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.\\assacre vs. me
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3-0 is ko no c/v no d/r no h/v spit due 15 min. afta check in u spit first.. |
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aight i'll spit in 10-15 peace 1. |
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i'm going to make it 10-16 aight i wrote mine just let me put it down 1. |
Keystyle you know how it is...Yo...
Get ready for war…as I bring gore with machetes and metaphors/ I’ll sever this whore, vertically slice through his body to settle the score/ Nothing else matters, I concentrate hard to rip your Openmic status/ As the pain gathers I continue to attack and slice your apparatus/ If this was ‘Christmas’ you still couldn’t ‘rap(wrap) gifted’/ I get the axe lifted, strike hard enough to leave your back twisted/ Smash hard fisted, my superior flows would have your tracks drifted/ See this mic? feel the impact as u get smacked with it, drop rap n quit it/ Stacked when spitted with ammunition that’ll kill cats and remain acquitted/ Your submitted to this rap style that’s transmitted through comp fibers/ I stomp liars and ‘shock’ cats as ‘spark pliers’ touch with mic wires/ Horrific with the white mask when I knife tracks like Mike Meyers/ Shots are on-point, like moments when Stark fires/(John Starks) This ‘bitch’ “contrasts heat” like his name was ‘Miss’-“doubt fires”/* I posses the esteem that seams to steam swings which leaves ya spleen sever/ My theme’s been clever while the friction you cause is that between feathers** *Miss.Doubtfire – thought it would be clever to flip that name…. **the friction between feathers is very minimal, if there is any at all…friction = roughness…in other words he is barely rough/tough just a lightweight… 1. |
that was very good dawg....very good...aight...this is my check in
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Never thought to be in ya prime like even digits on the Number Line//
Cept for TWO times you confided within the rhymes writtin in other Emcee's minds // Take a loss, for a second maybe you though you had a hot spit// Let me clear the confusion, and put an end to this bum's bitch talkin// Face it you're losin, you beatin me, is like a blood crip walkin// Because I'm sick thats not the reason you begin coughin// Now l.a.y.d has A.I.D.S, shouldnta had ya fudge knocked in// Gay Lines might be played, but what's that say about layd// Read it yaself he wants to penetrate me in unorthodox ways// Im an orthodox youth , my manhood block ya flame (fag)// Like women around you , I like to keep ya cock away// Bad luck I dont fear it, because when I rap I crush hectic Spirits// But If ya Ghost I can't bust ya so I send telekenetic lyrics// Through The Mind's eye, I can supply prison torture tactics// It's all in ya head coz when the facts hit, thats when shit happens// But I rap like Insomniacs coz my rhymes rarely fade to black// I'm made to attack, You can't rewind time after you relapse, so I play it back// And just watch the ways you react, Now it's time to find where they pay me at// Stuck in the hospital, black and blue similar to Navy Hats// In conclusion it's conclusive that this lame is gonna lose it// It's been proven that improvin his game is only good enough for losin// |
Punches were about even. If Undestructable has kept up the punches he started with, with that prime numbers andshit, he would have won it easiy, since neither had great punches. But massacre ripped it with flow, so my vote goes to him
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aight..thanx...uppin da votes plz
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hey i agree about the flow from massacre better more consistant punches and structure was their but massacre also took it with the use of better multi's so neways my vote goes to massacre
return the fav thnxs guys look for shifty fingers vs tay- on the front lines right now |
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this shit hurry get some more votes in here i'm up 2-0 1. |
all right both spits were about even Massacre and undestructable did pretty good Massacre- nice punches lost u at the end but nice flow and shit undestructable- nice punches good flow lost u at the end too u guys are both good but i have to go with Massacre no offense undestructable but he took it by a centimeter
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Ass - Good spit man, good multi's and some good flow, and the punches were landing.
Best Line - Get ready for war…as I bring gore with machetes and metaphors/ I’ll sever this whore, vertically slice through his body to settle the score/ Worst Line - If this was ‘Christmas’ you still couldn’t ‘rap(wrap) gifted’/ I get the axe lifted, strike hard enough to leave your back twisted/ Smash hard fisted, my superior flows would have your tracks drifted/ Un - Good spit man, your flow was good too.. and your punches were good also. Best Line - Let me clear the confusion, and put an end to this bum's bitch talkin// Face it you're losin, you beatin me, is like a blood crip walkin// Worst Line - Through The Mind's eye, I can supply prison torture tactics// It's all in ya head coz when the facts hit, thats when shit happens// OVERALL - Close battle, but the winner is... ASS..lol, he had better punches and multi's was feelin his verse more..Un man, your shit was good to but you didnt have multi's like him and your punches wernt as hard, next time use more multi's and get some strong personals and punches. VOTE - Ass RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123755 |
aight undestrucable...your spit was aight..there wasn't even enough punch to begin wit...well only ur first line was good..but other then that...it was just flow da whole way..
aight ass...ur spit was aight also...u only beat undestrucable because he only had a few punches...and u threw a lil more...but nice vocab dawg... vote: ass |
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