anyways
open: CHOPPA close: CHOPPA personals: CHOPPA metas: CHOPPA punches: CHOPPA multis: CHOPPA win: CHOPPA this shit was onesided choppa killed with his punches here is my favorite: he can send his lyrics 2 charity it still want be charished.... when he type his computer freeze cuz even dell get embarrassed.... KEEP ELEVATIN YALL!!! |
good battle i cant vote yet but i give it to deleon if i cood
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DELEON LOP SIDED STRUCTURE. YOU FLOW WAS GOOD, NICE PUNCHES. WHY DO YOU WRITE SOMANY PERIODS IN BETWEEN YOUR LINES? IT THAT COMPENSATING FOR SOMETHIN? ANYWAY YOUR PUNCHES WER IGHT-NOTHIN AMAZING. GOOD VERSE THOUGH.CHOPPA-NICE VERSE, LAME NAME. GET ORIGINAL. NICE PUNCHES AND FLOW. I LIKE YOUR MULTIPLES SON. YOU KILLED HIM WITH YOUR STRUCTURE. YOURS WAS WAY BETTER.STEP UP YOUR PWOER IN YOUR MULTIPLES THOUGH. NICE BATTLE GUYS.
RETURN THE FAVA:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123815 VOTE=CHOPPA |
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