MARVOLoUsJ1009 vs fine mind
 

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no dick rideing
no crew votes

aight im checkin....now u check in then i'll drop and ya verse is due with in a hour after check in or u gettin dqed

uppin man yo dunn if u dont check in..in like 5 minutes dis battle is ova

im a a buz lightning ready to drop your body down a cliff edge/
im at the stage full of poisoness rage, put you in an ovan givin u a new burnt tan/
im gonna drop you from standinding like I ran ova ya wida forklift truck/
leave you there crushing n dieing, see me laughing wid no remorse, laughing/
i'll break and destroy all bones and souls from you, bury them outside for my dog digging/
u an't a rapper more like a singer, if you were a singer u only could sing twinkle, little star/
give me your best shot, i'll remove both shoes make sure you get knocked back/
i'll take your breath away escaped into an air bag, give it back when wer'e in hell charged for devel money/
you'll be on tv as a new cartoon, like a itchy and scratchy/
watching me chaising after you wid an axe chopping you up/

i know u hope i lose my dream...u think im soft nigga move by queens-
da gun jam u still fuked fam cuzz da "hawk" a get rid of u like "abdul rahim"-
(hawk=knife)

u already know marv's da name...he's 1-10 i dont really like da target lames-
he ban from da booth all he do is spit "trash on tracks" like da "garbage train"-

its 10 in da clipp but im throwin 11,just + 1 more bullet im loadin da weapon-
and fine dogg if i kill u while "high" nigga it dont mean u goin da "heaven"-

nigga ya record is 1-10 u got some nerve tryin da ryhme-
dont make me put some in ya dome cops aint gon be able da "find" ya "mind"-

so either its dem tecs spittin or i'll aim da snub,u lil fag u aint a thug-
i'll put ya "heart on da stairs" so like "r.kelly" u could "step in da name on of luv"-

with u and rappin its wrap fam,u gon find ya moms nappin in a black van-
i'll shoot ya "pets" 2 nigga even ya cat a have da get a "cat scan"-

GON...

Marv - Good spit man, you had good personals, and some hott flow..and your punches was good.

Best Line - nigga ya record is 1-10 u got some nerve tryin da ryhme-
dont make me put some in ya dome cops aint gon be able da "find" ya "mind"-

Worst Line - so either its dem tecs spittin or i'll aim da snub,u lil fag u aint a thug-
i'll put ya "heart on da stairs" so like "r.kelly" u could "step in da name on of luv"-

Fine Mind - Good spit man, your flow was on target.. your punches was iight.

Best Line - u an't a rapper more like a singer, if you were a singer u only could sing twinkle, little star/

Worst Line - im a a buz lightning ready to drop your body down a cliff edge/
im at the stage full of poisoness rage, put you in an ovan givin u a new burnt tan/

OVERALL - This battle was one sided wit the vote goin to MARV, he had a better flow.. and his punches was hott.. and I was feelin his personals. Fine your shit was iight.. seen you do better, but ah well.. work on some personals and tighten up them punches and maybe add some multi's.

VOTE - MARV

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124417

jea....uppin 4 more votes ppl......................

hahahaha!!!This is a easy one...
Fine Mind:
Spit: 3/10
Punch:0/10
multi:0/10
flow: 2/10

I always have to tell u da same thing over and over agen...don't battle if u cant diss on da other person..czu thats all u have to do..diss on da other person unless it's a topical battle and u make some jokes in it also...

Marv:
spit:7/10
punch:7/10
multi:0/10
flow:6/10

really ur spit wasn't that amusing cuz u did't go hard on finemind...but thats coo cuz finemind isn't that much of a challenge...U could have only spit 2 bars and u still would have won..hahahaha...aight...vote Marv!!!

plz return da favor!!!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...3262post1293262

uppin 4 more votes ppl....................................

Uppin............................................. .........vote!!!!!!

marv had tha shit down ton

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^lol wow...uppin 4 more votes yo dis shit need da close 2day

yo i fuckin swear finemind has to be someone just fuckin around cuz no one is that bad for that long mods dq it if ya wanna but please i ask you look at the fuckin verse i mean geezus why do i have to explain this shit.marv coulda randomly typed on the fuckin keyboard and came up with betta shit..........................

Sup Maverllous won this shit easy in every department Find got merked..


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