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lyrical KILLAH 05-15-04 08:13 PM

macKa vs lyrical KILLAH
 
This Is The Rulez
No Crew Votes
No Dick Ridin Votes
No Hatin Votes
u spitt first
10-15 Lines
No Feedin

?uest Logic 05-15-04 08:14 PM

WEAK..you win
i say that you won..i like you avatar and your abs, they look tasty
can i have a bite, i guess yoiu can call me a biter. 10/10

n you sucked all over this aint a lolly ... pop hoe 0/10

return the favor, it is a hot battle of mines
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

lyrical KILLAH 05-15-04 08:21 PM

wtf we aint even spitt yet and u voted aint that a dick ride???

?uest Logic 05-15-04 08:23 PM

no it aint lier...... lier lier pants on fier hangin by a telephone wire

macKa 05-15-04 08:24 PM

fuck, can we get that vote deleted? thats fucked. set up a new battle and ill blacklist this fag

lyrical KILLAH 05-15-04 08:26 PM

yo its kool i told on him and he well get banned or suspended or some shit they well remove the votes

macKa 05-15-04 08:27 PM

aight. well, ill drop in 15 minutes, u drop 15 minutes afta that, cool?

macKa 05-15-04 08:56 PM

here we go.

This kid couldn’t drop (w)raps if it was his birthday//
I got him more “shook” than Muhammad Ali during an earthquake//
So he made the battle callout and asked me to spit-first//
Coz he knows that like Cheech and Chong sharing, I “split-herbs”//
You don’t even hope-to-win this faggot aint “dope”, but I’m still “smokin”-him//
This fool couldn’t blow up if he was in a furnace soaked-in-gin//
You couldn’t make the crowd “throw up their hands” in you “dropped-the-ceiling”//
My “shots”-aren’t-healing ones giving you “nerves” like you lost-all-feeling//*
Claim to be a Killah, but you don’t “bare arms”-like-geriatrics-with-tattoos//
While you’re in trouble coz I’ve got no qualms-to-bury-faggots-and-wack-crews//
You’re a “desperate dickhead”, so any little bitch could “blow-your-mind”//
Like you’re the Giants and I’m the Patriots, you’re loss is no-surprise//
I’m “spitting flames”, so it leaves you in crisps, my tongue burnt and my mouth-sore//
My style’s-raw, your “punches” are never “right” like you’re a southpaw//**

*nerves give you feeling, so like, im giving him nerves coz he’s lost his/lost his nerve.
**southpaws are left-handed boxers.

macKa 05-15-04 09:13 PM

sorry i was late, my computer keeps fuckin crashing. i had to write the damn thing 3 times over.

lyrical KILLAH 05-15-04 09:26 PM

ayo...o....check it.....

This is tha first hit ya know I throw ya ass threw a glass window.../
Bitch ass hoe Ya rhymes are trash played out like a Super Nentindo.../
MacKa couldn't beat me even if Re$tricted give you lines for u to diss me.../
I thought you were decient i'm wrong, cause your another whack MC.../
Bringin death ta ya frame, how bout I jack you up like Debo…/
No wonder ya sex drive is gone you need ta enhance ya dildo…/
MacKa in dis battle you can't win so start givin up hope.../
Stuff crystal meth in your intestines just ta say ya flow is dope.../
I attack ya men, comin wit hard punches betta unrelax ya chin.../
MacKa u couldn't be sick if u had unprotected sex wit africans.../
I could do with some pratice but not against lyrikaly weak pussy's.../
I don't know why u wanna battle me u everlastin rookie.../
Nobody votes for your shit when you spit it give up thats gota be a sign.../
Everybody on here knew I beat you right after they read the first line.../


no beef Re$tricted i just had to use someone good on this forum

holla atcha boy!!!!!!!!!

