fatk4p vs. lyrical murderer
 

rules..
no hate votes
10 lines

no hate votes
no d/r
no crew votes
10 bars max
no feedin

spit first man

u cheap, so u walk into a buffet with a lunch tray and some baggees.//
i can tell when i see you with a bag of soy pattys//
keep your distance before i "pass ur ass to laughter"//
im like a calculator "wak mc subtracter"//
the only lyrics you murdered was your own//
u dont practice your rymes cause your too astounded by the chrome//
you dont box because your blows lay below//
control your flows and take a second to remake ya throws//
every time you ryme a line your nose grows//
dickryder why fight online lets take it to the phone//

Ha! fatk beating me? like fans at a concert kid you'll be reaching for the stars/
Please bitch face it you could burn down taverns and you still couldn't match my "BARS"/
This has to be a fucking joke, is fatk even a fucking certified heavyweight?/
Cause bitch your like the opposite of midgets you ain't even a fucking little "GREAT"/
Ur too "easy and played" like video games I got bored wit/
So I got an unfair advantage having seen ur lines before this/
People wouldn't decypher your rhymes if you rapped in phonetics/
You couldn't move us with your words if you were telekinetic/
you like mute cripples in debates cause against me you don't stand a fucking chance/
Ur verse like ugly chicks at beauty pagents cuz voters won't even give your shit a 2nd "GLANCE"/

Ight lets get some votes on this biatch..

iight break down!!

fatk4p

best line=no comment

worstlines=u cheap, so u walk into a buffet with a lunch tray and some baggees.//
i can tell when i see you with a bag of soy pattys//
keep your distance before i "pass ur ass to laughter"//
im like a calculator "wak mc subtracter"//
the only lyrics you murdered was your own//
u dont practice your rymes cause your too astounded by the chrome//
you dont box because your blows lay below//
control your flows and take a second to remake ya throws//
every time you ryme a line your nose grows//
dickryder why fight online lets take it to the phone//


Lyrical Murderer

best line=you like mute cripples in debates cause against me you don't stand a fucking chance/
Ur verse like ugly chicks at beauty pagents cuz voters won't even give your shit a 2nd "GLANCE"/

worstline=Ur too "easy and played" like video games I got bored wit/
So I got an unfair advantage having seen ur lines before this/


ok i think that Lyrical Murderer came way harder in this battle his flow,and punches were both better his rap was just an overall better and to the other dude ima just tell u to elevate yall both did good but lyrical came harder
vote=Lyrical Murderer

Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeee :thumbup: :thumbup:

aight lyrical murder came better why
murder-
best line-you like mute cripples in debates cause against me you don't stand a fucking chance/
Ur verse like ugly chicks at beauty pagents cuz voters won't even give your shit a 2nd "GLANCE"/

worstline=Ur too "easy and played" like video games I got bored wit/
So I got an unfair advantage having seen ur lines before this/


I dont want to say fatk4ped its alright but not that alright
close but aight......lyrical murder takes this bcuz of his puinches
they did come harder

Ight thx.. lets get more votes in here

murder return the favor in me vs poppa doc please its in front lines

this battle was definitley tight It came down to da mu-fucka wit harder punches for me.
FatK:
Your verse was hot tha flow was on point structure was hot. The only problem was your punches wasn't as hard as your opponents.
Hottest line:
"I'm like a calculator wack mc subtractor"
Worst line:
"U cheap so you walk into a buffet wit lunch trays and baggees/
I can tell when I see you wit a bag of soy patties"

Lyrikal murderer:
Your verse was hittin. Tha jabs and hooks was live dog. That's what got you this win in my eyes playa.
Hottest line:
"Please bitch face it you could burn down taverns and still wouldn't match my bars"
Worst line:
"This has to be a fuckin joke is fatk even a certified heavyweight/
Cuz bitch you like the opposite of midgets you ain't even fuckin a little great.

that's tha breakdown right there. Good shit from both of yall but...
vote=lyrikal murderer
swing thru here and check this shit out homiez
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...78&page=2&pp=15

Ight thx for the votes.. ill return da favor as soon as i can.. lets get more votes

fat4kp: Opening was average. For Closing you should've said something that rhymed with take it to the streets. Taking it to the phone just sound like you a pussy and don't want no beef in real life. Vocab and Flow need some work. I didn't see a punchline in there and its hard to win without punches. Keep spittin though.

LyricalMurderer: Got to give this vote to you because of the better vocab and better punches. Opening and closing were ok. You just had the better flow overall so I'ma give this one to you.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124582 (CLICK ON THIS LINK AND VOTE FOR THE BATTLE I WAS IN SINCE I TOOK TIME OUT AND VOTED FOR YOURS, GOOD LOOKIN)

Uppin for more votes.. only need 1 vote on this beotch..

Well lyrikal is taken this one, clearly, better punches better flow all around. Lyrikals flow was a bit harder to get through than fats but his punches hit harder. Since thats the basis of most battles it only makes sense. Lyrikals opener was also a bit tighter with the rock star bit. However fat had a nice finisher witht the phone shit, that was a nice personal.

Cause he had harder punches Lyrikal gets thsi one.

Can one of you vote on my battle and return the favour Da Vinci vs Hood General, only require one more ( i hope) or follow the link in my sig.