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baby_gal 05-17-04 03:23 PM

Dont let love pass you by
 
Just remeber the times you were together
Think about it all the way u fell in eachothers arms// now
All it was, was lust, A teenage relationship blown away like dust
Everyones making such a fuss
It wasnt if you loved him thaat much...............

Just put your head back
listen to the sounds of my rhymes
There all of this time

Youve had, 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 no 9!
The longest relationship was about 2 weeks, how week
You have to take the advice, others give you
Make a date of the first issue
When you break up, you wont need a tissue
cos il lbe there, to guide you EVERYWERE so dont u dispare or let love pass you by

Metaskriptz 05-17-04 03:27 PM

LOL.......it was aight.......Nice is good as mine though ya know.....Sike just kiddin I liked it though.....seem like ya gettin into the lil love poet stuff......LOL

baby_gal 05-17-04 03:32 PM

hehe, I know I didnt know what else ta put, Iw as bored so randomly posted some random stuff lol
xxx1xxx

ooooweeeeeeeeeeh 05-17-04 04:02 PM

dat was k babe not ya best u gotta keep wishin to progress

ooooweeeeeeeeeeh 05-17-04 04:03 PM

i didnt realised dat ryhme only jus now

baby_gal 05-18-04 11:12 AM

lol, what da hell???

Lil Slippa 05-18-04 11:17 AM

It was straight..Some Romeo and Juliet shit.

Soul Sickness 05-18-04 02:14 PM

it was iight but u need to realy work on them rhymes that 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 no 9 line that was no good to long and didnt have a folow up but over all pretty good


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