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Quick freestyle...Feedback plz
Da Lyrical Villain
2Day i begin a new life... rippin every cat possible it starts here... My styles not based on complexity// Even if you beat me in a battle, you'll never get the best of me// Cracked cats who tested me// My dogs saw illegal rhymes so they lyrically arrested me// And the studio was my rhyme cell// I was placed there, cuz i muredered the beat when it fell// My mind flip on cats who i hate, at a murderous rate// Eatin every cat in the place, not to much on my plate// Im hungry,My appeities been way to small as of late// Movin on up in the world like the FLY in my weight// I need to be more villainous, commitin more lyrical sins// Change the frame of the world so the BAD GUY always wins// A new cat raw in this game i should be staff// Dearly departed im heartless look at your lyrical death and laugh// |
it was a shitty freestyle, just to say the least
u have basic rhymes, nuff said, work on non freestyles before u try to put poetry to words |
yea i wasnt feelin it either it needed some major improvement keep elevatin...........................
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