popa doc vs eric89
 

10 lines min.
no d/r
no crew or hate votes
u spit first

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checked in, you spit first k since you wanted 2. And i'll spitstreight after k man peace.

ayo erics thinks he's ludicris with his jewlry thinkin he got style/
thats why im here to wear off your style like makin it fade away vapourised/
i'll scratch your face deliberatly for the sake of makin u more ugly/
wat a catastrphie sooner or later i'll have you hung up as a medal/
this bitch is fed up of rap because he always loses in matches/
so do ya self a favour try doing a duet with craig david singing whats ur flavour/
your nothing but a worthless punk ass bitch that'll never catch up to me/
im to fast you just wouldn't get past, like a clock on the dot, thats why thay call me popa doc/
i'll make you in hisrory going back in time, spin you around in a dazzle like dizee rascal/
this was over pretty quick, next time i won't take it so easy, sicken you and make you go weezy/

Yo papa doc, I should change my name to papa hot
Cuz my verses will burry u alive, then leave u to rot
Yo ima famous rapper to be, cant handle thee, cant stop me
Why u try stopping me kid u know u aint gonna succeed
Ima battlin fool, im jus usin u for a win jus like I use a tool
What did u think u were cool cuz u could challenge me to a duel
Ima stomp all over u like a stampeed of a mad cow diseased herd
I spit so ill, it’ll feel like the venom of the Texan rattler
My punches come at you like a torpedo through the water
You can feel the heat on you getting hotter and hotter
U say this is ur career but ima make u retired
Jus think of it this way bitch u jus got fired

well ill drop a vote on this ok guys honestly either one of yahs came real hard in my opinion uhm you guys need to put more creativity intoy oure rhymes but neways
for structure and flow i give it eric, when it comes to punches both were real weak but erics were more consistent, multis werent used in this battle

v=eric
i took time to vote on this so please do the same guys thnxs look for shifty -vs- fine mind on the front lines

yo thanks. uppin

no prob man just vote on mine if yah dont mind please

i did dogg and NICE SPIT EXTREMELY GOOD.

hey thnxs man for the compliments i appreciate it but if you think i hit hard their you should have seen my other battles man that was taking it easy seriously ill continue to vote on youre battles whenever i see youre name ok do the same lata

all right popa doc had a horrible flow and his words didnt even rhyme. His lines were whack and screwed up but o well - eric89 u actually got maybe a few punches in there and urs rhymed but kinda messed up the flow but thats ok

vote- eric89

can yall vote on my battle with R.A.M. plz in front lines i voted on urs

Eric - Good spit man, you had some good flow there and your punches was hitten hard.

Best Line - My punches come at you like a torpedo through the water
You can feel the heat on you getting hotter and hotter
U say this is ur career but ima make u retired
Jus think of it this way bitch u jus got fired

Worst Line - Yo papa doc, I should change my name to papa hot
Cuz my verses will burry u alive, then leave u to rot

Popa Doc - iight spit man, your flow was off.. but you had good vocab and your punches was iight.

Best Line - ayo erics thinks he's ludicris with his jewlry thinkin he got style/
thats why im here to wear off your style like makin it fade away vapourised/

Worst Line - i'll make you in hisrory going back in time, spin you around in a dazzle like dizee rascal/
this was over pretty quick, next time i won't take it so easy, sicken you and make you go weezy/

OVERALL - iight battle, my votes goes to Eric.. I liked his structure more, and his punches was hotter.. and he flowed better. The other guy needs to work on his flow a bit and maybe add some harder punches and maybe work on usin some personals.

VOTE - Eric

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im have to go with eric he had way beta punches and flow although doc you rmhyed expecially well i think with beat punches u wouldve of won ma vote/ eric

vote on my battle aginst the gilla teen youngkd33 and lyrical demon pls do it honestly

Doc you seem to been improving a lot your flow was better then normal on this
one but the punch's seem too weak and perdictable.

Erick had a better flow and his punch's hit a little bit harder...

I think that Erick just nicked this one.


Vote Erick