Killah Bwoy Vs Tay.G*SinCity*
 

lets go

10 lines
blind spit
no d/r crew botes or biting
good luck
no feedin

checkin in.........good luck........................

Aiight, consider this my checkk in. Good luckk cuzz...

Get Sparked N lit..Like A kid Drinkin Poison Im Droppin Venomous "Shit"-/
Get Raped Quick..Rymes N Ass re alike cuz dey both been stretched n ript-/
dis harmles bitch wil get cut N Split..On Sum Inocent frog expirement ish-/
Blew out his candles..anthrax on da cake So Consider this your last wish-/
Fire N Hit..Retire N' Quit..Cuz Like Iraq You'll never see a Victory Dance-/
Smack You back to your "past life"..This Bitch is "history", man-/
Like Your AV Shoot you up n' role out in a benz like 2 Pac Bitch-/
Even If You had "Juelz" In Ya Crew You Still couldnt be rich-/
You Get Burned Quick Like A Funeral hosted in the sun-/
Get Devour'd N' Throw'd ain dolmation but "dawg".. When you "see Spots run"-/



BLOW NIGGA

You Get Burned Quick Like A Funeral hosted in the sun

^^ hot line...wen u wear black u'll get burned in the sun

hey guys vote for the shifty-vs-pimp rawb on the front lines im up 4-2 youre vote might be the one that counts uhm ill vote on this battle when the other guy drops tight verse up their so far should be a good battle

Muuuurrrrddeeerrrr!!!
 

Good shit dawg!

Aiight lemme do ma thug thizzle...

Let's ggooooooooooooooooo!

I SPIT SUPREME wid 'GLANDZ~ENHANCED', & Like a GURL in BOYZ SCHOOLS U gettin 'OUT"MAN"NED~IN~CLASS'!!//
I'll Destroy u! 'Stab~&~Slash', Leave neckks slit & 'Crackk~Ya~Backk' then shove ya LEG in ya RECTUM so I can finally 'STAND~YA~ASS'!!// KO

I Retire-Nerds wid 'Smarter~Mixtures', U can see I “FIRE-BIRDZ” soon as my 'CAR~HITS~YA'//
Sigh-At-Jerks and 'Mark~Victims', 'BARZ~SLIT~YA' so SHARP I'll cut this ADOLESCENCE into THIRTEEN like 'BARMITZVAHS'!!// KO

Keep da ‘Fours-Bangin’ I ‘Distraught-Cannons’ at ya ‘Groin-Dammit’!! To keep this ‘Boy’s-Balls-Expandin’// (He only 14… Dickk and Balls aint grown yet! lOl… Checkk profile)
I’m ‘Warped-Man-&’ I’ll cut ya neck wid ‘Swords-Slangin’ but leave ya VOCAL ‘CORD-STILL-CLANGIN’ to say ya ‘THOUGHTS-IS-HANGIN’!!//

I’ll cut you from CHEEK to CHEEK & give you a ‘PERMANENT-FROWN’, Like gettin’ BRAIN while WACKKIN OFF I’m leavin this “JERK”-“DOWN”!!//
Ya whole ‘Verse-Is-Clowned’, Tay ‘Disperses-Rounds’, Void Prickks when Toys Spit, Leavin’ ya BACKK OPEN like ‘NURSES-GOWNS’!!// KO

‘Unloadin-Flame’ wid ‘Potent-Game’ to ‘Roast-This-Lame’, I’ll fold you in half til ya ass ‘Shoulder-Blades’!!//
Leave your ‘Emotions-Slayed’… And fuckk “SPITTIN” A “FLOW”…. This hoe jus got “OCEAN”-“SPRAY”d!!!!!!!//

Typo Error
 

SORRY YA'LL I LEFT SUM'N OUT OF DA 9TH LINE!!

Unloadin-Flame’ wid ‘Potent-Game’ to ‘Roast-This-Lame’, I’ll fold you in half til ya ass touches ya ‘Shoulder-Blades’!!//

^^What's in bold should be in there...

hey man you wanted my honest vote tay and i got to tell you ...yah broke the rules dud so you loose aoutomatically no matter how tight youre flows are and youre punches....how you ask.....you wrote ten bars ...the battle was set for ten lines...if you have the opportunity of ten bars tover someone who spit ten lines then its an unfair advantage for more personal hits and things like that so i gotta vote killah

^^Dat's Bullshit!!

You should be votin for who had da best verse not for who you think went over. If Killah got a problem wid my verse then dat's for him to confront.... NOT DA VOTERZ!!

Fuckkit, Killah, you can have dat vote cuzz... It's da only one u gonna get..

Ay Tay. Dawg you killed that shit. Your structure was kind of fucked up but
you still ripped it.
Ay Killa Bwoy take the boxing glove out of ya sig cause you got knocked out.

Vote-Tay.G

ttay g-.........your structure was fucked man..........and since that was fucked it threw off your flow and made it choppy........your had good punches and your metas where good.......keep elevating and work on your structure..........

killa bwoy-.......you need to elevate man......your structure was good but you need to work on your flow..........your punches are weak and you really went on about nothing........to me it was basically alot of filler lines........elevate......pc

v/tay-g.....

>my first battle<

^return favor

TAY YOUR LINES WERE LONG BUT YOU TORE IT UP. NICE VERSE KILLAW BUT HE TOOK IT TO YOU. ITS MAYBE B/C HE WROTE MORE. ANYWAY TAY YOU HAD A NICE FLOW, PUNCHES AND PERSONAL. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ROOKIE. BE CONSISTENT. DON'T STRETCH YOUR LINES OUT SO LONG JUST TO MAKE APOINT THOUGH. AIGHT RETURN THE FAVA:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123815

VOTE=TAY

kids fucked up he sed my verse was weakk hahah fuckin ass

well pa u wanted my honest...opinion and he came harder..he had MUCH more punchlines then u and his mulitie's were better..i've seen better from u killah...C'MON PA!!! lol still luv ya though *one*

SB