SpokenBluntly vs. Adroit
 

10-15 bars
no clit riding
no crew votes
exsplained votes
3-0 ko
first to 5-wins

LETS GOO!

aye i seen ur spits..so change that to 5-10 bars aite...one

SB

WEAK..you win
i say that you won..i like you avatar and your abs, they look tasty
can i have a bite, i guess yoiu can call me a biter. 10/10

n you sucked all over this aint a lolly ... pop hoe 0/10

return the favor, it is a hot battle of mines
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208

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FIRST OFF let me rise and apologize I didn't realize you was a *chick*/
READ YA SPIT and thought u was a typical white rapper with a short *dick*//1

YO word on the street you like to *cock* that meat i'm turning you *vegetarian */
YOU A PUSSY CAT *i cure ya rap sickness* BLUNTLY'S DA LOCAL *veterinarian *//2

*CUMMINIG* AT CHU HARDER THEN YA FATHER OVER DOSED ON *VIAGRA*/
YOU LOVEING MY SERMONS *CALL ME DA PASTOR*~ NICCA'S OPEN YA LEGS EASY LIKE A NEW *CHAPTER*//3

FLOW IS RIDICULAS~ GIVE YOU TINGLES BETTER THEN YA FIRST *SEXUAL EXSPERIENCE* with out Protection/
MY RHYMES IS SIMPLY A *CLIT INFECTION*~YOU DUE 2 DOCTOR FOR AN *EXPECTION*~YO FUCK THE VOTES *BLUNTLY KNO* SHE WON DIS *ELECTION*//4

I SNATCHED YA CHANCE~IM THE 2ND VERSION OF GAME BOY *HIGHLY ADVANCED*/
SPITS MAKE YOU *SHIT YA PANTS*~MOB TYPE SKAM HAVE YOUR LAST RIDE SCEDUALED IN AN *AMBALANCE*//5


SpokenBluntly

Aye Ohh Wop Dat Vote Don't Count Son She Didn't Even Post Yet Can We Get A Mod To Erase That Please

One (sb!!)

no ma, word on the street is that your boobs are elastic/
your just like my computer cheap, black, and plastic/

in your song your right you would need a crane/
to move your ass around cause your weight is insane/

oh no everyone spokenbluntly is shakin my frame!/
this aint no game dame that shit was lame and tame/

you always wanna start battling shit/
when the only battlin you've done is in battle ship/

why do you talk about money you don't have it/
the only place on a plane you could go is baggage/

please forgive me if i have bluntly spoken/
my words are a bat and your back has been boken/

I have to give this to my girl
spoken bluntly

She had some nice spit and she murked the mic......I liked
it.......Need a lil bit more work on structure though.....Metas
and similies was good.....

Adroit-Hot stuff to but then went down hill......Work on a few things
similies mets balance....but ya flow was hott....
v/spoken return the favor = aginast popa doc in front lines

Aw this shit was hot on one persons behalf. The other was just ok.
Spoken bluntly:
Your shit was hot shorty. Hot 2 def. Your punches was sick.
Hottest line:
"cummin at chu harder than your father overdosed on viagra
You lovin my sermons call me da pastor
Niccas open your legs easy like a new chapter."
Worst line:
I can't say you had one lil mama.
Adroit:
Your verse wasn't bad it just wasn't enuff to contest wit your opponent. You lacked tha punches but your flow structure was peace.
Hottest line:
"Please forgive me if i have spoken bluntly/
my words are a bat and your back has been broken"
Worst line:
"Oh no everybody spokenbluntly is shakin my frame/
This ain't no game dame that shit was lame and tame"
That shit wasn't cool too many basic simple rhymes in da same line homie.

vote=spokenbluntly
swing thru here and peep
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...78&page=2&pp=15

yea ima have to say that spoken won this battle she came way harder with the punches and flow.but she had some bad structure

Adroit ur punches didnt hit that hard uf flow was wack but u had good structure all i have to say to use is just elevate and u might be somthing*lmao*

vote=spoken

Damn i have to say that spoken won that, mainly beacause of the punchlines, and she had more multis and structure. Also adriot your shit was good, this is the best i ever seen u wrote, straight up, but u just need a little more work, don't give up, its just a site!!!!! Holla at me adriot, u know what's up!!!!!

vote: spoken bluntly

FIRST OFF let me rise and apologize I didn't realize you was a *chick*/
READ YA SPIT and thought u was a typical white rapper with a short *dick*//1

^^^ ouch...lol

I SNATCHED YA CHANCE~IM THE 2ND VERSION OF GAME BOY *HIGHLY ADVANCED*/
SPITS MAKE YOU *SHIT YA PANTS*~MOB TYPE SKAM HAVE YOUR LAST RIDE SCEDUALED IN AN *AMBALANCE*//5

^^^ nice wordplay




no ma, word on the street is that your boobs are elastic/
your just like my computer cheap, black, and plastic/

^^^ too simple to compete with what S.B. spit

Vote: Spoken for a way more complex verse


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