.::Re$tricted Vs. Kollision::.
 

.::Checkity Check::.



~R~

Ccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccchhh hheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeccccccccccccccccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

U The 'Type To Deep Throat' For 'Free Votes' And Stay 'Perminently~Soaked~In~Semen'//
For U Grabbin The 'Mic's A Complete Joke' I 'Eat Flows' And 'Contently~Choke~This~Demon'//
The Way I Got 'Tips' They Ain't 'Dart's Bitch' They Stay 'Intense~Hollow~Festivals'//
Look This Kat Say's *He's Got Balls* It Only If He 'Accidently~ Swallowed~Testicals'//
U Neva *Cum Right* Like A 'Magical Discharge', So Keep On Your 'Tactics~Of~Wackness'//
Cuz Spittin Gets Ya 'Magical Dick Hard', Me..I Can Beat U While *Holdin Back* Like A 'Chiropractic~Practice'//

- No Real Explanations Needed..

Kinda A Keystyle Type Verse...Not Alotta Thought Put Into It....Holla!

kollision:
your structure needs much work, kinda wack, good use of multies though
U The 'Type To Deep Throat' For 'Free Votes' And Stay 'Perminently~Soaked~In~Semen'//
For U Grabbin The 'Mic's A Complete Joke' I 'Eat Flows' And 'Contently~Choke~This~Demon'//
^^ good use of multies,nice line, unfortanetly the rest wasnt that good^^^^
U Neva *Cum Right* Like A 'Magical Discharge', So Keep On Your 'Tactics~Of~Wackness'//
Cuz Spittin Gets Ya 'Magical Dick Hard', Me..I Can Beat U While *Holdin Back* Like A 'Chiropractic~Practice'//
^^^^^^ terrible line structure is wack your line was way to strecthed^^^^^^^
thats your worst line
need work on ya structure overall*6*
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restricted why only 6 lines?
your punches hit fairly hard and you had nice structure
but your punches need work
Kollision Is Wishing He Would Diminish In Vision or Hide In Prisin..
Cause Hiding Behind Bars Is The Only Way This Kid Is Fit To Risin..
&^^^^^^^^ good line nice multies and punches
overall*7*
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my vote: restricted

Restricted: You had a couple good punches in there. Your opening was average but I like your closing punch with the mints on the knuckles... That shit was clever. Your flow and vocab was there, this was a nice verse for 15 minutes... Keep spitting fam.

Kollision: Your opening was ok. Your closing line was decent but it was to stretched out to give any real meaning and power to the punch. I like your use of multis and your vocab and flow is all there but I think you need to work on the punchline part of your flow because this is what you need to when battles. Keep spitting homie.

Vote: Restricted

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124472 (COULD YA'LL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE PLEASE SINCE I TOOK TIME TO VOTE ON YOURS?? GOOD LOOKIN!!!!)

Aight...

Restricted: 2

Kollision: 0

Aiyo Hit Up My Other Verse Against Fine Mind..

~R~

Restricted.....hott stuff everything dont really need
no work........you came nice with the similies the
metaphore.......almost evrything thats all I realy have to say

Killsion-alright but not that good.....structure was
horrible/......which give us a reason for the complexoty..
everything else was nice

v/restricted

Restricted,I think you won this win u came wit some hot barz,i liked ur saying

Vote:Restricted

Nice Battle Mayne...I'm Jus Startin To Elevate......Holla

Kollision - Good spit man, your flow was hott and so was your multi's your punches were iight too...

Best Line - The Way I Got 'Tips' They Ain't 'Dart's Bitch' They Stay 'Intense~Hollow~Festivals'//
Look This Kat Say's *He's Got Balls* It Only If He 'Accidently~ Swallowed~Testicals'//

Worst Line - NONE

Re - Good spit man, awesome flow.. and your multi;s were good and punches was hott.

Best Line - This Kid Is Not Seen, Only Kollision I'm Seeing Is My Fist To Ya Face..
Punches To Embrace, Mints On My Knuckles To Give Your Spits A Better Taste..

Worst Line - NONE

OVERALL - Good battle here, both had some good punches and good flow. I gotta give my vote to Re though for better punches and a hotter flow. Koll you had mad multi's and good vocab.. but I wasnt feelin your punches as much. Work on some personals man, thats all your missin.. and you will be hott.

VOTE - Re

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124417

aite no match really here dis wuz a 1 sided win

re$tricted-nice drop merked dis cat wit ease

bestline-I'm Ripping Out Your Spinal Cord and Wrapping It Around Ya Neck..
Choking Ya Mic Source, HeavyWieght Punches KO'N This Wannabe Vet..


beat his whole verse

worsteline-none

overall verse gets a 9.6/10

it dont get no eassierrrrr

kollison-aight drop juss no match in dis contest

bestline-your structure needs much work, kinda wack, good use of multies though
U The 'Type To Deep Throat' For 'Free Votes' And Stay 'Perminently~Soaked~In~Semen'//
For U Grabbin The 'Mic's A Complete Joke' I 'Eat Flows' And 'Contently~Choke~This~Demon'//

nice start

worsteline-note really none but still lost

overall verse gets a 9/10 nice drop

U The 'Type To Deep Throat' For 'Free Votes' And Stay 'Perminently~Soaked~In~Semen'//
For U Grabbin The 'Mic's A Complete Joke' I 'Eat Flows' And 'Contently~Choke~This~Demon'//

^^^ 1st line was good...2nd line had too much filler to match the rhyme..decent

The Way I Got 'Tips' They Ain't 'Dart's Bitch' They Stay 'Intense~Hollow~Festivals'//
Look This Kat Say's *He's Got Balls* It Only If He 'Accidently~ Swallowed~Testicals'//


^^^ funny...but the set-up coulda been better


Cuz Spittin Gets Ya 'Magical Dick Hard', Me..I Can Beat U While *Holdin Back* Like A 'Chiropractic~Practice'//

^^ kinda of eh closer...


I'm Ripping Out Your Spinal Cord and Wrapping It Around Ya Neck..
Choking Ya Mic Source, HeavyWieght Punches KO'N This Wannabe Vet..


^^ strong opener

This Kid Is Not Seen, Only Kollision I'm Seeing Is My Fist To Ya Face..
Punches To Embrace, Mints On My Knuckles To Give Your Spits A Better Taste..


^^^lol...strong closer


This verse was so short, I had to search up and down the board for it.

Okay, my vote goes to Restricted because he had direct hits with the few lines he had.


Vote: RES.