iwillripyou vs. will s. unyu
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

lol
nice matchup
2 Wills
checkin in

LOL... your going to get ripped


peep the name cat

Quick keyed shit

This kids constantly striving
while this suns having
trouble breaching horizons- Seaking to die young
Hard understanding why your battling me
be like abusive locksmiths and beat your ass with a key
easy to me
you tuff until I stuff heat to your dome
bitch raps like beastieboys w/ down syndrome
clowned with poems -
not posting your expecting a loss
his verses are like old women & periods they need menapause
Get your ass kicked on some half as shit, grab as bitch
before this cat gets hit, rap with clicks,
funny im gonna win with some half as shit
Over done! kapice, ill beat you with this closer that doesnt rhyme :spit:

^^shit
didnt think he'll show
wasnt even compared!

Who is this kid?, shit, no one cares..or knows!/1
He acts tuff, but couldnt talk bold with the [b][b] code/2
This guy speaks highly of me,and I doubt he sings Soprano/3
I'll smash you will a 10 key.........
.........so just imagine what I'll do with the whole piano!/4
This kid's verse was like anatomy,all he did was Waist Lines!/5
Thought this kid was a Band Major,with all of his Played Lines!/6
Strangle this kid............just to prove it's easy to rope shit/7
And its sad having 2pac for a rapperz.......
.................is the only time you're associated with dopeness!/8
Beat the fuck out of you, leave you lyrically walkin with a limp/9
Cause his names only implies, when people are callin him!/10

this was a quick key fo real
I was hopin he no-showed

wtf @ this battle?
anyway
I'll have to go with Will S.,
he came more creative and more witty
wtf was IWILLRIPYOU'S SHIT?

BEST LINE OF THE BATTLE:
This guy speaks highly of me,and I doubt he sings Soprano/3
I'll smash you will a 10 key.........
.........so just imagine what I'll do with the whole piano!/4


LOL, This has got to be the worst!
not posting your expecting a loss
his verses are like old women & periods they need menapause
v/Will s.

1 Vote For Me
0 For My Opponent

Yeah... like kryo said.

"

This kids constantly striving
while this suns having
trouble breaching horizons- Seaking to die young
Hard understanding why your battling me
be like abusive locksmiths and beat your ass with a key
easy to me"

^ wtf. you lose.

the piano line was pretty nice.

v/ will son you

breakdown for iwillripyou:

flow:choppy worked in spots but the unbalanced bars really wrecked this 4/10

volcab:average nothing to say 6/10

punches:my fav,"be like abusive locksmiths and beat your ass with a key" pretty good job at staying on the topic was rippin on your oppenent 7/10

overall:17/30

breakdown for will s. unyu:

flow:working better then your oppenent but still room for improvment 6/10

volcab:average nothing to say 6/10

punches: fav line,"He acts tuff, but couldnt talk bold with the [b][b] code/" new idea there i liked your lines orginal for the most part 7/10

overall:19/30

vote--will s unyu

Will S. got this hands down. Iwill is wack. Will S. actually had punches that made sense.

vote = Will S.

4-0 will s un yu wins