Boaty Vs. NastyEm
 

8 linez
3 to ko
5 to win

***chin chek ***

Shit I didnt even know I was in this battle
Aight, I got this

NastyEM, a Lloyd Banks rip-off
He thinks he can rap just like him when hed really just wanna suck his dick off
Philly in the house, when we really want it out
Youre the worst rapper there its just takin you too long to figure it out
Just thinkin you can spit is bad as it is
Thinkin you can beat me is dumb as fuck cause ive heard better rhymes from 5 year old kids

WEAK..you win
i say that you won..i like you avatar and your abs, they look tasty
can i have a bite, i guess yoiu can call me a biter. 10/10

n you sucked all over this aint a lolly ... pop hoe 0/10

return the favor, it is a hot battle of mines
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208

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lmao wtf

u only wrote 6 ...
so i give 6

here we go!!!!!!!!!


Em Like wildfirez, son ,Im ~blazing homez~ and ~waiving chromez~//
ima make a boatey life storey short, like ~basement homez~// ( stories- height)
u computer nerd ~netted up~you gassed ass ~beheaded fuck~//
difuse dis herb~u shredded up~, so just take a "L" like ~Seven7up~//
flowz shine like ~glowin lenz~, and you couldnt " see da light" even wit ~"golden gemz~"//
cuz dis fagat "boaty" see more "Cox" then MOnica from da ~show of "Friends"~//

Aight man both need work on the structure both had good punches and personals but nasty came harder it aint cool to use hardly any lines it aint much to go on thats why the admins put in the minimum 10 line rule but it was aight but elevate.

V/NastyEm

Aight fuck this shit
Lets get it crackin

You wanna talk about being "netted up"?
Youre rhymes make no sense, this aint Shakespeare you dumb ass fuck
Tryin to be as sweet as me with a sour ass flavor
You read my rhymes and its the flow you savour
You think you can spit cause you put your lines in "quotes"?
Bitch youd show up at a freestyle with a handful of notes
One person voted and you think youre a better MC?
Its round two bitch now lets see what youve got to use against me

boaty i think you came harder this time.nasty i didn't like your verse b/c you concentrated more on boastin than rhymin. boaty nice punches and ending. your structure is improvin, no disrespect but yall need to step up. return the fava.

vote-boaty

how many rapz u gotta write to try to beat me?

ayo boaty i am in the group man i tried out the other day and just got the news that i had made it in

Shit Nasty had this wrapped up in the first two ta three lines. Better punches and opener. As well, he used mulit's and personals where as Boaty didn't. Boaty try stick'n to newbs for two or so battles to develop your game. As well read some others battles and pick up on wordplay. Cause your punches were good, real good they were just underdevelped.

Aight, just cause im new doesnt mean I cant keep this shit up

If it was all about the first spit by Nasty won hands down, Boaty why
didn't you go hard in the first spit like you did in the last one?

Nasty won this in every department,

Sorry man you can't afford to go easy on noob's coz you don't know where
the cat'z coming from.


Vote Nasty.

wat da fuck u been smokin son???? u make no sense.....lol im boastin ???? ur da only boe dat said dat...lol

aight my vote is for NastyEM. you both need to work on punches but nasty pulled it off. boaty you could have had this one man but you rhymed the same thing to many times and had weak punches, sorry bro, no hate tho, keep rappin.

Vote= NasteyEM

This battle wasn't even close! NastyEm took this battle with Ease! Boaty Dawg I see potential in your skillz! Take this battle & learn & up your skillz!

Vote: NastyEm