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:.Faceless.: 05-16-04 06:49 PM

flash \\\/// Killaconcepz
 
10-12lines
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:.Faceless.: 05-16-04 07:22 PM

7minute 8liner
 
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This 'Manz-Insane'! .. Fill Ya Glands-Wit-Pain! And 'Demand-You-Peel-Your-Veins'! ..
But i Really Gunned-a-Pound & 'Hid This Dirt Stain Unda-ground' like 'Saddam-Hussein'! ..
Defeat? Jus A Fad-For-Punks! Punches Create A "Crazy-Top Like 'Mad-Monks'! ..
I Tag-Ya-Lungs! Killa Always Been The Type To "Lose-N-Wine" Like 'Sad-Drunks'! ..
I Got 'Medication-To-Rip'! 'Dedication-To-Split' And Leave A 'Nation-In-Wit's! ..
And Killa Conceptz Could Never "Apply-Punches" Like 'Registration-For-Hits'! ..
You'll Be Facin-Many-Forms-Of-Sars! .. Born To Be 'Degrading-Kids-Pride-&-Heart'! ..
Aganist Me? You'll Be "KNEEDIN" A Virtue Quicka Than 'Rotation-Of-Ya-Avatar'! ..

fuck it 8 lines good enuf for 7minutes

killaconcepz 05-16-04 07:25 PM

Who iz dis two bit useless twit with no wit ill beat him ruthless untill I have no fistz!/ Then stab this cat wit used toothpicks im leavin this match bruisless as i twist ur body partz like a rubrix!!/
Lyrics is unconcievable and'll leave u in a herse when my verbal curse disperse/
Cut half of ur butt off so u can have a excuse fo half assin ur verse!!//
da way my werds burst u'll be leavin this unheard so ima ask u fo last werdz or statements/
befo ur left wit saiten wit brainz on da pavment ingraved in ur basement!!//
get eatin fo breakfist while u swingin ur fist bitch the way i spit acid rain/
Ill put 6 in ur knee capz fo trien to spitz harsh rapz letz see if u can "stand da pain"!!//
So why u fighten u 'll get put to jail wit no bail fo trien to battle me and fail/
Plus i got Flash so "shook" it show up on da richter scale!!//

killaconcepz 05-17-04 10:40 AM

good battlre but uppin foe victory

killaconcepz 05-17-04 01:35 PM

can i get some damn feedback

killaconcepz 05-19-04 12:03 PM

i would like some damn votez on dis.....lol

Envee 07-11-04 03:20 PM

Opener - Killa
Closer - Flash
Flow - Flash
Structure - Flash
Punches - Killa
Wordplay - Klla

Uhh close shit

V- Killa

Metaskriptz 07-11-04 03:43 PM

Flash-Nice with the multies but I think you took this because mainly
he had multies and they evened out the lines with good balance
and also prettuy average structure

Killa-Nice Drop..You came with some aight punches but
you didnt have any multies or flow because Lines was
stretched leaving with no flow and not good of a
structure to read it but I read a few lines and they
was aight

v/Flash

^Once in a life time vote

Decree Wun 07-15-04 02:27 PM

damn.


flash murdered this kid hoyl shit i saw the battle and i saw flash's verse n i was like god damn..flash had better punches better personals bette structure better everythin..jus an all around better verse

killa: you need to up ur game fam

Paris Hilton666 07-15-04 06:51 PM

Structure: flash
Flow: Tie
Punches: flash
Personals: both
Enjoyed: Both
vote: flash

for a better overall verse

roop 07-15-04 06:54 PM

Multes:Flash u took da battle with these

both punches were alright, flash took it

c mon i dont feel like breaking it down more

Vote Flash

Hitta 07-16-04 04:02 PM

flash-you merked this kid......your multis was sick as fuck......your punches hit hard and stuck....your verse was the best overall i dont really feel like i need to explain my vote anymore then this

Killa-your shit was okay but you didnt come close to matching flash's skillz in this battle.....he had it all....multis pucnehs you got koed kid


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