kawtic vs T lite
 

10 lines :laugh:
No hate
No bitin
No recyclin
No D/r

Checkin in Im at school post when i can :thumbup:

Who the hell's this kid, never heard-of-him
Its not my fault his rhymes happened to desert-from-him//
Kid could never be BIG, even if he was a majuscule
It's time to take a lesson from the teacher, pupil//
Kid having dope ryhmes is hopeless like finding W-O-M-D in Iraq
Your punches are harmless, Like michal jackson and kids its a fact//
Im destructive with words, that make even webster shudder
He cant help his style, i bet he left his ryhming dictonary in his cludder//

Eh extremely wack jus bored and rushed pathetic stuff oh well have fun

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I'ma spit soon aight........~1~

You spit eight, I'll spit eight.....muaahhhhaaaa.....[b]btw lol I'ma girl so there went ya whole verse lmao.......anyways hea we go......

I’ma throw ya brain in tha ocean, and leave your mind at bay //
You could join The SIMPLE LIFE and still wouldn’t be in your HAY day // (haha get it lol)

I’m in the lead of the race, pumpin’ lead with this pencil //
So I’ll put holes around ya figure, similar to a worn-out stencil //

Ya whole rhyme style is Sloppy, so Joe-Blow just get this straight //
Cuz the only time you cum original is on dicks at first dates //

Listen up kid, I’m a finish this battle on a high-note,
You get kilt for whackness…so It’s Murder “T” Wrote //

Blah, somethin' quick.....ehhh All I needed ;)


Votes up

Metahs- T-lite
multis- T-lite
punchlines- T-lite
points- T-lite
Creativity- T-lite
FLow- T-lite


U know who the winner is!!!! kawtic², i feel that u can do better, cause your verse was trash to me!!!! Lets battle kawtic²!!!!!

this is what won the battle-

I’ma throw ya brain in tha ocean, and leave your mind at bay //
You could join The SIMPLE LIFE and still wouldn’t be in your HAY day // (haha get it lol)

I’m in the lead of the race, pumpin’ lead with this pencil //
So I’ll put holes around ya figure, similar to a worn-out stencil //

Ya whole rhyme style is Sloppy, so Joe-Blow just get this straight //
Cuz the only time you cum original is on dicks at first dates

some decent lines, i can see your skillz...

as for Kawtic-
I think you was too rushed, cus your rhymes showd it...the structure was good. punches were aaight...
nice battle tho

Vote= T

HAHAHAHA i don't even LIKR T-LITE and she merked ur ass


Metahs- T-lite
multis- T-lite
punchlines- T-lite
points- T-lite
Creativity- T-bag
FLow- T-bag
ATTETION GRABBER-TEA BAG
(t-lite=t-bag lol it's an inside joke)
BUT YEAH i give u props for merking this..."mc"

SPOKENBLUNTLY

Good battle....Kawtic there isn't much to say about what you dropped except why? what possessed you to waste your own time that, man you gotta elevate seriously son

T Lite....that was alrite I can see you have a whole lot of potential but right now your still blossoming, you had a few punches they were kinda weak but he didn't have any so thats a plus for you, you had alittle wordplay, an flow an structure was tight keep dropping an kepp improving cuz I think you could be damn good
Vote: T Lite

Kawtic: Opening: Nothing Special. Vocab: Normal, Plain. Flow: Not good at all, didnt connect right. Punches: Didnt have any punches worth writing down here. Closing: Plain. This could've been a lot better. DAMN MAN YOU LET A FEMALE DO YOU LIKE THAT!!!!!!
T-Lite: Opening: Mind at bay line was very original, feeling it. Vocab and Flow: Both were good. I liked the use of the words you used which made the flow go together better. Punches: This is what killed Kwatic. He didn't have none. And T-Lite Did. So my vote goes to her.

Vote: T Lite
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Kawtic I wasn't feelin ya punches or flow.
T-Lite yeah sounded rushed but i liked the flow, weak punches most of it tho.

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