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baby_gal 05-17-04 03:03 PM

Read This Soon As Poss And Feedback Plz!
 
Listen ya'll//
Read carefully//
Dont mess wid me//
Just follow my style//
dont be walking the green mile...........

Time has changed//
I dont need noone to lean on//
You was listein to me and thought I shone//
You werent wrong baby//
I aint gna go shady//
Infronta any of yo niggaz//
Im gna carry on dis game till sumink figures//
Still got the marks on my fingertips//
The mast has fallen off your ship//
Your thinkin all ur game came from glory//
u try n tell me..blah blah blah....GREAT STORY!//
I dont need to know the details//
Just when how and were//
Dont you worry ill be there//
If hes a buff guy I aint gna share//
I dont play fair//
just fuck all night and get levitated off ur feet//
Dont worry... im smooth I use veet;)
I'll do anything if u cover me up with a sheet//
Cos I liek it rammed up//
Ya'll should get me..........
Peace;)


:laugh2:

ooooweeeeeeeeeeh 05-17-04 04:06 PM

dat was kl

~Babylon~ 05-17-04 04:28 PM

it was real basic girl work on that shit.............

~Babylon~ 05-17-04 04:30 PM

you need to leve bars together dont seperate like that............

baby_gal 05-18-04 01:43 PM

aaaaa Everyone is tellin me ta do different tings wid set out hehe

Soul Sickness 06-02-04 01:18 PM

lol jus work on ay own game but try to take some of the pointers of the people on teh site like u need to make ya lines rhyme more iight....


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