plustwo vs. youndkd33
 

aight the rules are:

no feeding
no biting
no d/r
no crew votes
no h8 votes

10-15 bars max

good luck...

yo yo yo...

so they call you youngkd33,
dawg you aint got what it takes to battle me,
you think your bad youve just bin had, thinkin your good dawg your sad,
come back when you have can actually rap,
look at your mobile phone its that old it doesn't have WAP,
look at my record, thats about to change,
all these rhymes i could use against you its very wide ranged,
this is the one... my breakthrough,
once im finished with you youll be nothin your through, (beat)
youngkd your about 12 years old,
when was the last time you washed your dick its starting to grow mould,
you need to grow up and come back when you think you can win,
your dick needs to grow, its no longer than a pin,
ok now im nearly done,
look at him this battle is already won.

I'll spit quick ta lay this weak rap dude to "Rest"/
This verse has got me laughin its like a "Uneven Boxing Match" so i don't need ta give my "Best"/
This is "War" i just begun and this "Young Gun" don't want no "More"/
I saw ya record and now i know why this guy is "0-4"/
My lyrics are burnin this meek freak like "Over Grilled Meat"/
Chop ya body in "Pieces" for tryna be me...so I'd like ta see you "Walk In My Shoes" now "Without Ya Feet"/
Leavin ya "Hurt" this "Verse" has you feeling the "True Essence" of "Gettin Burnt"/
I guess you pre-judged and thought you would win but the like "Bar Fights" the "Tables Got Turnt"/
Plustwo spits like "Water Stuck In Lakes" ya flow ain't going "No Were"/
Lifes not "Fair" and this is an example of the "Sorrow"/
So like encouragement from ya new lose to make you "0-5" better luck "Tommorow"/

uppin............stop sleepin ya'll we need some votes on this battle...!!!

breakdown

multis: none
metas: kd
flow: kd
complexity: kd
vocab: kd

winner: youngkd33

fav line of battle:
Chop ya body in "Pieces" for tryna be me...so I'd like ta see you "Walk In My Shoes" now "Without Ya Feet"/

good battle i've seen somee nice battles on this site.......

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young won this because he had better structure, punches and just better verse overall. I thought the other verse didn't flow very well nad had nasty punchlines for it to be offended or evem take you serious. young won dis quite easerly with his rymes n punches. No hard feelings

uppin....on this 3-0 me so far.....stop sleepin uppin for votes

Young Kd Takes Thiz One In Every department Plustwo Try And Work on punches, Structure etc.

And Kd Try And Be More Complex


Return Da Favour In Tha Battles In Ma Sig

^^^ there was no need to come that hard with complex shyt fam...Rawb you know how i usually do...uppin

YoungKD33 Nice battle i think u won this u had some good rhymes maybe next time u win if u come back (plustwo)

vote-YoungKD33

upppinnnnnnnn..................................... .....

yound i thought u did betta period , plus2 just revise u words my friend