premination vs. vinman(self diss match)
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.
Object of the match:write a verse putting yourself
down. voting will be based on who dissed themselves the
best.

damn nigga thats gona be hard aint it

how can you diss somethin wiv no weakness?


oh well....check

fuck waitin...

y'all gettin bored by my repeative claims that im dw...
well i am...but he was wack so why shud premanition trouble~you...
reppin MM?...but im only on trial cos i failed to impress...
guess y'all don't feel me...
my first battle had two votes...n last round had one less...
fell to illtalic and now to sten cell...
hell i've got less 'hope' ere...than loose change in a 'wishin' well...
'handicap' needed....not up to 'par' i leave wiv scars....
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^^^and i'd have more chance here by spittin them barz...
wen i do audio not a soul in sight.....someone unplug the mic...
cos handin around my demo will surely boot out copyright....
0-2 already...vin ur sure to make it a hat-trick...
cos it currently seems that this old vet has pulled his last trick...
im past it....lets be honest im nothin in this game...
n i know its lame...but my worst fear is my own name...(future)

uppin ur verse....^^weird dissin yaself!

fina spit





check it look at vinamn dirty ass need some damn soap
premanition gona whip him having hang by pieces of rope

vinman cant rap............. he cant even sing
premantion walking over him vinman creamin KING(ANOTHER MERCY WORD FOR UNCLE

vinman doesnt have any damn skills doenst get pussy
when he step in the ring he act like a wussy

its not thard to diis self cuse most of its true
premantion whipping vinman untill his face turn blue








thats it that shit was stupid dirtyboy what kind off fucking match is this i no loss

^6yo dumbass should have actually tried
you suck, if you cant diss yourself, then you cant diss anyone else.
Vote preminition for actually having personals against himself.
lol
Vinman is so wack, he cant even come up with personals ...to diss himself!
v/premintion.

I think vinman should win just because his verse was so fucking bad that it's impossible to diss yourself worse than that. But actually, v/ premo for having an actual verse with punches.

"'handicap' needed....not up to 'par' i leave wiv scars....
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^^^and i'd have more chance here by spittin them barz..."

haha.. kind played but nice.

premo wins.

Premanition: Yo man as far as dissing yourself you did a pretty good job. A few of your punches hit... If this was a battle against somebody those punches wouldn't have worked but since you used these punches against yourself they worked well. You had good multi use and flow overall. Keep Spitting homie.

Vinman: Your rhymed true with blue... whussy with pussy... I don't have to go on. Man if you even had a punchline or two in there about yourself i would've took this battle into consideration but you didnt have one punch in your verse and thats what you need to win dogg. But keep spittin yo... I know this aint the type of battle that you wanted but you have to be good in all the battles given to you... just keep practicing and you'll be straight...

Vote: Premanition

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124731 (PLEASE CLICK ON THIS LINK AND VOTE ON MY LYRICALLY LEAGUE BATTLE AS WELL, GOOD LOOKIN OUT)

Vote - Premanition.......for actally having half a brain

Ok prem got it.Vin u gotta be more complex bro.U had no real good scheme u just had played rhymes.Prem was at least hitten himself some.

V/Prem

That shit was Premination all the way, the otha nigga just spit some retarded basic shit, that was garbage. I give it to Premination, for something that resembled a verse at least.

^^^half?

uppin

mah 5-0 that's it premination wins