Skinz.....Tell me what yall think.....
 

Yo *i* find that people overlook,
me and *try* to take me down wit a song wit no hook,
when they cant make a tight rhyme if they knew how *to* cook,
and couldent *see* a tight rhyme if they read a poetry book,
so i bust tight verses with *curses* to make them believe,
that *within* tight rhymes like this noobies cant conceve,
and some cant seem to see past the *skin*,
*because* some people are shallow like that but inside were all men,
and *in* reality were all the same within,
and *a* person spits the same ink throught the same pen,
weather its *good* or bad,
and a *person* is happy or sad,
*theres* alwase good lyrics to be had,
and *alwase* a good person to see,
and if *sadness* is your curse then i wish you were me.

aaight tell me what yall think.......the key to this rhyme is to look at the words in *** < those so go from top to bottom just reading the words in those things aaaight.......

Peayce

yo hook it up wit some constructive critisim damn!

Yo uppin to get some reactions come on yall damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it was ok but not all that good plenty of room to elevate...........................................