Blak Siinz \\\/// Accomplishment
 

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spit by 12 midnite on may 16th

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yo check bitch

yeah yeah whatever.......*merke* cough.....check

Kill dis herb lets hope deese votes ain't bias...
...how couldn't they be...
50 post kids already got more dan one alias.../
U ain't ill, unlike me, you be lacking stars...
Your vers couldnt be sweet if u could spit candy bars.../
HAWK loogies to newbies, while i'm hitten you...
funny thing is this kid couldnt HACK it on the original.../
I'd blast this through dis kid, then make it last...
...his verse couldn't be compared...
if i only handed him half his ass.../
sendya back to original, like a deported imigrant...
killya bitch, if i fed off ya verse i'd still be full of shit.../
Despisin my game, hate the fact that i rap, and he's lame...
...cuz he couldn't be seen...
even by da two I's in his name.../
finished wit this shit, fuck it blak, take a while...
...cuz ten to one chances...
ur verse is gonna have quotes from 8 mile.../

Let's Get It Crackin
Jus ‘Avert-To-Lose’ I'm Sinistar Nobody Feelin Ya Once Blak ‘Murks-Crews’!
Dont Test My ‘Words-Dude’ I Smash ‘Herds-Through’! .. And Turn A "Faggit" Into A ‘Herb-Two’! ..

Leave Kids ‘Folded-&-Finished’! .. Turn This Bitch Into A ‘Bold-Witness ..
Test Me? And Get Slugs To ‘Show up on our Porch’ like ‘Jehova-Witness ..
Destroy Ya Face! He Can’t ‘keep-up’ Like His Pants Too ‘Hard-at-the-Waste ..
His Left Beat-Up..So He ‘Blew off Baron Davis’ To Put a ‘Guard-to-his-Face ..
Your ‘Bars A Disgrace’! .. Blak ‘Hard-To-Replace’… ‘Like a ‘Tit-or-a-Eye..
‘Split-This-Guy’! .. Plaster Ya Chest! This Bastard Vet Have His ‘Wits-In-Ties ..
I ‘Flip-Ya-Tries’! Wont Skip-This-Demise! The Flows-Intact My ‘Blows-Attack ..
And Come On Duke! Let’s Not Contradict “Hip-Hop” By Saying You ‘Know-Rap ..
Ya Soul-Will-Crack! Siinz Is Ya Idol! Steadily ‘Breakin-Ya-Vitals ..
And If This Bitch Is “100-0” Then I Kno You Aint Never ‘Takin-The-Titles..
Only "Accomplishment" you gunna achive this battle is make it 12 for you loss..
have on your knees by the end beging please like Tony Danza on who the boss..

blahh not my best but fuck it not feeling myself at allright now

Black sinz you tight bro for real i mean the shit is like that but Let me battle you so you know what competition is really like

what does murkin crews have to do with this battle

what is an herb two... just wonderin bout them forced multies

I was kinda dissapointed by this battle... I've read accomplishments battles before and you usually attack with a ferocity that wasn't here. Your closer however had me laughin like I expected so you did have a couple nice punches in there.. As for Black-- Your flow is definately nasty, you did have a couple forced multi syllables in there but it didn't matter due to the sever lack of punches in the verse. If flow was what decided this battle I'd give Black the V but since it was a battle, I gotta go on punches and Accomplishment definately had the punch in the end of the battle so I vote for him.
Please return the favor.....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124310

oh well fuck it and a Herb is a wack cat.......sumwun thinkin he the best......basically You.....i came half assed and still beat you except for the punches

ok
accomplishment
u under estimated this new kat
u had bad strcuture weak flow
fair punches
your best line:finished wit this shit, fuck it blak, take a while...
...cuz ten to one chances...
ur verse is gonna have quotes from 8 mile.../
look at that wack structure i was talkin bout^^^
overall*6* bias and alias dont really rhyme either
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black
good verse solid structure
not great punches but they did the job
^^work on your punches^^
best lines:Leave Kids ‘Folded-&-Finished’! .. Turn This Bitch Into A ‘Bold-Witness ..
Test Me? And Get Slugs To ‘Show up on our Porch’ like ‘Jehova-Witness ..
Only "Accomplishment" you gunna achive this battle is make it 12 for you loss..
have on your knees by the end beging please like Tony Danza on who the boss..
like i said^^ not great punch but nice verse better than his
alias and bias doesnt rhymes accomp
kno dat
my vote black

its aight i know you to know eachother from either.. RB original or Urban flows.. one of the two... you said you would win except for punches... BATTLES ARE PUNCHES idiot... go find the best text battler around and take alook at his structure...(Chrit) compare it to mine...

chrit aint the best text battle....man i took it easy on your ass cause of your fucking wack ass verse....mabye you should have taken Nolost4Rhyms advice when he told you about me you fucking idot

yo i gotta go with accomplishment i enjoyed his easy read flow
text flow is a hard one to assemble and everyone has there own style it seems and if its not like everyone elses its automatically garbage well if people flowed the verse instead of READING it they would determin that accomp had better fluency i thought both had some good wordplay and both had some stuffed rymes in there but overall the flow in my opinion was just a lil bit better on accomplishment big ups to both for a decent battle keep flowin yall
v-accomp

Aight i gotta go wit Blak on this 1 both had decent verse and punches on both sides were real strong both had a kinda weak structure but Blaks was stronger coz Acc i couldnt really make out where the verse ended and where it began both cats r real tight on the battle field but i think Blak had this 1 put more into it.

V/Blak Siinz

2 up still uppin for votes.... please blak siiz keep talkin