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{D.N.A.} 05-17-04 02:09 PM

fine mind VS Phisyque
 
10 linez
1 post
you got untill the end of the day to post.
you up first you made the callout.
no feedin no bitin or any of that sh*t

you should know the rest...

lyrical distruction 05-17-04 02:29 PM

physique is gonna get ran ova like an iron steamed over flattened pressed/
after that'll i'll be removin both of my adidas shoes, and beat you dead/
spend all ya money givin it away to out-siders, who come back and burn ur house next week/
wateva, man im gonna murder you this week, killing you with a feather/
force feed it down you like stabbing your wind pipe on the way down there/
I got the flow of god, that'll drop you dead instantly, dangleing upside-down like a swing lifted you/
im differan't to you, i mean better looking dumass, understand this/
you couldn't be seen without a theifs stocking, hideing yourself from your future wife/
fuck your life, turin it into a spiteful life, fuckin weaken your energy resorce, rippin out ya voice box/
fuckin hoe i'll burry you in the forrests, create you a new buddy a peice of timber with a smiley face on it/

{D.N.A.} 05-17-04 02:59 PM

ayo

Fine Mind'z [Born a Loser] Now hiz OCCUPATIONZ haz finally been Employed/
Ill cut ya neck like an Umbilical Cord, and replace ya Life Line wit some Critical Hemroidz/(You strain to even try)
Ill swing Punchez till ya {Lungz-Done} Collapsed from knucklez Connectin/London
Ill Buckle Weaponz, and leave Europe under the Impression of a Nuclear War Lessonz/(WWII)Adolf Hitler and the Nuclear War
Shady Life, ill leave you in Shadowz and replace ya Mental Existence/
Ill Erase any Dental Rememberence, and Exchange it wit Mechanical Pistonz/makin up stupid sh*t now
Leave you in a [South Park] and [Cart] thiz [Man] to the Nearest Hospital/
Ill pay ya Doctor billz, Thatz only cuz i waz tha one that Locked ya Skillz/your verse didnt rhyme so i didnt come that hard.

{D.N.A.} 05-18-04 01:36 PM

uppin for theze votez ....

{D.N.A.} 05-18-04 02:50 PM

uppin .

{D.N.A.} 05-19-04 01:46 PM

uppin .

-O- 05-19-04 02:52 PM

aaight, this was kinda close,

Fine- I like your structure better, and you had original punches, they just wasnt that standout.. seemd kinda wordy as well...but not a bad drop

Phi- I liked your punches better they were also original wich is nice to see...your opener was waaaay better, didnt care for the closing too much, but all in all a tight battle...nice drops both yall...

Vote = Phisyque

I got an audio battle that neeeeeeeeds some reeeeaaaall votes its -O- Vs SenseR my link wouldnt work or I would have put it up....

nice battle fellaz

kEtCh~22 05-19-04 03:11 PM

Fine Mind'z [Born a Loser] Now hiz OCCUPATIONZ haz finally been Employed

^^^liked this...

I jus ain't feelin find mine's shit..when u got bad rhyme schemes it fuks up ya whole flow..wasn't the best battle but i'll giv it ta physique..1

{D.N.A.} 05-20-04 01:39 PM

uppin .

{D.N.A.} 05-22-04 05:35 PM

uppin .

K-Trin 05-22-04 07:07 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125921
^^vote

Damn fine mind...ur shit barely rhymed.So flow easily went to Physique.As for punches...same thing as flow.Terrible by Fine Mind...good by Physique.I gotta give this shit to Physique.One-sided batttle.

Vote-Physique(drop a vote in my battle)

Lyriclesolja 05-22-04 07:57 PM

aaight yall this was a very weak battle but it was pretty much even..

Fine Mind-u have elavate up a level since your last battle i see, but you still need to learn, try to end every sentence wit a rhymin word and dont just use 2 words expand your vocabulary and pick up a dictionary and keep practicin.

Phis.-your verse was a little better than fine mind's, try not to make your lines so long and even them out, and work on your vocab. try to use more than 2 rhymin words....
and the biggest problem i had wit yours was that you said "your verse didnt rhyme so i didnt come that hard"<<fuck that alwase come hard so you can be sure of the KO cause even now fine mind might get some votes..

So saying that i vote for Phis.

aaight i did an honest vote for yall now PLEASE return the favor on my battle..
its on the second page its LyricleSolja Vs. Cinco

Peayce

K-Trin 05-23-04 09:57 AM

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...095#post1307095

I already voted in this battle....but Physique...you didn't vote in the poll in my battle.Go now and vote in the poll.

LyricalMethod 05-23-04 10:14 AM

Phisyque gets my vote b/c his verse was more mentally sound. his verse made more sense. even thought it was kind of weak though. both verses sucked, fine mind your my nigga but you got killed next time write something that makes more sense. both you need to elavate. return the fava

vote=Phisyque


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