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Native vs. L.I.
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max. |
yo if this is a diss yourself battle than whhy dont it say so on the threadd name...g'luck....i'd much ratha go in a normal battle against u but o well....checkin in.....
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Want to just do a normal battle?
Fuck this kids league |
k then since you both agree it's a normal match then
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my verse
No championship match for native, but he still keeps braggin, it’ll go on for years…
Quit sayin you’re the best, never placed at the top, so full of shit its comin out ya ears… Respect diminished, check your cocky attitude, im better and that’s why you hate this… Nah your not the best, show gratitude, who cares if you’re a text god, we all atheists… If ya hated it so much here than leave, cause we are doin better things without you… Bein part of the hottest crew was the best thing you’d ever do, than got kicked out dude… Got laughed off old RB, so he came to relaunched, expectin to dominate… I haven’t seen anything impressive, hmm maybe he decided to procrastinate… Your not that great, face the facts, your out of your prime and falling… It’s like ya skill’s are a stick shift, cause all they do is keep stalling… yeah sometin i did right quick! |
Not one to feed, but seriously fuck this geek... I mean, thats the 3rd athiest line I've seen THIS WEEK I'll come keyed while kid bleeds, just straight G'd ^^^ Yeah thats more multis than a verse really needs So take heed, seriously... its not alarming That L.I. is only hot.... due to global warming Swarming with rights and lefts while kid is punch drunk LI strikes fear in everyone.... cause we're all afraid to suck Blah... 8 keyed... I have more important things to write for |
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why do everyone on this site say that members from old rb got laughed off so we came here. lol, Native is still on old rb and so am I. so, you relaunched fucks need to stop saying that ...... besides, if we got laughed off old rb and then came here.. what does that say about this site? |
Vote biatches
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Vote- Native
Overwhelming show of experience here. By taking a few elements of what could have been developed into a decent verse, Native took this. Obviously keyed very quickly and not great but it reads as a vet verse without vet concepts. That beats a verse with n00b eschew streched structure, non-existant flow, and played punches. |
Basically, if there was going to be a week for native to lose, this would be a good time. Too bad LI blew it... reverting to those stretched lines. A bit of a disapointment. The punches were just sort of stated... no wordplay or nice flow... just sort of there. Some personals could have been made into nice punches, but weren't. native came weak with just a couple punches, but won this one.
v/ native. |
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I hope you people know I did that by design... Why waste punches where I dont need to? |
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breakdown for L.I.:
flow:worked alright no problems with it 7/10 volcab:good not the best i've seen though 6/10 punches:some good lines i thought you got pretty personal for some of them my fav,"Nah your not the best, show gratitude, who cares if you’re a text god, we all atheists…" good job here 8/10 overall:21/30 breakdown for native: flow:my only problem was how short it was this was working well 8/10 punches:my fav line,"That L.I. is only hot.... due to global warming" didn't like the feeding off his verse i'm gonna let it slid cause it was only one line but still 8/10 volcab:good enough to get the point across nothing to special though 7/10 overall:23/30 vote--native gets my vote his flow was working better and with the two of you on par with punches flow decided this |
I wasn't feelin L.I.'s style, he had no type of flow and the stretched lines began to bore me causing the punches to stand out less, and not many hit very hard. It's obvious Native threw that together quick...it was all he needed. He kept it short and sweet yet his punches hit way harder than L.I.'s
vote = Native |
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