freestyle live 2001 (not finished but feedback newayz
 

freestyle live 2001

yo im a cemincal instrument//
sent//
wit intent//
to torment//
the boys n girls//
of the world//
my rhymes so tight thy minds go in to spirals n twirl//
ill hurt you//
leave you//
wit sea through//
bullet holes//
go home n cry n play wit ya barbie dolls//
smokin chronic//
get drunk till i vomit//
aint nobody tellin me//
where to go, u go away g//
i aint not me//
u see//
my music//
blowin up like new shit//
damn tht girl fit//
yeah n i heard she got a tight clit//
n thn thres the ma x the 1 wit da bottomless pit//
i emptyed a full clip//
on a muthafuka hu tripped//
n stumbled//
rumbled//
me out his way//(con tinued i gotta go out)

dats all gd n ctha missin werd is "clit" btw lol
xxx1xxx

yo thats some pretty good shyt but to many short lines changin to 1 long line but overall hott shyt.......................