First Collaboration In Rb Nistory
 

FIRST COLLABORATION IN RB NISTORY
Collaboration between SPUL & TRIPLE N
Spul wrote 1st and 2nd verse, Triple N wrote 3rd verse an chorus, please give us some feedback, holla!!!!

Chorus

I dare you niggas to mumble sum
Better believe its gon get troublesom
Not one of you bitch niggas is wantin' nun
Cuz we stay chewin' out niggas like bubble gum
Blastin' out punches like automatic guns
Cookin you mothafuckas like burgers, well dun
Merkin' you all, survivors there won't be one
Cuz on this mic we stay merkin' niggas for fun



Yo, I never understood… why these niggas wanna hate
They wanna get me down… prove that I be fake
If you think that you can beat me… then fuckin’ STEP UP!!!
If you be too afraid… then go suck your left nut!!!
I have niggas in the surgery room, more times than Pam Anderson
They front too many times, so I get their asses canned for fun
When they try to spit… all that comes out is shit
Man, they betta split, cuz I’ma ‘bout to have ‘em hit
More times than they did their mom’s clit, wit their own fuckin’ dicks
My fire is now lit, I’ll have their body full of slits
Now you betta sit… cuz I’ma make this shit personal
I’ll go out for yo family… wit my heavy ursenal
To me this ain’t a game… cuz I don’t like to do no playin’
Cuz if you fuck wit me… I’ll make sure yo ass is payin’
Those motherfuckers are all gay, for shovin’ rods up their fuckin’ tushies
I’ll shove one in their mouths… and then call ‘em all pussies



chorus

I dare you niggas to mumble sum
Better believe its gon get troublesom
Not one of you bitch niggas is wantin' nun
Cuz we stay chewin' out niggas like bubble gum
Blastin' out punches like automatic guns
Cookin you mothafuckas like burgers, well dun
Merkin' you all, survivors there won't be one
Cuz on this mic we stay merkin' niggas for fun


I’m only 15, turnin’ 16, but I rip shit like I’m sixty
Nah, I’m not talkin’ about gassin’. Cuz that shit sure don’t fit me
I’m speakin’ about my technique… that runs this rap game
It is such a unique style… it’s sure to bring me fame
But I’m not famous, yet. But then again, I’m pretty young
It might be better stayin’ this way, cuz look at William Hung
They make him famous for suckin’… man, that’s a mortal sin
“WB’s Superstar”, they even make a TV show jus for him
But I’d rather prefer… to be the way I am
Cuz the rap game needs me… the same way wool needs lamb
My spits are all hot… and my style is oh so zealous
My verses even make… Eminem feel so jealous
In da club when I spit my shit… all the haters wanna fight
They try to throw themselves onto me. Man, that shit ain’t right
My rhymes are WAY tighter… than Michael Jackson’s ass
After he shoves all the dicks in it, from the whole first grade class


chorus

I dare you niggas to mumble sum
Better believe its gon get troublesom
Not one of you bitch niggas is wantin' nun
Cuz we stay chewin' out niggas like bubble gum
Blastin' out punches like automatic guns
Cookin you mothafuckas like burgers, well dun
Merkin' you all, survivors there won't be one
Cuz on this mic we stay merkin' niggas for fun


Triple's Verse
Its hard not to title me rap's next great
Cuz my rhymes are hot enuff to heat 3 states
A real lyricist nowadays is demandable
Other mc's fearing me is understandable
Cuz I was profiled on the discovery channel
An scientists confirmed… that I'm an animal
But when I'm on the mic… I'm a Lyrical cannibal
Eatin' so many niggas u'd think my first name's Hannibal
Test me if you will, but its gonna be a bad outcome
Like walkin' in a lion's nest… nigga, that's really dumb
So, the next question is where do you go from here?
You make it a profession an take it to next gear
Opposers get popped, makin' sure they drop
These are the necessities when u at the top
Protectin' myself, stay wit the mac but not talkin' bout apple
Stay gusslin' niggas an twistin' they caps like snapple


Closes with chorus
I dare you niggas to mumble sum
Better believe its gon get troublesom
Not one of you bitch niggas is wantin' nun
Cuz we stay chewin' out niggas like bubble gum
Blastin' out punches like automatic guns
Cookin you mothafuckas like burgers, well dun
Merkin' you all, survivors there won't be one
Cuz on this mic we stay merkin' niggas for fun


Alrite people some honest comments would be much appreciated, holla back!!!!!

interesting collabo

#1...the chorus was good...but you can't use words like BUBBLE GUM in rap...lol

dat sounds extremely gay


um...This was well written on both parts

Spul tried to use imagery, but fell short of painting vivid pictures like Triple N

Triples imagery was more poignant and effective

Both, however, were well done.


Spul...you had nice references..yours was more of an open mic structure than Triples, whose structure is obvisously biased toward audio


Rhyme wise..it's pretty nice


overall, this is a 7.5/10 drop

not great, but really good...


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Upppin for some comments

ok ok yea choruswas good except 4 the bubble gum part and the done burgers spul stop braggin about how ur so good 4 ur age im only 14 that dont mean shit dog ur either good or u aint ill give spuls verse a 6/10 and tripples ill give u a 7/10

it was a good collab but not the first i was feeling the chorus

Uppin for feedback

triple u did ya thing dunn i dont know about da other dude lol...GON

Now i can say for my self
that was some hot stuff you put down...
i like that
so keep keeping it real...i
believe in you
you believe in you
the hell with those who hate....1

i was feelin that it was some hott shyt keep it comin iight............................................. ......

nice job, Triple hit up my new open mic (in the sig)... a must peep beeotches, Fiya got a comeback... not bad u two, "bubble gum"= gangsta.. nice lol...

hey it wasn't jus him!!! :cussing: and LOL why you reup this?

who reupped it.. lol... SPuL u just reupped it again, by responding, here i got reuppin' this, lol... :)

damn, you!!! why you do it? :(

i did not, do it, it already was upped by the person above me! stop gettin' mad at me..

the person above you posted in June. And damn, for last time, I ain't mad at you. lol :)