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demon VS. VINMAn (vote this damn time pls)
u no the rules
no crew no hate no d/r no biting and u have untill 7:00 tommro to spit Lyrical Demon = Big Man = Unknown Assassin = DQed. |
u spit first ok
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how many dAmm lines nigga
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10 - 20 nigga
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this was a mistake..tryna battle against me...
chuz unlike you..Jesus's return is guaranteed... this is strictly keyed...herb prepare for the ride... help me out....click on the X on the right hand side... you lied...good luck? i dont need it battling you... Save this battle..Point stated...NO one's wacker than you.. I Prescribe Hit's That Are Disconnectin' Ya Fists's Cos Your Punches Are Useless' Like Playin' Hockey Without Tha Sticks Dawg you coming played, wheres the creativity you claim Kid slipped on his ‘spit’, an all hope went down the drain Saw Ya Past Battles Pure Wack-Shit....U ILL?? Pff You Could Be In "Class Wit That Flu" & Ya Spits Still Wouldnt Be Considered A "Classick"{class sick} and vinman is upset, cus he tries so hard but he still gets cracked/ when will he face facts, and collapse, cus his flow is nothin but wack/ |
Demon u gonna battle me or what u want me 2 set it up
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set it up goddammit
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nice verse but if yall lok closely half the time he ddint rmhye oh weel fina spit my vesere
check it this bitch say hes evil that hes a lryical demon but im busting down his fame and pride is all that he keepin my spit is burning and making him cry.... im not done throwing punches untill i see that he die/im the killa and u jus a little ass boy im tossing u around like A basketball.. football... or any other toy my flow is so dangerous it got DA demon tapping out..... he like all THE otherS thAT other that Bitch.... Whine... and Pout/i know my punches feel like a bunch rocks and stones... they gona find u in pieces of FLESH.... SKIN and BONES/i beat yo ass..... like ALI VS LISTON....but In one round unlike the NETS vs PISTONS SORRY IF MY STRUTRUE WAS FUCKED I WAS RUSHING NAD IF THERE ARE IN ANY MISSPELLED WORDS |
Uppin This Shit
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uppin this shit come on people wake the fuck up
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uppin 4votes
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LyricalDemon04: Your opening was good and closing was average. Wordplay and flow was pretty good. What I liked was the punch you had about classic. That shit was real nice. Keep spittin family, you nice.
Vinman: You need work fam. Opening and closing werent that creative. Closing, nets vs pistons line was wack. You need to step up your wordplay and flow. I didn't see any structure as of how you wanted to diss your opponenet. There weren't any punches in your flow and that is what killed you. Need punches to get W's. Keep spitting though fam. Vote: LyricalDemon04 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124582 (PLEASE VOTE ON THIS BATTLE I WAS IN SINCE I TOOK THE TIME TO VOTE ON YOURS, GOOD LOOKIN!!!!) |
demon-few hott stuff but need more work on a few things
also work on similies....But the rest was good...flow need to be better but ya took this becuz of structure wans flow vinman-Work on flows a lil more and hard hittin punches becuz thats what stopped ya.....similies need work so does metas...... v/demon Return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124400 |
Alright fellaz I gotta got wit da demon on this one for 2 reasons. 1 his punches were hotter and 2 I couldn't really understand vinmans verse because of tha structure. All in all it was a aight battle though.
Hottest line of tha battle came from da demon "saw your last battles pure wack shit...U ill? Pff U could be in class wit dat flu and your spits still wouldn't be considered a classick" vote=lyrical demon come thru and peep this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124378 |
I couldn't vote cuz I ain't have 120 posts sorry homeboy
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