plustwo vs. mad dog
 

aight the rules r:

no feeding
no biting
no dr
no crew or h8 votes

good luck.

yo this is my check in. gimmi bout 10-20 mins 2 post aight?

yo, yo, check, check it...

This guy is called Mad Dog, he is an emcee wannabe//
you aint gonna win this battle so you may aswell look up 2 me//
this is the rematch but this time i aint gonna lose. believe it//
yo dawg go and have a bath or somethin cos u smell like shit//
yo ill be like jay-z, i got 99 problems but "this" bitch aint 1//
you aint nothin 2 me your the type of guys i shit on//
my name is plustwo, remember that, the guy that beat you//
who the fuck r u? Mad Dog? what the fuck is that, dawg your rhymes r wack//
i think im just about done with you but ill give you a couple more lines//
while your livin in iraq watch where you step, don't step on them mines//
if you made it big they would never play your single on B-E-T//
cos your a white eminem rapper, emcee wannabe//
lol im startin to repeat myself now ive got nithin more to say//
so ill leave you with a "fuck you and have a nive day"

Checkin in........................................

Ok im goin wit the beat to Jesus walks...so some1's gonna die...belie dat!...aight Mad Dog vs PlusTwo...Round 2...here we go...

(Verse)
Round 2's beginning so im initiating a victory rap to entise deminishin/
Plustwo why u rappin jus stop coz u know u dont rap...u be singin/
To a Ja beat...clappin back at enemies u KNOW u cant be beatin/ (me)
Coz plus jus admit it u a newb who should get sued/
Coz u the ONLY reason why RapBattles gets boos/
N talkin bout newbs whats up wit this :noob:/
Sittin at his P.C strapped to a boob tube/
Real gangsta yeah wit a 99p piece what he got from 'Toys R Us'/
Well heres my mach 11...lemme 'delete ur pulse'/
U the type who walks into clubs stacked wit Baking Soda/
Sayin its coke n hopin to fund ur career in rap...tryin to be like Hova/
Well the closest u'll ever get is Vannilla Ice/
U aint even on the level as Obie Trice...sry dawg im like M.O.P.../
Im as cold as ice/
Hey theres a plus side to every story and lemme tell u/
Coz after this is over...the result will be me Plus-2/ (Times i've won)

Blah

mad dog takes this due to better flow............his punches made sence and they hit hard.....keep elevating man.......we should battle sometime......work on your structure and dont use the smile face sign shit

Plustwo..........you need to elevate man...............i will give you the structure becaues yours was slightly better then his but you both still need to work on that.......aswell as both working on PERSONALS...........make your punches diret towards him and have some humerious.....that is always good......keep elevating kid.....pc

v/mad

Punchez:Maddog
Metaz:maddog (but not really any)
Structure:Plus
Multiez: None to me
enjoyment: i guezz Maddog
Overall: Maddog

Explain: Dis battle honestly wasnt even a good battle. both catz need to elevate and have better structures........and pleaze involve punches and multiez in ur posts........wats good of a verse if u dont have dat. das my honest opinion homiez...


do me a favor and drop a honest vote on my battle 2

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208

vote
 

Blah

mad dog takes this...he had beta flow...harder punches.......jus work on ya personalz...u getin beta dogg.id also say work on ya structure a bit..i find it hard 2 follow sumtimez


plustwo..........u had gud structure..easy to follow n it rhymed...but u had weak punchez...u gotta make them personal...keep elavatin......als u need beta wordplay

v/mad
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aight thnx forya help... uppin for votes!!! mad dog your good

Both Batlles Were Very Weak. Yall Need To Work On Ya Structure. Nonetheless Both Were Not Rollin Off My Tongue.
Mad Dog Had Better Punlines His Hit Harder.

Plustwo Urs Was Boring To Read. Just Keep Practicin' Thats Wahts I Say To All Textcees.

Overall: Maddog

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123944

Aight thanx for the votes yall but we need mo up in here this is the first uppin of this thread!!!!!

Mad won this easy I think, Had much better punch's, Plustow flow was good
but thats about it. Are you from the Endz ? Plaistow man ? shitt Hold it up...

Any way Mad best punch
Coz plus jus admit it u a newb who should get sued/
Coz u the ONLY reason why RapBattles gets boos

Plus.. Didn't have one really sorry man...

Mads punchs won this battle but if Plus had better punchs I think I might have
been a different story..

aight
 

mad dog took it. had punches that hit harder, not much but enough to take it. plus- your flow was way off too.