Shamira Vz Pimp Rawb.....VOTE UP!!
 

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4 votes win
once the person drops his/her verse, then the other person has 48hours to drop thier's, if they don't within 48hours, the person who spited first won!!!!!

Im waiting for u to spit...lets get it on!!!!!!!!

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.......INTRO......

Try And Step-With-Me!...They Call Me Vasectomy Cuz Iam Stopping-Ya-Flows… Pimps Dropping-Thiz-Hoe CLAPPING And Popping-At-Shows/-1

......BEATING!......

Picking Up A Test Tube Baby U Still Couldn’t Hold Da Solution, Iam Kill U Like Da Nick Berg Execution…Just So You Can Hold Ya Head-Up-High/OMFG!-2
Ya Wonna See Shells?...I’ll Put Lead-In-Ya-Eyes I Aint Cellulite But I’ll Put Holes In Ya Legs-And-Thighs/-3

......MURDER.......

Ya Rymes-Are-Jokes Mines-Choke…Pimp Rated “Parental Guidance”…So Iam BLIND-Ya-FOLKS/-4
I Derange-Ya-Spine Take Ya Brain-N-Grind…Exchange It Wit A Chickens So You Can Change-Ya-Mind/-5
Ma Bars-Do-Harm Will Scar-Ya-Arms…Dawg Ya Trippin More Than Faulty Car-Alarms/-6
Iam Easily Pick Up Your Drop Like Litter-Men, Your Verse Wouldn’t *SPARKLE* If You Wrote It Wit A Glitter-Pen/-7

...... :shoot: FINISH HIM OFF!!! :shoot: .......

I Fire Bullets In Da Ass-Of-Thiz-Asshole And Give Him A De-feat Like A Slashed-Metatarsal /-8
Pimp Classed-Remarkable, Iam A Blast-At-Sparkle…Cuz He Couldn’t Be Gifted If He Won Pass-Da-Parcel/-9
When U First Joined You Stuck Wit Tha Name Shamira But We All Know Ya Just Miss Spelt Shakira/-10

DAMN!! straight fire right there...nick berg line was on point!

Physically and mentally, I will kill u , with out energy, I’m loyalty//
So acknowledge me, without hesitation, I study your body like astronomy//
U want collaboration, while I’m waiting for your assassination, 2 shots that’s what u facing//
I shamiranize rap like assimilation, with out demonstration, this bitch is complaining, its sounds like deceleration//
You style is a prink, I make ya ribs the size of beef franks, clicking on ya body like links//
Making ya blood line extinct, hypnotize u can’t blink, in all reality your shit stinks//
Brainless which I call nondescript, my rhymes are manuscript, protected like a bandage, pimprawb is a cut without establishment//
Your career will not last, suffocation u can’t gasp, life snaps like cameras flash, instead your like M.J kids wearing a mask//
Come on with the awards, u look like a dork, how I got u hanging from a tree with your mom’s ability cord//
My styles are jadakiss, catch the bate u little fish, got your ass speaking in tongues bitches thinking u religious//
my name will always be shamira, so now im making the bitch clearer, by fucking up your reflection, just like a mirror//(when u look in the mirror its like...blah)

You style is a prink, I make ya ribs the size of beef franks, clicking on ya body like links, making ya blood line extinct, hypnotize u can’t blink, in all reality your shit stinks//*****

This battle wasn't even close! PimpRawb took this battle in every breakdown! Which is opener, closer, wordplay, and punches! Shamira elevate your skillz & keep your head up!

Vote: Pimp Rawb!

nice battle pimp needs to worrk on his structure and he'll be iight....iight??

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YALL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE I JUST DID OR ILL BLOCK YALL AND WONT VOTE ON YALL SHIT NO MORE heres the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...7006post1297006

the breakdown...........

Pimp took this by a long shot his flow was Maddd off the hook especially his opener and after that he kinda took my attention
8/10

shamira your shit was koo but i wasnt feelin it,,, it didnt compare to pimps flow and structure and WORDplay which took over the battle
5/10
V=Pimp Rawb

yo the berg line is maddd disrespectful yo on da realz yall need to check yo selves at somepoint this 9/11 rappin shit and now this STR8 GARBAGE YALL SHOULD BE ASHAMED MAN HE LOST HIS FUCKIN LIFE ...........DO YALL GET IT

Pimp had this one without a doubt, even though Shamira didnt do bad at all. I think you need to just keep doin yo thing and elevate. Youll be aight. My votes for Pimp

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pimp-Nice spit........You came hard and weak with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and
metaphores......just work on a few things and ya will be there......

shamira-Came kind of weak....Work on something structure was ok
but work on some thing.....balace was good but some was
weak and some was hard.....But keep elevatin and work on alot
of things


v/Pimp

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