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( Black Magik ) 05-15-04 02:40 PM

Black Magik vs. GKillaz05
 


1. 10 lines min and max
2. All votes must be explain
3. No crew hate or dickride votes
4. You set the due date It could be tonite if you wanna
5. No biting recyling
6. First to 5, 3-0 is Ko - 4-1 is TKo

( Black Magik ) 05-15-04 02:41 PM

Check in, where ya at Gkillaz05 and what type of name i s that

GKillaz05 05-15-04 02:44 PM

I am here, Checkin in.. will spit soon, and hate on my name?.. lol, I could care less.. lets see these skills..

GKillaz05 05-15-04 02:50 PM

iight man, are you spittin for or blind spit or me or what?..

( Black Magik ) 05-15-04 02:55 PM

[i]Set the due date but I'm done lets set the due date for Tonight

GKillaz05 05-15-04 02:59 PM

just spit now man, dont need a due date.. will have mine up in 10-15 mins.. how about you?..

( Black Magik ) 05-15-04 03:08 PM

it doesnt matter I'm finished with my verse

Here goes

I KNOW YOU AINT GOOD, plus you''l never wioll be able to get yours FLOWS UNDERSTOOD,
Cause Blacks the tpyes you ((SHOVE JACKETS DOWN YA THROAT)) makin your THROW UP YA HOOD)),
This BOYS WORTHLESS and you prevoius battle arent helpig you get sick like TOY NURSES,
And you couldnt be (( LYRICAL DESTRUCTION)) if you deSTROY VERSES,
What I've WROTE IT HECKTIK, you'd denied my talent after I already have TOLD I"M VET BITCh,
And the type to ((CONNECT YA FEET TO YA HEADS)) like YOGA STRETCHES,
I've already had warned you that I'm oblious not the correct ONE TO TEST KID,
Cause like POWERFUL TOILETS, I'll easily CRUSH YOUR BEST SHIT,
I'll DISPOSE THIS VET, and pentrate knives iinto his spleen and INCLOSE HIS CHEST,
Cause I'm like (( GETTING FLAHSED BY REAPERS)) I'll leave him EXPOSED TO DEATH,


Explanation His crew is Lyrical Destructions, and Lyrics are in verses

I written this in like 4 minutes your done kid

GKillaz05 05-15-04 03:26 PM

Black Magik Take Back Your Whack Newb Jacket You Cant Hack It...
That Verse Was Just Horible And Only Shitty Newbs Use Brackets...
Im Dropin My Shit On You Like You Was The Crapper That Can Seat To...
I Dont Even Need To Try Because Even My Rapper Can Beat You...
Sayin Your The Greatest Wit Your Whack Flow Thats Unbelievable...
Beatin Me Aint As Easy And Wit Your Whack Flow It Aint Achievable...
Im Smokin A Guy From Youngs-Town He's Turnin My Lungs-Brown...
Got Brackets Around His Verse And Name Soundin Like A Clown...
Goin To Drown You In The Ocean, GKillaz Dont Show Any Emotion...
Once My Crew See's How Badly I Merked You I Gun Get A Promotion...

GKillaz05 05-15-04 03:48 PM

iight peeps.. time for some votes, HONEST and EXPLAINED

-bODy CoUnT- 05-15-04 04:57 PM

That was a funny style battle cuz on one hand you had Black magik wit sick punchlines but his flow was hard to flow wit. Than you had gkilla who had koo flow but lacked raw punchllines... To me its more about the punchlines so ill go wit Black Magik

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

( Black Magik ) 05-15-04 06:35 PM

1-0 uppin and this was only written in bout 10 min or less

GKillaz05 05-15-04 09:21 PM

UPPIN for votes man... lets get this battle ova wit

-SwizZ- 05-15-04 09:29 PM

Gkillaz05-Best Line
Sayin Your The Greatest Wit Your Whack Flow Thats Unbelievable...
Beatin Me Aint As Easy And Wit Your Whack Flow It Aint Achievable...

Worst Line-
Goin To Drown You In The Ocean, GKillaz Dont Show Any Emotion...
Once My Crew See's How Badly I Merked You I Gun Get A Promotion

Black MagiK

Best Line-
This BOYS WORTHLESS and you prevoius battle arent helpig you get sick like TOY NURSES,
And you couldnt be (( LYRICAL DESTRUCTION)) if you deSTROY VERSES,

Worst Line- KNOW YOU AINT GOOD, plus you''l never wioll be able to get yours FLOWS UNDERSTOOD,
Cause Blacks the tpyes you ((SHOVE JACKETS DOWN YA THROAT)) makin your THROW UP YA HOOD)),


Black Ya Structure Was Horrible.....But I Liked YOur Verse Much Respect

G-Killaz Nice Structure And Punches.....

V\GKillaz05

Metaskriptz 05-15-04 11:39 PM

Gkillaz05-Best Line
Sayin Your The Greatest Wit Your Whack Flow Thats Unbelievable...
Beatin Me Aint As Easy And Wit Your Whack Flow It Aint Achievable...

Worst Line-
Goin To Drown You In The Ocean, GKillaz Dont Show Any Emotion...
Once My Crew See's How Badly I Merked You I Gun Get A Promotion


Magic best line-Like mic said
This BOYS WORTHLESS and you prevoius battle arent helpig you get sick like TOY NURSES,
And you couldnt be (( LYRICAL DESTRUCTION)) if you deSTROY VERSES,

Worst Line- KNOW YOU AINT GOOD, plus you''l never wioll be able to get yours FLOWS UNDERSTOOD,
Cause Blacks the tpyes you ((SHOVE JACKETS DOWN YA THROAT)) makin your THROW UP YA HOOD)),
You structur was hard but your punches was alright not good balance
work on similies and fillers.........Gkillaz got this by a stronger murkin.....Simply
he had everyting includin similies metaphores balance......Also complexity....
But you came a kEYwORD=FEW stuff but work on stuff......Keep elevatin ya hott

v/gkillaz

( Black Magik ) 05-16-04 12:51 AM

*Coughs = Dickrides* anways
I kno te strutcure was horrible but how did he have punches over me

its 2-0 uppin because they ddnt vote


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