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Lyrical havok vs Mc Murder
aight heres the rules...
no d/r no biting of course basically house rules 5-10 lines aight...blind spit in 20 Win given because MC Murder was caught biting -Cprogress |
checkin.....time starts once you check in aight
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hahah MC you gettin merkd;)
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um...are you gonna be a now show...coz i just wasted 3 credits on a herb
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Call me the ~“cleaning man”~ as I get rid of the ~“excess grout”~ and ~slay this “scrub”~
And with his ~spleen in hand~ im gonna clear his ~chest out~ like vick’s ~vapo rub~--1 ~Shocking-this-d.i.k.e~, had him ~talkin-in-fright~ I tried raping LyriCal HavoK , but it ~brought-him-delight~ Bring this match to a close, ~locking-it-tight ~Throwing 'stones at Tyson' is the only way you ~“rocking-the-mike My ~heat-smack~ and stuff you in a ~street-crack,~ Snatch your legs, ~eat-the-fat~ and hand you your ~feet-back~ ~Heed-that~, make steaks with your limbs, now youre really “off the ~meat-rack...... |
prolly searchin his notebook for anything that might get him a vote...hey flash dont you hate it when people act hella tough then wit it comes down to a battle they turn cold turkey haha
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o"~"k haha i guess ill key something up against eminems notebook...ha...
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Havok's Verse due to the fact he is having problems posting
i'll make u take death as its handed like `recieveing pictures` of the 'devil'... and put more "Sickness" 'under ur skin' then AID's Infested dick posted under your nable// (location: under your skin) u got the best HEAD-GAME EA and Sega Sports rival with you...i warned you not to fuck wit me by sending him OPEN BODY BAGS so he could c what he was Getting Into//(that was enough..) but ima keep going~~ Son You Betta KEEP SHIT CLEAN, Cuz I'll HEAT THIS BEAM// BEAT THIS TEEN And Leave Em Unda Da Hood Like Da Engine On A V-SIXTEEN"!!// oh well...it was weak but enough |
sorry i didnt do it the way he asked
i'll make u take death as its handed like recieveing pictures of the devil// and put more "Sickness" 'under ur skin' then AID's Infested dick posted under your nable// (location: under your skin) u got the best HEAD-GAME, EA and Sega Sports rival with you...i warned you not to fuck wit me by sending you OPEN BODY BAGS so u could c what u was Getting Into//(that was enough..) but ima keep going~~ Son You Betta KEEP SHIT CLEAN, Cuz I'll HEAT THIS BEAM// BEAT THIS TEEN And Leave Em Unda Da Hood Like Da Engine On A V-SIXTEEN// oh well that was weak but enough to merk this newb |
my vote goes to Lyrical Havok becuae his verse was better
havok......better punches......................didnt really like your structure and it kinda made your flow a little bit choppy and hard to read.............you had a good personal in there and that was prolly what wun it for you MC..............structure wasnt good.............threw off your flow jus like Havoks..............you deffinly need some work on your punches and personals........you need to reword your shit so it hits harder and is more effective |
uppin 4 votes
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lyrical havok got this wit ease he had better punches,
structure and flow.Mc murder u was tigh but ur structure and ur punches was way off u need to work on them. Vote: lyrical havok Best lines:(LH)Call me the ~“cleaning man”~ as I get rid of the ~“excess grout”~ and ~slay this “scrub”~ And with his ~spleen in hand~ im gonna clear his ~chest out~ like vick’s ~vapo rub~--1 (MM)Son You Betta KEEP SHIT CLEAN, Cuz I'll HEAT THIS BEAM// BEAT THIS TEEN And Leave Em Unda Da Hood Like Da Engine On A V-SIXTEEN"!!// |
Hot battle... HArd to decide... Ima go wid Murder doe... He seemed to stay more persistant wid his flow & punches...
VOTE=MC MURDER Plz return da favor and put down an honest vote on my battle... Thanks... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...692#post1286692 |
please drop an hoest vote on this http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...811#post1286811
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uppin 4 votes
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