li vs. CREATE
 

10 lines max
no crew votes
no hate votes
no d/r votes
no bitin

aight atfter you check in then we both got 20 min.

checked in....g'luck.....

aight pce...brb....................................

..............LIKE CHEAP BRAIDS IM SPLITTEN THIS KIDS WIG.............

i'll stick my dick in ur ear...& make sure u hear wat im cumnin wit//
da way im electrifing dis crappy rapper u culd say im literally stunnin shit//
he couldnt pen point his rhymes so he decided to spit on computers//
kids still a virgin, viewing dp's pics is da only place he'll see a pair of hooters//
fucked dis pussy up...like his pregnancy test i got him seen shit positive//
breakin the laws you live... wit my intelectual manifested derogitive's//
u just made a devistating sacrafice like when i was hung from the cross//
its like your head to head with defeat the way i got you facing a loss//
LI you could neva cumn hard...even if you was spitten erections//
failed the lyrical inspections...follow da directions in de tutorial section//

aight just a lil somethin off the top off the dome........pce...

my verse
 

Okay okay….

Dog you’re a fake, cant play a playa, proved that in our crew thread…
Asked to get back in, expected to be accepted, but got NO instead…
Walks around like a top head, and his rhymes cant be messed with…
But when it came down to votes, no one had you on their respect list…
With a record like that, your rhymes don’t come close to your expectations…
That’s why im goin for best emcee and topical, but you have no nominations…
Spend your money on an education, ya need it more than a mic…
This guys a dumbass, let alone his name, he cant spell mine right*…
You’re a weakling, try all you want but you just can’t attack this…
Now I understand why ya records good, cause you hunt for wackness…

Explanation - check the poll cuz he forgot to put the . after I

Close battle y'all
Create........man good drop you had some hard punches throughout the verse from begginnning to end, you had good structure an flow, but you lacked in the personals, vocab was tight, but multies was lackig, but besides personals an multies you had a hot verse, your opener was hot, an ya wordplay was real tight, closer was highlight of your verse, good drop man.

L.I. you came hard too, it was exact opposite for you, you had good personals, but your punches were lacking, didn't really have any multies, vocab was good, flow was good, strructure was good, I got your opener but I din't like it, 2nd line was good, but closer was really weak, no disrespect man but ya lost this one in my opinon, good drop but a drop off from some of your other drops man.
Vote: Creative

^^ lol personals are punches....o well....and i did have multi's....anyways thanks for the honest votes...ima up this...

yo, this was a tight battle. I do however think that L.I. took this by a slight margin. It was a HOT battle tough. Mad props to both.

CreaTiviTie, I think you had a very good verse. Awesome vocab usuage, and nice punches. You had many good hard hittin' punches too. I liked your verse. BUT, your flow was a little shaky in a few areas. Overall, I give you a 9.2/10 HOT verse. Nice drop, man.

L.I., You had an awesome verse. You had pretty good vocab and some multi's, which is good. You also, had some nice hittin' punches. Your flow was also consistent throughout the entire verse. Also, the link shit, lol, made some of the punches really good. But I think you should cut down on them, cuz some people might be too lazy to look at them. But overall, I give you a 9.4/10

Good battle by both.
v/L.I.

Am I Allowed to vote?

nah u cant poll....but feel free to leave feedback.......

go ahead DV you can vote.............................

aight chek it

Creativitie:
Flow:8/10
Wordusage:8/10
Vocab:7/10
Creativity:7/10
Punches:8/10
Opener:7/10
Closer:7/10
Overall:52/70

comment:good shit you came hard wit the punches but it woulda been a eazy win if you had personals ya feel...nice vocab and wordplay//

Fav/Line:closer

L.I.
Flow:8/10
Wordusage:5/10
Vocab:7/10
Creativity:7/10
Punches:9/10
Opener:8/10
Closer:7/10
Overall:

comment:this wasnt a hate vote or anything like that...nice personals just didnt have alot of punches like Triple_N said...good shit overall...you've elevated..

Fav/Line:opener NiCe Personal

v/creaTivitie

Overall i have to say i enjoyed this battle.


CreaTiviTie:

Good verse. Nice wordplay, good punches that was hitting hard, but some seemed forced. Flow was off and on thats what messed me up in yo verse. Since it was blindspit good stuff Overall nice drop.

L.I:

Also good verse, You had pretty Vocab was ok but good multis. Punches was dope u connected it with personals..smart. The only thang u beat Creative is u stayed consistent with yo punches. U was creative added links to make it personal. But overall I have to give it to you. Nice verse.

V/LI

CreatiVe U my dawg...but LI edged this one with betta personals my man.

Ps:

It Wont Let Me Poll Vote.

closed closed closed OMG L.I ripped shit on dis 1 oh god

LI-nice ish punches was off da chain let alone by nice punches wit a creative flow

bestline-Walks around like a top head, and his rhymes cant be messed with…
But when it came down to votes, no one had you on their respect list…


hott

2nd bestline-With a record like that, your rhymes don’t come close to your expectations…
That’s why im goin for best emcee and topical, but you have no nominations…

goddamn dat wass ill

worsteline-none start 2 finish it was illmattic

overall verse gets a 9.6/10 top flight motha fuckin security

creative-descent shit but couldve stepped up cuz Li brought some ill shit 2 da table

bestline-u just made a devistating sacrafice like when i was hung from the cross//
its like your head to head with defeat the way i got you facing a loss//


nice

worsteline-none but still no match

overall yo verse gets a 8.9/10

winner-L.I