t storm vs. troublesome
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

10

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checkin in............................................

spittin
 

hope this guys as wack as i think,,,,,,,,,

VERSE
this guy hasnt even battled on rb/
but i already know he`s no mc/
this cats record is 0-0,soon to be 0-1/
ima merk him quika than the victims of 9-11/
he only got 20 posts..he`s wack,weak and la-zy/
compared to him..ive more skill than jay-z/
this noob got no chance batlin against a real mc/
ima shock him harder than the current dc/
young ass bitch,wnt even show in this thread/
probably 2 busy watchin his mam,getin ready 4 bed/
i heard jersey gotta lotta cows,so ima milk this bitch/
this cat likes to dream bout milkin his moms tits/
so if yr ready 4 disaster,then spit sum shit n meet ya master/
but make it sick,coz ive broke ur legs n left u wit no plaster/
leave u dazed,ur fucked in ma lyrical maze..i hve u out phased troublesome/
get tha fuck outa this page,ur played...didnt even cause me no trouble-son/

Didn't I say 10 bitch? Can't you use your fucking logic?
Fuck throwin the towel, you'll need the whole linen closet
Kid's claiming to be a Storm, but he's thundering never
Knocked off of his feet, now Storms feelin 'under the weather'
I'm so clever, Trouble is godly, i'm just too good bitch
I'm shootin between the eyes of Storms like hurricane footage
You battle on some childish shit, everyone knows my style is sick
Watch as my punches break storm down like a weather analysis
Man, you're far from dope, I'll hit this fuckin' pussy
And when I get BrainStorm.....'ll probably give it to me
Overcome by fear when Trouble's near, you feeling out of sink?
Cuz i looked into the eye of the Storm and watched the pupil shrink
I keep it blunt, you flat out suck...i'm not tryin to hate
Your destined to rhyme? I'm destined to defeat this flyweight
The internet must be ya life kid, you need to take a vacation
Cuz you just been around the net too long, like 3 second violations

haha 1st off...wots 10 sposed ta mean...

SECONDLY DIRTBOY THIS CATS D/QED SORT THAT OUT HE SPAT ON FRIDAY...
THATS A NO-SHOW MAN

10 lines...and I posted 10:24 pm thursday

stop bitching and whining pussy

lets get some votes

ok
 

aiight......upin^^^^^^^
id b cool wit 10 lines........
jus include tha word LINES nxt time.....kinda helps.....

v/ Troublesome.

Strait up wittier all thru.. Storm madly underestimated his opponent.. as he said himself.. Storm`s vocab was basic.. structure was childish.. nothin` really hurt his opponent.. Trouble came personal with clever punches.. mostly original concepts.. flowed ok.. won it with ease.

Besides the fact that trouble used the same damn wordplay on storms name thoughout the verse, it was a nice job. He easily won this one, storm didn't come with shit, really.

v/ trouble

Trouble beat the fuck out of T Storm
he had better punches
he had better structure
he had better wordplay
he had more wit
thats why he wins'
t storm came like a 6th grader

ok
 

fairplay...well done troublesome.......
mine woz wack......but this cat should b d/qd

breakdown for t storm:

flow:worked pretty good lines towards the end got alittle streched though 6/10

volcab:average nothing too stand out here 6/10

punches:nothing i really was feeling some average lines mainly played topics work on this more next week 6/10

overall:18/30

breakdown for troublesome:

flow:nice no off spots great job here 7/10

volcab:pretty good better then t storm 7/10

punches:some pretty good line my fav,"Watch as my punches break storm down like a weather analysis" good job 7/10

overall:21/30

vote--troublesome

4-0 troublesome wins