Graphex 05-15-04 09:36 PM

macka there wasnt very much flow to your verse and not everything rhymed, you were also weak on multis.

lyrical killah, debo and dlido didnt really rhymes, but that african line took macka out

I attack ya men, comin wit hard punches betta unrelax ya chin.../
MacKa u couldn't be sick if u had unprotected sex wit africans.../

VOTE=Lyrical Killah

Graphex 05-15-04 09:38 PM

hey guys return the fav and vote on the front lines with the graphex vs boston lyricist and graphex vs godfather

DA BOY GENIUS 05-15-04 09:43 PM

MACKA: You had some great punchlines fam. The opening one with Ali in the earthquake was creative and the closing with the southpaw line. Them shits was fire. You had some good ones in between too. Your vocab and flow couldve been better but this was a great battle rap.

LYRICALKILLAH: You had a couple good punchlines but i dont think they matched up to Macka. Your flow and vocab was decent but Macka's punchlines were harder and thats why he has my vote. I also don't like how you said restricted's name in ya flow... Thats dickriding to me but i guess thats my opinion. Keep spitting fam.

Vote: Macka

macKa 05-15-04 09:43 PM

weak on multis? man, i had alot more than him. im not gonna bitch, but i dont think u really read the verses properly. coz
"arms like geriatrics with tattoos"
and
"qualms to bury fagots and wack crews"
then u got
"mouth sore, style's raw and southpaw"
all in that last line. can u show me multi's from him?

and my last line i think ripped his African line. as did
"You couldn't make the crowd through up their hands if u dropped the ceiling"
c'mon. "u couldn't be sick" lines are very played.
i really dont think u read the verses properly. i think u should in future.

Rising Sun 05-15-04 10:13 PM

macka
This kid couldn’t drop (w)raps if it was his birthday//dont make sense
I got him more “shook” than Muhammad Ali during an earthquake//meh....
So he made the battle callout and asked me to spit-first//
Coz he knows that like Cheech and Chong sharing, I “split-herbs”//nice nice
You don’t even hope-to-win this faggot aint “dope”, but I’m still “smokin”-him//
This fool couldn’t blow up if he was in a furnace soaked-in-gin//dont make sense
You couldn’t make the crowd “throw up their hands” in you “dropped-the-ceiling”//tite
My “shots”-aren’t-healing ones giving you “nerves” like you lost-all-feeling//* hmmmm
Claim to be a Killah, but you don’t “bare arms”-like-geriatrics-with-tattoos//ok
While you’re in trouble coz I’ve got no qualms-to-bury-faggots-and-wack-crews//
You’re a “desperate dickhead”, so any little bitch could “blow-your-mind”//damn,....
Like you’re the Giants and I’m the Patriots, you’re loss is no-surprise//
I’m “spitting flames”, so it leaves you in crisps, my tongue burnt and my mouth-sore//
My style’s-raw, your “punches” are never “right” like you’re a southpaw//**nice closer
your wordplay was nice and flow was good...but you need more metaphors...but tight verse...add more multies and metaphors....some shit didnt make sense

This is tha first hit ya know I throw ya ass threw a glass window.../
Bitch ass hoe Ya rhymes are trash played out like a Super Nentindo.../nono....
MacKa couldn't beat me even if Re$tricted give you lines for u to diss me.../
I thought you were decient i'm wrong, cause your another whack MC.../meh.....
Bringin death ta ya frame, how bout I jack you up like Debo…/
No wonder ya sex drive is gone you need ta enhance ya dildo…/thats good
MacKa in dis battle you can't win so start givin up hope.../
Stuff crystal meth in your intestines just ta say ya flow is dope.../nice nice nice
I attack ya men, comin wit hard punches betta unrelax ya chin.../
MacKa u couldn't be sick if u had unprotected sex wit africans.../damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I could do with some pratice but not against lyrikaly weak pussy's.../
I don't know why u wanna battle me u everlastin rookie.../ok.............nice flwo
Nobody votes for your shit when you spit it give up thats gota be a sign.../
Everybody on here knew I beat you right after they read the first line.../
good battle man but v--macka cause he was more CONSISTENT and he had more ¨wordplays¨, he came wit many styles. however, lyrical killah´s was tight too wit as good punches but some lines were really weak. your flow was better....but agian it is a hard decision....I gotta give it to¨macka for consistency sry no hate.....good battle


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