Im here to destroy U!!!!
 

Cling rap, rope on ya neck, cut up ya chest, make u have bad flash backs like a Vietnam vet//
I’m here to get paid, so I’ll work u like a slave, get smoked by the blunt , just smell the purple haze//
I kill soloist like 50, make these bitches fatter then missy, got u looking as bad as Chris Rock on new jack city//
I’m the definition of hits, u need this smooth brown chick, instead u mother fuckers want to be as fake as Janet Jackson and lil Kim’s tits//
Living with me is hell, cause I speak cliental; I’m making as much hits as R.Kelly before he goes to jail//
U can’t do this, bitches I’m foolish, don’t step up to me, cause I’ll reject niggaz like Pepsi did ludacris//

you got a good flow. i liked it.

thanks! Still uppin^^^

Cling rap, rope on ya neck, cut up ya chest, make u have bad flash backs like a Vietnam vet//
I’m here to get paid, so I’ll work u like a slave, get smoked by the blunt , just smell the purple haze// Good flow and wordplay so far ma....

I kill soloist like 50, make these bitches fatter then missy, got u looking as bad as Chris Rock on new jack city//
I’m the definition of hits, u need this smooth brown chick, instead u mother fuckers want to be as fake as Janet Jackson and lil Kim’s tits// Haha last line was funny lmao...

Living with me is hell, cause I speak cliental; I’m making as much hits as R.Kelly before he goes to jail//
U can’t do this, bitches I’m foolish, don’t step up to me, cause I’ll reject niggaz like Pepsi did ludacris// Good ending

I liked this, ya kept a good flow and structure throughtout.....kept it steady......had some good wordplay in dere......

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Nice drop, 8/10.....keep up ma.....~1ne~

This was iight-- it had a good flow to it, a couple of the punchlines were weak but it definately shows skill and potential... stay up.

thanks, still uppin^^^

cool man flo is good, but more intention needed

aye ma NICE...u've elevated so much..ur getting creative and shit keep it ma..nice drop 8/10 *ONE*

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thanks, holla at me with a collab!!!!!!

Weak..............u Barely Wrote A Few Lines N In Almost All Of Them U Had Some Rapper Reference............that,is For Beginners ...stay Away From That.........its Mad Played Out To Be Talkin Bout 50,r Kelly...etc.... Not To Mention Its Wack

hott shyt...no complaints that was some good shyt keep spittin ur shyt is worth more posts................

ur got flow, and u had sum nice lines, i liked da janet and lil kim 1 and da pepsi 1 as well.... u'll do well if u keep it up and improve alil

good flow
 

good flow ma nice wordplay punchlines were a Lil weak...sounded like BABS but nice flo

thanks for the feed back, still uppin^^^^

thought it was hot keep doin you girl.................