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vinman 05-15-04 02:19 PM

demon VS. VINMAn (vote this damn time pls)
 
u no the rules


no crew no hate no d/r no biting and u have untill 7:00 tommro to spit


Lyrical Demon = Big Man = Unknown Assassin = DQed.

vinman 05-15-04 02:20 PM

u spit first ok

Lyrical Demon 04 05-15-04 02:22 PM

how many dAmm lines nigga

vinman 05-15-04 02:32 PM

10 - 20 nigga

Lyrical Demon 04 05-15-04 02:39 PM

this was a mistake..tryna battle against me...
chuz unlike you..Jesus's return is guaranteed...
this is strictly keyed...herb prepare for the ride...
help me out....click on the X on the right hand side...
you lied...good luck? i dont need it battling you...
Save this battle..Point stated...NO one's wacker than you..
I Prescribe Hit's That Are Disconnectin' Ya Fists's
Cos Your Punches Are Useless' Like Playin' Hockey Without Tha Sticks
Dawg you coming played, wheres the creativity you claim
Kid slipped on his ‘spit’, an all hope went down the drain
Saw Ya Past Battles Pure Wack-Shit....U ILL?? Pff You Could Be In "Class Wit That Flu" & Ya Spits Still Wouldnt Be Considered A "Classick"{class sick}
and vinman is upset, cus he tries so hard but he still gets cracked/
when will he face facts, and collapse, cus his flow is nothin but wack/

Da Solution 05-15-04 02:47 PM

Demon u gonna battle me or what u want me 2 set it up

Lyrical Demon 04 05-15-04 02:53 PM

set it up goddammit

vinman 05-15-04 03:05 PM

nice verse but if yall lok closely half the time he ddint rmhye oh weel fina spit my vesere



check it this bitch say hes evil that hes a lryical demon
but im busting down his fame and pride is all that he keepin
my spit is burning and making him cry.... im not done throwing
punches untill i see that he die/im the killa and u jus a little ass boy
im tossing u around like A basketball.. football... or any other toy
my flow is so dangerous it got DA demon tapping out..... he like all
THE otherS thAT other that Bitch.... Whine... and Pout/i know my punches
feel like a bunch rocks and stones... they gona find u in pieces of
FLESH.... SKIN and BONES/i beat yo ass..... like ALI VS LISTON....but In
one round unlike the NETS vs PISTONS




SORRY IF MY STRUTRUE WAS FUCKED I WAS RUSHING NAD IF THERE ARE IN ANY MISSPELLED WORDS

vinman 05-15-04 03:06 PM

Uppin This Shit

vinman 05-16-04 12:00 PM

uppin this shit come on people wake the fuck up

Lyrical Demon 04 05-16-04 01:51 PM

uppin 4votes

DA BOY GENIUS 05-16-04 02:04 PM

LyricalDemon04: Your opening was good and closing was average. Wordplay and flow was pretty good. What I liked was the punch you had about classic. That shit was real nice. Keep spittin family, you nice.

Vinman: You need work fam. Opening and closing werent that creative. Closing, nets vs pistons line was wack. You need to step up your wordplay and flow. I didn't see any structure as of how you wanted to diss your opponenet. There weren't any punches in your flow and that is what killed you. Need punches to get W's. Keep spitting though fam.

Vote: LyricalDemon04

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124582 (PLEASE VOTE ON THIS BATTLE I WAS IN SINCE I TOOK THE TIME TO VOTE ON YOURS, GOOD LOOKIN!!!!)

Metaskriptz 05-16-04 02:16 PM

demon-few hott stuff but need more work on a few things
also work on similies....But the rest was good...flow
need to be better but ya took this becuz of structure wans flow

vinman-Work on flows a lil more and hard hittin
punches becuz thats what stopped ya.....similies
need work so does metas......

v/demon Return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124400

R.A.M 05-16-04 02:28 PM

Alright fellaz I gotta got wit da demon on this one for 2 reasons. 1 his punches were hotter and 2 I couldn't really understand vinmans verse because of tha structure. All in all it was a aight battle though.
Hottest line of tha battle came from da demon
"saw your last battles pure wack shit...U ill? Pff U could be in class wit dat flu and your spits still wouldn't be considered a classick"

vote=lyrical demon
come thru and peep this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124378

R.A.M 05-16-04 02:29 PM

I couldn't vote cuz I ain't have 120 posts sorry homeboy


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