Lyrical-Flamez VS. Whiteboi217
 

10-12 lines
house rules
you spit first
check in and spit quick

ok here we go.......

well I open my mouth to spit and out come flamez//
u could light you ass on fire just by sayin' my name//
you say you better then Em well you gotta get past me//
just by pulling out my gat you scream and then flee//
you can rhyme all the fuck you want just know you won't win//
unless you got a ill rapper relative who happens to be your twin//
don't get it twisted I ain't against all of the wiggaz//
you can pretend to be black or something just by pulling a trigger//
my name will come in handy right after this battle//
unless you plan to quit and go to the farm to round up the cattle//

10 lines good luck wit the verse

Pay me my money or I'll forclose on your house//
Beat the shit out of you and make a bitch of your spouse//
I got servants by the dozans and I be gettin more fast//
I bet your moms the one who be wipein my ass//
I'll have one of my mob minions shoot you dead//
you'll take two to the chest and one to the head//
I got the money I be tossin out bills//
Even though I'm white I know I got skills//
you get your pipe your pot and your women from me//
I'm a P.I.M.P. and I'll kill you with glee, for free//

aight bring on the votes people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cool now lets get this shit some votes DON"T SLEEP ON IT VOTE NOW.

aight aight lets see

Whiteboi-much better drop than the others ive seen
punches were there-personals-multis- and your struc was ok,plus you made
me laugh
bestline=Pay me my money or I'll forclose on your house//
Beat the shit out of you and make a bitch of your spouse//

lyrical-too many lyricals on this site Damn, anyways your shit was there flow
punches but i got bored with it(kinda wack) just elevate
bestline=don't get it twisted I ain't against all of the wiggaz//
you can pretend to be black or something just by pulling a trigger//

vote=whiteboi217

aight more votes only got one & 38 people viewed this battle
what the fuck is that VOTE ain't asking anyone to stand
in front on me when I know i'm gon die just plz vote.....
and don't forget to be honest

Metahs-tie
multis-tie
punchlines-tie
points-tie
Creativity-tie
FLow-lyrical_flamez

both of the verses were good, but i have to go with my man lyrical_flamez, because i was feeling his verse more!!!!!!

flow-l
punches-w
structure-tie
creativity-w
enjoyment-l

v.lyric cause i enjoyed his verse.............this was a very close battle.......both of you keep elevating and you should keep doing good........you both need to work on puttin personals into you verse and working on rewording your punches os that they hit harder....pc

hit this up please
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t<<HOT BATTLE<<

well shit flamez I thought was in for in after I read his verse, but then I read Boi's and there were no real punches throughout the whole thing. Because of that along this battle would go to flames. Forclose on your house? Your mom beats me?? WTF, you both need to elivate'n and you will if you keep battle'n read some other people to gain a better understanding. Oh, I have a battle open you could start by readin it, hehehelol kidding but anyways becuase flamez had better punches this battle goes to him .

ok here it is

flow-lyrical
punches-lyrical
structure-tie
makin me laugh- whiteboi

basically lyrical flames took the shit vote lyrical_flamez

can yall vote on my shit with fine mind i dont wanna another sleeper link not in sig look in front lines thankz

haha it's against Fine Mind I read his shit it doesn't even rhyme

aight
open/flame
multies/none
wordplay/flame
vocab/both
punches/flame
flow/flame
personals/none
structure/flame

ma vote ..Lyrical Flame wun

yo i think flamez had stronger punches and jus had a flow that really worked with it so i gota give him the win
vote-flamez

yo hit up my battle i need so votes so its no sleeper
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125379